[Slow pace] [Not a cool article] [Single female protagonist] [No system] [More daily] [More original]
What? Just after finishing the college entrance examination, he traveled to the world of Naruto where war and wall hangings were raging together? I've never seen Naruto hug his thighs!
Do you want me to be your thigh?
...
What? You want me, a little ninja with no golden fingers, no blood inheritance limit, and no family resources, to blow up the Kamubi Bridge?
I didn't expect that you, Sarutobi Hiruzen, with thick eyebrows and big eyes, would be just like that old silver coin Danzo, trying to trick me every day.
...
What? What you just gave me to drink was not glucose, but the blood of the White Snake Immortal?
I still call you Uncle Snake. Is this how you tricked me?
...
Hanamiya is tired. Whoever wants to do this ninja job can do it. I want to travel around the world!
...
[Follow Wanshan's footsteps and experience the ninja world with different painting styles]
Reader comments
It's a very good book. It's a breath of fresh air in Tomato. It's not a cool book, it's really a slow-burning one. It's really interesting to pass the time.
The protagonist's combat power system is mainly based on the "Senjutsu" of the Fire Temple and the Hana Ninjutsu passed down from his family. At present, the follow-up plot is estimated to have two lines, one is a travel line around the world, which may intersect with other villages, and the other is a normal plot line to improve his own combat power. It is a very novel way of writing, and I hope to continue to maintain this aspect.
There are a few small problems. One is that there are not many battles, or there are not many normal battle plots, resulting in unclear combat power levels. The protagonist currently prefers to have strong auxiliary abilities. He has not fought many specific frontal battles. It may not be until the beginning of the third battle that there will be a patch in this regard. Another problem is that some of the plots are confusing to read. If you follow them all, you can probably understand what they mean, but when you look at that section temporarily, it will be a little incoherent, such as the Aburame characters and the plot of the latest dozen or so photos. Finally, the age of the protagonist is not very clear. I still hope that when the plot progresses, the age will be mentioned, so that the protagonist is older, more than ten years old, and occasionally can travel and practice to jump in time.
This book has something that many Naruto fans don't have. It also has a good plot setting, that is, can the protagonist stop doing some more obscene things? But other than this, the rest is very good and worth reading. I recommend it.
I am a new author, please be tolerant of my shortcomings. I wish you all Daniel Wu, Peng Yuyan and Liu Yifei a happy reading.
I have read the latest chapter 94 so far, and the reviews highly recommend it. You can understand it even if you have not watched Naruto. The emotional scenes are very delicately written, unlike other Naruto fics that always spontaneously combust for no apparent reason. There are some original plots that fit well with the original works. They are logical and not brainless, and they are also refreshing. The shortcoming is that they are not exciting enough (bushi) [laughing evilly].
Not bad, but the main character is too precocious. A four-year-old is a bit too strong
A 4-year-old child always says things that others don't understand and always makes jokes about the real world. It's so ridiculous.
It's a very novel way to write about Naruto. It's very interesting.
Who does the author plan to choose as the heroine?
Writing Temple of Fire is your first
Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking
The author's writing is good and the plot is not assembly line. You have to use your brain when reading.
It's very beautiful. I hope Wanshan can become stronger and fulfill my wish to travel around the world.
It's pretty good, different from other Hokage fans. I hope the author can update it every day. 😁
Looks good, cheers for the author [Like]
A very good book
: Bees died picking flowers, Liang Shanbo died for Zhu Yingtai
Not bad, much better than most
The author's writing method is not described in the original Naruto. Fan fiction that can expand the world view is really good.
The book is okay, not a good book for Naruto fans to read.
The writing is very good. I don't know if it's because of the new rating. I couldn't imagine that a clear stream only scored 6.4. I enjoyed reading the whole process. I have read almost a thousand novels since elementary school. I definitely don't believe it is a problem with my aesthetics.
Okay, it looks comfortable and gentle, very good
It feels so comfortable to read 😔 It's really slow to warm up ღ(✞╹◡╹✞)றThere's nothing wrong with it for the time being, it's pretty good.
Super good-looking Naruto, the relationship between fathers is a very new theme
It's nice, but the word count is a bit short.
It's four o'clock and I still want to watch it. . .
It's a very good book. It's a breath of fresh air in Tomato. It's not a cool book, it's really a slow-burning one. It's really interesting to pass the time. The protagonist's combat power system is mainly based on the "Senjutsu" of the Fire Temple and the Hana Ninjutsu passed down from his family. At present, the follow-up plot is estimated to have two lines, one is a travel line around the world, which may intersect with other villages, and the other is a normal plot line to improve his own combat power. It is a very novel way of writing, and I hope to continue to maintain this aspect. There are a few small problems. One is that there are not many battles, or there are not many normal battle plots, resulting in unclear combat power levels. The protagonist currently prefers to have strong auxiliary abilities. He has not fought many specific frontal battles. It may not be until the beginning of the third battle that there will be a patch in this regard. Another problem is that some of the plots are confusing to read. If you follow them all, you can probably understand what they mean, but when you look at that section temporarily, it will be a little incoherent, such as the Aburame characters and the plot of the latest dozen or so photos. Finally, the age of the protagonist is not very clear. I still hope that when the plot progresses, the age will be mentioned, so that the protagonist is older, more than ten years old, and occasionally can travel and practice to jump in time.
This book has something that many Naruto fans don't have. It also has a good plot setting, that is, can the protagonist stop doing some more obscene things? But other than this, the rest is very good and worth reading. I recommend it.
I am a new author, please be tolerant of my shortcomings. I wish you all Daniel Wu, Peng Yuyan and Liu Yifei a happy reading.
I have read the latest chapter 94 so far, and the reviews highly recommend it. You can understand it even if you have not watched Naruto. The emotional scenes are very delicately written, unlike other Naruto fics that always spontaneously combust for no apparent reason. There are some original plots that fit well with the original works. They are logical and not brainless, and they are also refreshing. The shortcoming is that they are not exciting enough (bushi) [laughing evilly].
Not bad, but the main character is too precocious. A four-year-old is a bit too strong A 4-year-old child always says things that others don't understand and always makes jokes about the real world. It's so ridiculous.
It's a very novel way to write about Naruto. It's very interesting.
Who does the author plan to choose as the heroine?
Writing Temple of Fire is your first
Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking
The author's writing is good and the plot is not assembly line. You have to use your brain when reading.
It's very beautiful. I hope Wanshan can become stronger and fulfill my wish to travel around the world.
It's pretty good, different from other Hokage fans. I hope the author can update it every day. 😁
Looks good, cheers for the author [Like]
A very good book
: Bees died picking flowers, Liang Shanbo died for Zhu Yingtai
Not bad, much better than most
The author's writing method is not described in the original Naruto. Fan fiction that can expand the world view is really good.
The book is okay, not a good book for Naruto fans to read.
The writing is very good. I don't know if it's because of the new rating. I couldn't imagine that a clear stream only scored 6.4. I enjoyed reading the whole process. I have read almost a thousand novels since elementary school. I definitely don't believe it is a problem with my aesthetics.
Okay, it looks comfortable and gentle, very good
It feels so comfortable to read 😔 It's really slow to warm up ღ(✞╹◡╹✞)றThere's nothing wrong with it for the time being, it's pretty good.
Super good-looking Naruto, the relationship between fathers is a very new theme
It's nice, but the word count is a bit short.
It's four o'clock and I still want to watch it. . .
The writing is really good, you can write more
It must be perfect, okay?
Beautiful, worth seeing
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
Very good and interesting
Why does someone rate 5.9 Randomly?