About Becoming a Succubus in the Underwater World

This book is really good to read, especially when it describes Lu Bu's hundreds of rounds of battle with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring + Noxus guillotine, this wave of M4 would have fired six times Must die. In addition, I prefer what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man is so proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. In short, The plot of this book is interesting, the system is clear, there are many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are like being there, and the character descriptions are spot-on!

Teammates hope that Bei, who is all female, will never enter the shell, and other males and females should not enter casually, otherwise it will feel a bit awkward [awkward laugh] After all, the inside of a shell is considered part of the body.

There are only dozens of chapters so far, and I can read it in one go. No other online article uses numerical values to increase word count. The author updates it two to four times a day. The writing style is pretty good and the plot is reasonable. I am very much looking forward to the follow-up development. Suggestions: 1. Don't forget some important roles. Reading some other authors' writings, it feels like there is one less heroine. I'm a little worried about the title and early development of this book. 2. Innovation in plot content and mechanism. Undersea survival + siren (personally think it can be roughly equal to beast mother). We are really afraid that such a good article will be eunuch because the subject matter is ordinary, but judging from the front, the author should have his own plans, and nothing has happened so far. Anyway, come on author, I'm optimistic about you (Reasonable discussion is welcome, I am a primary school student and I value "reciprocity")

Seeing that it should be a harem story now, there is a human girlfriend with healing powers, as well as deep-sea banshees such as shells, toothed sharks, jellyfish, and sea hares. Each character is unique and has its own combat characteristics. The overall team has both healing, defense, and group attack combat capabilities. It is a very good doomsday harem story, especially the favorability system is very interesting.

I came here to be a monster girl, why did I add a human heroine (sad) [crying]

It's okay. I kill when I need to and I don't completely lose my morals. I don't want to read a post-apocalyptic type of novel that is too violent and basically kills, kills and kills. I hope the author of this novel will be more daily, not to be a yandere, and try to eliminate the poisonous points of the harem. In fact, I think it would be better if the information eye is a woman. In many cases, if you write beautifully, you can just take the harem. I feel that I have quite a talent for it. Use it. There are more stickers. I am quite surprised that there is a human heroine. The races are all complete. It is okay to be all banshees. But I still like this human heroine. It is the first one after more than 90 chapters in the training. And the author, didn't you say that some banshees have lower bodies that are not human? How did you teach and train them? I am not a Furui control and hope to be more anthropomorphic under the conditions of racial characteristics.

It's very interesting, but I still want to watch the teaching training [laughter] Here are a few small questions: When will the octopus siren in the introduction come out? There seems to be no royal sister type among the current sirens; will other female humans be added to the team in the future?

It's awesome, but there is too little education and training [laughing evilly], you know the author

Damn it, I didn't notice, it turns out there are multiple people trying to survive. After walking away, I thought the protagonist was alone.

I was expected to be killed. After all, it is a bit too clear. After all, the writing process here is not without barriers. Unless you are very popular and can write not too much, you can only write small hints or outlines.

One of the few multi-female stories in Tomato that I can keep reading. I like Bey very much! The clingy girlfriend is the best. It's the first time I've seen a story that takes place in the deep sea. The plot is very exciting. I'd rate it an absolute 9+ in my heart. Eh! I have a question 👆 The profile says Octopus Banshee. She's 135 and hasn't appeared yet. Instead, the odontodon and sea hare came first. Could it be that the male protagonist has fallen into the illusion of the octopus succubus from the beginning, and all this is fake [Thinking]

The subject matter is very novel and the content is very interesting. I'm really looking forward to the succubus and the emotional development. The protagonist's character can be improved and become more three-dimensional. Come on. Come back and remind me to update quickly, I know you can see it [laughing evilly]

The concept of this book is okay, but since it is about survival, I hope the protagonist will not be too kind.

It's pretty good, nothing too toxic. The background of the harem story is a bit classic about controlling the world submerged in the deep sea, but it's pretty good to watch. The protagonist is a bit too weak and relies on fighting in the harem to make ends meet. I feel like the protagonist should be given a boost in strength. The harem starts with at least seven or eight humans, and the rest are all undersea creatures and monster girls. Anyway, it's pretty cool to watch.

It's very nice, but the protagonist's talent doesn't have the word "Unique" written on it. Does that mean there will be people with the protagonist's talent later on?

You can take a look, but there is no need to arrange a human heroine when there is a banshee who can monitor likability and don't have to worry about backstabbing.

Come on, author, you are already great now, you can keep it up, believe in yourself

You can use that banshee fighting power to kill people and get inheritance. Don't just use it as a shell shelter.

It seems very good so far, I hope the author will continue to persevere

There are only two words "education and training" in the whole article.

Personally, I feel good about it, but there are some contradictions in the context, but it doesn't matter. Overall it's good, at least it's readable. The writing is a bit polished, but not much, so what about the teaching and training sessions [awkward laugh] The content is not bad. As long as the content is good, it can be used as a dessert in your spare time [blowing kiss]

The author can win the resurrection competition

No, the author only updates three times a day? Hold on, poet, this book is so beautiful, why don't you update it hundreds or thousands of times a day on August 9, 10th?

Kids, this isn't funny, it's like censorship

I originally wanted to sweep the grave, but I didn't expect that I actually came back to life [laughing and crying]

Great, it's the teaching and training of immortals. We are saved.

Yes, author, keep up the good work, ten million! Don't interrupt updates

Finished reading I analyze the reasons why the author does not update: ①: This book has been criticized (see the comments mentioned), and then the author wants to give up the book ②: Some people thought that the male protagonist might be raped, so the author gave up the book due to the effect of being "criticized" ③: It's possible that something happened and I didn't have time to write it down.

It's quite good-looking to me. Come on, author, please update soon [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

I finished reading it in one sitting and couldn't get enough of it. The subject matter is novel and I can't stop [laughing]