Shock! an Ancient Man Has Come to My House!

It's quite nice. The advantage is that it's a short story that's suitable for people who don't have much patience. The writing style is also good, it's not a verbal novel, and the characterization is also good. Maybe it's because it's short, so the pace is fast. It's just right.

A very interesting subject matter, the setting is also good, the narrative interspersed with ancient and modern times is not too confusing, and the whole text has a complete logical chain. It's a pity that it's too short. Some chapters in the middle are expanded and written more. The plot after the return of the old general is a bit messy, but generally the author's ingenious conception can be seen.

Among all the same time travel articles, this article is a breath of fresh air, so different and unique. That's great, don't be so stingy, give it more! It's so uncomfortable to read one chapter every day after waiting so hard.

The content is novel and interesting. The heroine helps the hero save an era, but I just don't understand where the heroine's money comes from? Although the male protagonist gave a lot of gold and silver jewelry, it is not so easy to exchange them for money in modern times, not to mention there are many, and it is difficult to say the source.

I don't know why the rating is so low. The writing is very good. The logic of the article is relatively rigorous. The description of many scenes is also very consistent with daily life. Unlike Yi's novel, I couldn't read it after reading two chapters. Either the plot is exaggerated or there is no common sense in daily life.

After reading it, I still feel comfortable reading short stories, but I get bored after reading long ones. The fight with relatives at the beginning is not good, but the rest is good, and the ending is also very happy~

Fortunately, the pace is relaxed and the length is not long. I finished it quickly [laughing awkwardly][laughing awkwardly]

It's a sweet story. Except for the first few chapters, the rest of the book is very fast-paced and can be read in one go. It is recommended to watch. The ending is very happy, the heroine's parents are also in ancient times, and the family is reunited, happy ending.

The subject matter is quite new, the author's writing is not bad, there are no logical errors, and Mouse Chong can read it. It's worth watching. No loss in investing.

It's pretty good-looking, at least it's not sluggish.

Interesting little story, I won't want to give up the article in the middle and later stages

I started watching it at this time last night, and now I have finished watching it. It communicates with the most difficult ancient times. I like the male and female protagonists to be straightforward and not secretive. Otherwise, I wouldn't have written 1,000 chapters of Haitang's marriage. I have been wondering about the ending of the two of them. It is unexpectedly perfect. I finished it in two days without blocking.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking. There is no update at the critical moment [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

The happy and comfortable life we ​​have today was obtained with the lives of countless ancestors. Cherish the happy life we ​​have now, and wish the motherland prosperity and the people live and work in peace and contentment.

It's all together, but it's too short,,,, and there could be more expandable content.

The imaginative concept and plot are pretty good, but the ending is too sudden.

It's okay. It's a smooth read. I guess there's no explosive point at the beginning, so I won't be able to keep people interested. I'll give it five stars. I hope the author will keep up the good work.

The ending is too sudden! But overall it's quite nice [sending my heart] Looking forward to a new post~

It looks good and makes people want to watch it.

It's pretty cool. The male and female protagonists can travel back and forth between ancient times and modern times at will.

Good-looking~good-looking! Like! A different time travel story😍

Hahahahahaha, Zhankeng's first book review! ! It looks good and feels very interesting. Although I can't get enough of it because it's new, I think this one makes me want to follow it.

The subject matter is very good, but the rating is a bit low. Not a word of nonsense, recommended!

It's very interesting, I'm really looking forward to the follow-up!

It's a new movie, it's exciting, it's great to watch, it's too early to get into the trap

Different and wonderful, I like it very much,

The plot is light-hearted and the length is not long. It is worth reading. I don't know why the rating is so low.

Yes, the writing style and ideas are excellent.

It's beautiful. I'm so sleepy now that I've stayed up all night [crying] It's so beautiful.

There aren't that many top quality characters, and the characters of the male and female protagonists are okay. Although they are not long, I think they are still very good-looking.