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The front part is quite beautiful, but the back part is inexplicable. Take Xuanyuan Xue. As mentioned before, she is so powerful and she has survived the tribulation. However, after coming to the world of the protagonist, it feels like just one person can press her to the ground and rub her. There is also the Demon Sect Saint. How do people in this world know about her? Inexplicably, she said that only she could save everyone. How did people from these two worlds know each other? Starting from Chapter 30 or so, I think it is understandable that the protagonist cannot defeat those monsters. After all, he is a monster in the world of cultivating immortals. It is normal for him to be unable to defeat monsters in this world. Starting from Chapter 40, this Xuanyuan Xue killed a few minions and then was pressed to the ground and rubbed. Do you want your combat power to collapse so completely? It's obviously described as being so powerful in the world of cultivating immortals

It's actually the first person. It should introduce the character's process and experience, what worldview he is doing, etc.? You have to have a worldview no matter what.