HP: the Demon King of Grindelwald's House

It's a very interesting Lily novel, with more storylines between Hermione and Qiu Chang. But that's not the point. The point is: please support us, the head of the Rozier family. I will carry the flag for the head of the family! A mother-level existence!

It looks good, but I am a very empathic person. Cockroaches are really the most physically uncomfortable things in the world. The key is that this cockroach also indirectly helped to kill him. 😌😌

It's a very interesting love story about Yuri Xiang, but I personally think that the main character is liked, so she should have most of the control in the relationship. Rather than being led by a few little witches to ease the atmosphere with their soft tongues, they should be tolerant and restrained towards Adelaide like Wenda was towards Gellert, although they loved her but did not cross the line. But since this is Lily, she can be more bold than this pair of straight women, but it is not because of her own possessiveness that affects Adelaide. Adelaide should be free. Her suitors only have the right to follow and accompany them. They should not have the right to snatch the only position in an open and honest way, which makes it difficult for Dumbledore to take advantage of. This is the ideal heart-throb love without cp in the main text. Other possessive desires should appear in the extra chapters and in corners that are not easily noticed in the main text. It should not be an annoyance for the person who is liked, right?

It's pretty good, but the villain's setting made me a little anxious. Because it is Chinese, it is automatically brought into our country as a time traveler like the heroine. However, as our country has received party education since childhood, even if you wear a villain, you will not immediately become the kind of bad guy who disrupts society. However, it is normal for us to have bad species when there are so many of us, but why do people like this have the opportunity to travel through time? I really wish that all these people would die and their souls would be destroyed. The villain was very successful and made me hate it very much. It also caused many difficulties for the heroine. I hope the torture at the end can be more enjoyable.

Very nice lily no (n) cp (p) text. The heroine went from having "no ambition at all" at the beginning to establishing a force that will dominate the magic world in the future. This can be regarded as a kind of growth [Thinking]

Well, how can I put it? It looked okay at first, but after looking at a few pictures, I clearly felt that there were a lot of inappropriate and messy descriptions in some places. AI assistance cannot be the master. Some AI-assisted paragraphs can be appropriately deleted and changed. Those too detailed descriptions will be a bit tiring. Anyway, come on💪

I like the rare Harry Potter novel with an orange flavor, but I think the author should consider improving the strength and shaping of the heroine. When it comes to Alice lifting the blood curse, even if the heroine's grades are very good and she is only in the first grade, she seems too at a loss. But Li Ma's depiction of women is very good, so I still praise it.

There aren't many orange heartthrobs at the moment, and I wouldn't even know if you didn't tell me, but the writing is pretty good. The content is also great. The missing star is only for now, we can only wait until later [thinking] to see if there is one? The orange-flavored heartthrob is really ordinary at the moment. If it weren't for this setting, I might have given up. The writing is good, the content is okay, sometimes it's a bit boring, and the rest is not sure, and there is no character collapse ヾ(･`⌓´･)ﾉﾞ, but I am really anxious and looking forward to it. I will wait slowly, wait slowly, wait for the author to make up for it, and then I will make up for it with one star (*¯¯*)

I want to see Adelaide locked up in the basement by Hermione [laughing]

No way, can Qiu Zhang be able to make a gentle and moist female ghost in the later stage? She is so cute😭

The main focus is on the plot, and there are not many parts about the Queen of Wanfei. This is mainly reflected in the fact that there is not a lot of writing and ink used in the interaction with other female characters, and more skipped words are used. So I mainly came here for this, actually

It's good to read. I like the heroine's character. I don't like to read serialized novels. I actually read this one because I'm short of books. It's the Harry Potter fanfic I want to read. I hope the author will keep updating it.

Sooner or later the protagonist will lose his temper. Instead, they were tied up together. . . . . . . . Shasha

Yes, it's a good fanfic, at least it looks okay. The early content is quite detailed. I just hope that the later content doesn't overwhelm it, otherwise it will easily ruin my good impression!

Dragon Lady Lily and so on are so good ()

This book is probably about... Female drifters running harems everywhere...[Laughs] First it's Jin, then it's Ka... And then...

It's a very interesting book, I love reading it😋😋 Although there is no cp, it is delicious with everyone. The wooden man Adelaide is so cute🥰

It's rather boring, if you are keen on lilies Protagonist lacks charisma

Greatness cannot be questioned [admiration]

Shocking and delicious... I haven't watched Harry Potter very much, so I can't comment on whether it is OOC or not, but the heroine's charming personality and the strongest setting make it completely enjoyable for me who prefers to focus on it! The characters are very interesting and the character settings are also very interesting. The scumbag Shura Field is the most delicious! However, most of the characters in the article are physically young and cannot be accepted as a safe haven.

The most beautiful double heroine HP I have ever seen, please ask the heroine to seduce me all over the world [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

I didn't expect there to be gay CPs

Hehe~ Tie Tie~ Hehe, Shura Field! You must pin down Adelaide! [Learned]

I really like this novel, but the author has too few updates. I don't know when I will see boys competing for Harry. I hope that the author will update ten times a day [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ]

It looks good, I want to see blood flowing like a river

Nice! Very beautiful! Especially when interacting with many young ladies, I feel that the image of the heroine is very good, but she has a little bit of a dark underbelly [Adoration]

It's a good book, you can follow it with confidence, I don't have any problems now, and there should be no problems in the future depending on the writing style.

Hermione, this gloomy and sickly girl, is enjoying her youth! No matter, I will bow to you first.

Nice! More stickers! And Deng Hede's hehe!

Very well written, keep it up