Right! I'm That Passerby

What a fairy! In abstract terms, the introduction is: Married woman x straight ball tsundere (new variety ^ω^) Be careful, the introduction is: The gentle, restrained, sensitive and off-line internal friction is attacked by the "straight ball" of x's arrogant, venomous tongue, cold mouth and hard mouth I haven't finished reading it yet, but the details determine success or failure. The author definitely did not follow the trend and follow the public. Unlike most double-male protagonist novels, the love between Gong and Shou is unclear. To put it nicely, it's called love at first sight, to put it worse, it's called love at first sight. To be honest, once the author focuses most of the description on the appearance of Shou or Gong, no matter how much the author wants to express how deep and great the relationship between them is, it will be like a castle in the air, a mirror in the mirror, and flashy. But the most concise and tangible article written by Da Da with his green brushstrokes made me understand that love can be the ignorance and curiosity of the first love, it can be hard-spoken and soft-hearted without asking for anything in return, or it can be the silent companionship of a long and steady stream. The love between Shen Chunchun and Brother Xie "is starting to take shape", but it doesn't make people anxious. Instead, it wants people to see how the story of these two twisted but complementary people will be written in the future. Come on, thank you for your hard work! Looking forward to your updates, please don't give up! (づ ●─● )づ

Super pretty! The writing style has the feeling of a boss wearing a vest. Xiaochun thought he was ordinary at first, but later on, when I looked at it, I realized that what really shines in him is his gentle soul and strong, broken core. Another point that makes me have to say that the author is NB. It is obviously written from Xiaochun's perspective, but we with God's perspective understand Xiao Xie's heart better. But when we praise Xiaochun's gentleness and elegance, does it mean that Xiao Xie, the proud son, has fallen in love with Xiaochun. Finally, I wish the author a Happy New Year! May all go well with you! (Baby, you said this is a sweet article. Both the main and sub-CPs are sweet, from beginning to end, right o. O)

(Read with caution because of spoilers) It's super interesting, the emotional line is quite sweet, but the story line is very sad. Shou is just an ordinary person, and every life is very painful. Shou is a fake fairy stone created by someone. His purpose is to go back in time and let the real fairy stone that created him go back to save the world, but in fact this person is not It was rotten to the extreme. He could have sacrificed himself to save the world, but he was afraid, so he created Shou and used it as a sacrifice. When Shou was first created, the real immortal stone was very weak, so he gave Shou to another god and lived with him for a while, but the latter god did something wrong. In order to redeem love, Shou had to be sacrificed, but the villagers who were protected by the gods took Shou away. By accident, Shou's soul came to modern times and lost his memory. His family was very suffocated. When he grew up, he died suddenly at his work station. He returned to the original world and became an outer disciple (who can be bullied by anyone, and lived a very happy life). Miserable) He met Gong, and Gong had a bad attitude towards him at first (Gong treats everyone the same at the beginning). Afterwards, they went on adventures together, and slowly became good friends, and Gong's relationship with Shou also gradually changed. The ambiguous period between the two of them was very sweet, and it was super fun to watch, because Gong and Shou Shou didn't even know what feelings he had for the other person, but he just felt that being a close friend was not enough. Finally, one of Gong's friends woke him up. He liked Shou, but his confession was delayed until a hundred years later, because during this period, Shou sacrificed himself to kill the person who created him, and his soul was reborn. Back in modern times (I feel very sad about this part), Shou came into contact with the night pearl that Gong gave him in modern times, and then returned to the world. Gong found him, but Gong has changed a lot in the past hundred years, and he did a lot to find Shou. When they met again, (Geng locked up Shou when he came up) Shou was still the same. In a state of amnesia, he didn't know who Gong was, so he lied to him that they had made a lifelong commitment, so Shou stayed. When Gong set off fireworks for Shou to confess, Shou regained his memory, but Shou felt that Gong had confused his feelings for him and did not agree to Gong. Later, Shou found out that she really liked him. Huan went up to Gong and got together with Gong, and prepared to merge. However, when they merged, he was also their little friend, but that person was bad (it was he who pushed Shou to commit suicide to kill the real immortal stone) and caused trouble. However, he was dealt with smoothly later, and they completed the merger ceremony. I think there is a person in the book who had a very hard life. He could not truly express his feelings to his lover before he was alive. Later, his only relative fell in love with him and did many wrong things. He personally solved his relatives (this is my feeling after reading the book, it is a bit confusing)

It's very comfortable to watch. There isn't much description of appearance in the whole text. It's much better than those that always have fair skin, beautiful lips, red teeth, white teeth, and a round waist. However, the character is too humble and twisted for those who like to read cool stories. If you like cool stories, don't come here.

The writing is exquisite, and the details touch people's hearts. The relationship between Shen Liuchun and Xie Xiaohan is not just love at first sight, but an unexpected rescue that brings people from two different worlds together. Shen Liuchun, who considers himself ordinary, exudes unique charm. It is his gentleness and considerateness, good at discovering the bright spots of others and giving affirmation, which gradually softens the heart of Xie Xiaohan, who pretends to be cold-mouthed and cold-mouthed, and changes their unrelated stranger relationship, becoming each other's "best friends". At the same time, Xie Xiaohan's affirmation of straight shots and subconscious protection again and again made Shen Liuchun, who was somewhat self-denying, gradually gain more confidence and a little courage when getting along with the protagonist group. Both of them are moisturizing things and warming each other silently, just like their names: warmth drives away the remaining winter, and when the cold subsides, spring also remains. The content written by the author also reveals a touch of tenderness. Except for Brother Ma and the villagers who eat the leaf machine at the beginning, there are no pure villains. Both Gan Youru and Zhang Zhiye have their own regrets, and the characters are hard to hate.

Spend more time watching and love watching more Xiao Xie, people have mouths just for talking. Don't lick your lips one day and be poisoned to death by yourself [face covering] And Xiao Shen, baby, you really feel like a husband, you are full of motherly spirit, you can do needlework, cook and make soup, raise flowers and grass, raise animals and relatives, you are full of life skills, what is this if you are not a male mother [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

It's a good article [I'm about to cry] and it has a good plot, but the only flaw is that it's a serialized article [I'm crying] It's been a long time since I've written a review for a novel, but after finishing it today, I thought about it and decided to write it. I hope it can be of some help to friends who are hesitant. Contains spoilers, please read with caution. Shen Liuchun seems to be in trouble at the moment. Keeping the name of spring is very warm, and the people are also very gentle. You can use all the beautiful words to describe him, such as "husband", "boy mother", "gentleness in the world", etc. As you read the previous chapters, you may wonder why this person is so useless. Being bullied cowardly, listening to others' orders cowardly, getting angry a little and then trying to comfort yourself, and when you encounter something happy, leave something ordinary and seemingly unimportant as a souvenir. When he encountered danger, he would scream when he wanted to run. When he was running, he would panic and block someone's knife by accident. Even if he died and his resentment became so strong that Li Gui turned into a fierce ghost, he only silently forgave him and didn't kill him because Xie Xiaohan picked up your scattered beads and burned them to you along with food and clothing. Even though many people hate him for being sent out to defend the protagonists, I have been thinking that if a person is very good and sacrifices himself for others like the unsung heroes that have existed since ancient times, then this is not difficult to understand. He thinks that he is very ordinary and passerby, he doesn't want to be involved desperately and just wants to be a hard-working salted fish. He repeatedly tells Xie Xiaohan that he is not important but warns him to tell him immediately when he is injured. For such a person, he is so good, so it is normal for him to go out of his way to save the protagonist in his heart. It is rare to meet a good person like Shen Liuchun. He is emotionally stable, gentle and kind, and has a good upbringing. It may seem useless, but you always feel that as long as he is by your side, you will not be afraid even if the sky falls, because this guy who will subconsciously pretend to be a mother to coax others when he is drunk will probably comfort you softly even though he is scared to death himself. I want to live, but I feel relieved when I'm really dead. I don't pursue coolness, I just want a safe, healthy and stable life. In order to live a good life and suffer from cowardice, I will work hard, practice hard, and then accept the end of my life. I don't insist on immortality, I just want the rest of my life to be worry-free and without accidents. He doesn't like people calling him "Xiaochun" very much, and I don't want to add "Brother", for fear of adding any pressure to him like being given a heavy responsibility, but I don't want to call him "Xiao Shen", which is too polite, like the boss of PUA, so I only call him "Liuchun" in a place that he doesn't know, gently and in my heart. Xie Xiaohan, it seems to be Gong at the moment. Eliminate the cold winter. A person who is as cold as winter has a cold temperament and a mouth as poisonous as the north wind in winter, but he is lucky to have met someone who can eliminate all the winter in his first half of life and the rest of his life. He likes to call people "idiots", but there is no other uglier word. He doesn't know how to get along with others. I hate my friend's love brain, but I still help steal medicine for my friend's sweetheart who may be an undercover agent; I say that I don't need Ruharu's sword shield, but I still pick up his body, which was torn and rolled to the ground, and dress it up; I call my friend a "stupid" for giving him a coffin, but he still uses it; I say that I'm stupid for giving it to my friend who suggested burning it, and he's so duplicitous. I made an excuse to go shopping; I remembered that Liuchun said he was good at mending clothes, so I bought new clothes, and I wanted to eat pastries, so I bought it from that store; although I didn't agree with Liuchun opening a small kitchen, I had people deliver food; when I was on the road with Liuchun, I walked slowly behind because I was afraid that he would fall behind, and even cast spells to stabilize his body; I said that I wanted to repay Liuchun's life-saving kindness, and I jumped off a ten-thousand-meter cliff... Carrying the name of "genius" is not cared about by others, so when someone cares about you patiently and straightforwardly, you are confused and don't know how to respond. Xie Xiaohan doesn't understand many things, so he can only do them gropingly, but as long as you tell him, he will change it. Liu Chun said that he wanted to tell him about his injury, so he kept saying it; Liu Chun said that his words were hurtful, so he tried to learn to praise him; Liu Chun said that he wanted to see fireworks, so he kept it in his heart. Zhang Zhiye, the troubled man, said that Liuchun was an ordinary stone, but Xie Xiaohan said that Liuchun was his most precious stone. This guy is so arrogant. Awkward and frank. He can be frank with his poisonous words, and he can also be frank in apologizing; it is awkward to care about others, and although it is awkward to admit his feelings, as long as he speaks out, he is extremely straightforward. The wood with the mouth is frightening to death. It is said to be a "best friend", but in reality it is much closer. It is just like a personal computer, which is both gratifying and funny to watch. These two guys make people feel soft. The above are the shining points of the characters of Shou and Attack. It is rare for Tomato to have such a profound portrayal of the characters, natural and clever foreshadowing, reasonable plot, and good writing. The author seems to be a college student, which is indeed much better than the immaturity of many middle and high school students. It deserves encouragement and continuous efforts. In addition, this book does not have any poisonous points for me, but in case someone sees this, runs to read it, discovers a minefield, and then curses the world, I will briefly list a few possible points based on my extensive experience in reading a lot of books (I really don't think it is a minefield) 1. Shou currently looks relatively ordinary, probably the handsome type (the description in the article may be relative to the protagonist group) 2. The feeling of being a coward in the early stage, the real coward, is the feeling of most social beasts, and the strength is not good, but it is definitely not a counterattack by a diaosi! (He is a salty fish who occasionally turns around and his second grade of secondary school has passed) 3. Really blocked the main character's knife, and I have blocked three of them so far (the first one is because I have never seen a big scene and was scared by the life and death situation and ran in the wrong direction due to a strange combination of circumstances. The second one is probably because I turned into a ghost and the situation was already very bad. I also thought Long Aotian was fun and rushed to save him. The third time was because someone gave him some pills before and it was considered good for him in a sense. He was good-looking and a nice person but he just wanted to knock down the enemy, but he was forced to fall off the cliff because he was too weak.) 4. Attack, really weak in the early stage. He has been scolded "idiot" many times. He is also a bit pretentious and arrogant, but don't be disappointed in him. If you bear with him, the people behind him will also get better and want to be "best friends" with him [laughing evilly] 5. Well, that should be it. Alas, I quite like this kind of love. The other person is not particularly stunning, at least it is definitely not a love based on lust. Two-way redeeming love. Liuchun, who has low self-esteem and a nagging temperament, needs Zhangzui Xiaohan's straightforward affirmation and warm love, while Xiaohan, who is lonely and awkward, needs Liuchun's delicate care and gentle love. It's really delicious, the author loves you [blowing kiss]

Reading it in one go has been very good so far. In fact, the characters of the two protagonists are not very special, but the author's writing is very innovative. Each person's characteristics are very distinctive, which makes people want to read. It is not like other books that are too exaggerated and embarrassing, and it takes a long time to read a little. Moreover, the protagonists all have long mouths and can talk about any problems, so that they won't feel frustrated. Haru's character is quite real. The author does not use too much space when describing his "misery", but it can make people feel. This degree is well grasped [like] (the key is that it will not make people feel embarrassed). It is the experience that a normal person may have after time travel. I am particularly easily embarrassed when reading books, but this book is not too embarrassing so far. Good luck, author⛽Looking forward to the follow-up plot👀

The author is really good at grasping the psychological state of the little characters, and the sense of immersion is a bit strong. There were many parts in the middle where I couldn't stop crying. I was also crying when Xiaochun was drunk and confessed her true feelings to Xie Xiaohan. I have seen many routines and many shortcomings that can only be regarded as another cute character. It is rare to see such a touching article... Thank you to the author for creating such a work.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhh, it's really beautiful. It's been a long time since I've read a novel with this setting. ①First of all, Xiaochun who always thinks that he is ordinary and boring but gentle, Xiaoxie who is sharp-tongued and heart-warming, Xiaotian who is optimistic and strong, Zichi who is beautiful but has nothing to show for her, and Zhiqing who is like a mother to Zichi but is childish at other times. ②Secondly, Xiaochun and Xiaoxie are a coy little couple, and Xiaotian has almost become a toy for them to torture their dogs, hahahahaha🤣 ③The best, please update 100 chapters (Small question, is there a deputy CP? How much?)

It's beautiful, and the emotional lines are very delicate. The author obviously doesn't describe the stage of emotional fermentation in a cruel way, but I just feel sour at the tip of my nose and a lump in my throat [covers my face]. It's a really young fruit of love~ Then I also think the plot is very good, there is nothing that people can't understand, it is very smooth and coherent [Like] [Like] [Like] The author's writing style is very good, and the protagonist's character is non-ooc, as if he is a real person doing things according to his own personality, which is very good [send heart] Come on, come on! Go, go, go! ! ! ! ! ! [Love][love][love]

I feel very happy when I read this article. Although the article is not long (actually it is not short, it's just that I don't have a dog to watch [laughs]). The two little ones are very 🉑. Their characters and emotional lines are described very delicately. They are sour, sweet and a little bitter. They describe Xiaochun's inner inferiority very realistically. There is no clichéd protagonist aura in ordinary novels, which makes Xiaochun's character image more real. The image of a wife is even more mouth-watering (crossed out). Xiaohan is a stubborn kitten in the early stage, but in the later stage he only plays straight after he understands his feelings. The two little ones are angry, Xiaohan uses his first skill: sulking, and his second skill: I'm injured. All in all, the set makes Xiaosheng unable to stop. The other characters are also very delicately created (I don't know how many times Xiaosheng scolded the broken spirit stone), both Xiaotian and Zichi should have their own characteristics. The charm of the group portrait is ready to come out. Xiaosheng longs for the author to release a 200 million-word extra to scare the shit out of him.

It's beautiful, it's really beautiful. Chun and Xiaohan are licking each other like two furry cubs. They feel distressed and cute at the same time. How could it be like this! The character of Chun really describes the dull pain in the heart, the sensitive mind, the weak but tough, baby, I feel sorry for you! I give five stars because I can only give five stars. I can't stand it. It's really beautiful. The author writes full of emotions in trivial things. Pure love is hanging! ! The author should have a good rest, such as thinking when sleeping, writing when taking a shower, and writing when he is dazed. It's okay. Don't be too tired. The author can just write 180 chapters a day.

It's super, super good-looking. I still remember that in just a few chapters, I called Xiaochun a fool many times, and then at the end, "Shen Liuchun, I am happy with you." Xiaochun is the kind of person who doesn't like to trouble others. When he is still in contact or communicating with others, he only holds his own hand. He is very sensitive in his heart and feels that he has been dragging others down, but he does not know that he is a very good friend in the eyes of others. A beam of light shone into Xie Xiaohan's life. Xie Xiaohan asked Xiaochun what he thought he was. Xiaochun replied that he was an ordinary person and asked "What about me?" Xiaochun also said that his mother was also a human being and would carefully select fish bones for him to stew in chicken soup. This made Xie Xiaohan Han had a different feeling for Xiaochun in his heart (it's hard not to fall in love with it). Later, although Xie Xiaohan was not very enlightened, he opened his mouth, and even when he was confused, he understood what he meant with a few words from his friends and began to act on it. This is the first time I write so many comments because it is really beautiful.

I really like this article. The relationship between the official couple develops slowly, and warm scenes appear from time to time. However, Xiao Shen is not confident enough, and Xiao Han can do everything except open his mouth. All in all, it's very interesting to read. I recommend everyone to read it. The author's writing style is good and the plot is not too abrupt. In the early stage, Xiao Shen may be a little cautious, while Xiao Han is very venomous and may feel a little aggrieved, but this will definitely change as we get along with each other. The rest of the protagonist group are very good, especially our Long Aotian Xiaoji. Mrs. Ye is also a good person. I am so sad after she is gone. . The knife at the back is a real knife, but it's also very sweet [Top post][Top post]Little Couple 99. Finish spreading flowers

I haven't seen much about this kind of subject matter. It's very novel. Both of them are very good. I really like Liuchun's character and outlook on life. She is ordinary but gentle and strong. The plot is also very exciting. I especially like this kind of long and flowing emotional line! There was no awkwardness to the point of picking one's feet. The two understood and respected each other and walked towards each other step by step. It was very delicious! The author updates quickly! Hope to see the ending soon!

Beautiful, really beautiful! ! ! ! I've read a lot of articles about two men cultivating immortals, and I feel too tired after reading them, and even feel a little nauseous, but this one is really different. The more I read, the more addicted I am.

It's so beautiful [crying] [crying] Really, I don't approve of many books in 🍅, and I don't insist on reading many books. There are only a few of them, they are really beautiful [like] [like] Xie Xiaohan (Gong) is a tsundere, with a kind of awkward cuteness. When he wakes up, he will be jealous silently, and even say seriously, "We are close friends." Come on, best friends don't braid each other's hair or shave their beards! What a close friend, just an excuse for being a male copper! Shen Liuchun (shou) is a real baby. I haven't seen such a gentle and a bit bushy shou for a long time. It smells very good [like] It turns out that the male protagonist Long Aotian in the novel world is a simple funny man, with clear thinking and advanced mental state. He is a character [Like] I'm very much looking forward to the teacher's creation, come on [like][like]

It looks good, maybe because it resonates with Liuchun. Just like Liu Chun's assessment of himself, they are all ordinary people, busy and inactive, and even have the same thoughts and actions. I don't know if the emotional resonance is pity for Liuchun or for myself, but I always feel that Liuchun's current life has been a blessing for him, right? Although the story is not over yet, he already has a partner, who is just like him, a very good person, and his lover has been by his side a long time ago, even if he loves her without knowing it. Even if he still holds the thought of self-respect, there will be people who are not afraid of the abyss and want to catch him; even if he completely seals himself off, there will be people now who will break the barrier he has erected and take him out of the cage he has drawn. When I read it, I always felt that the book was light, and it made me feel light after reading it. When I read it, my confusion and anxiety seemed to be infected by the stability of Liuchun, and I gradually became less irritable. The important things may not have been resolved, but the emotional stability is a very precious moment. I want to say a few words to Shen Liuchun. Although this plot point has not developed so far, I should just wish Xiaochun and tell him. Xiaochun, there is no need to belittle yourself, no need to shrink back into a shell, no need to follow the crowd, please take a look at yourself more, love yourself more, look up at the front more often, and look back at the back more often. You will find that there are already partners, close friends, and lovers in front of you and behind you. They will accompany you. You just need to be bolder and braver. Take a few steps forward, and someone will come forward to catch you, hold your hand, and lead you forward. They are all walking towards you.

The fried chicken is beautiful, and Liuchun is a very good little stone. He deserves to have his own unique plain beauty. I really like children with a character like Liuchun. He deserves all the love and beauty. Licking your lips in the early stage of Xiaohan can poison you to death. Although Xiaohan has awakened in the later stage, it is not fully enlightened. , But I am already protecting my wife with peace of mind [Shy] Especially when I have a close friend in the later period, I almost need the exclusive puppy eyes filter of the little stone. Every time I see Xiao Han protecting his wife in a domineering manner, I can imagine a little wolf dog ferociously holding a small stone with its flesh pad to prevent anyone from getting close [Admiration]

I watched it for a few hours, and the discussion thread was very good. (Personal subjective part) After reading the latest chapter, I feel that it implies or expresses that Xiaochun has an identity, and his identity is not ordinary (it is strange that he has traveled through time and has no identity). And Comrade Xiao Xie seems to have an ordinary identity as well⊙∀⊙? It feels like, up to now, I haven't mentioned my biological parents, but I'm talking about the son of a genius (this is very wrong), and then, isn't it a sweet story?，Ooc，""，，cp，，，（⊙∀⊙？） （，，，） ，，，，（，，，），， ，，，（boss，，（），），，，，，，，⊙∀⊙？ . Character portrayal, Xiaochun until now, if he has not lost his memory, or lost his memory due to some reasons such as soul sealing, he is actually a good character. First of all, he is tough, upward, gentle and kind, but he is also calm and knows what he wants, he wants a peaceful life, or A peaceful and happy life (this is what the author has not given so far). From the author's description, I understand the image. He wants to go out and see the great rivers and mountains, but accidents always happen. So when did Xiao Xie become an invincible master and take Xiao Chun all over the world for travel and adventure (not dangerous) I feel that the character Xiao Xie is not as full-bodied as Xiao Chun. Is my impression purely human-machine⊙∀⊙? This is not true. If you don't talk about anything, you are cold. 80% Of what you say is venomous. It may be related to not traveling through time. I have never received compulsory education, but I was influenced by our kindergarten teacher Xiaochun. Now I am a little more humane. Will there be a savior plot by then? It would be outrageous if there were, can it be changed to a situation where everyone in the world takes action together, no one else needs to be saved, as long as each of us contributes, we are our own saviors ƪ(˘⌣˘)ʃElegance I may follow up with reviews in the future. Good luck, author teacher. The follow-up review is here ~ Maybe I will talk about my feelings once in one copy (maybe) First of all, the plot is very good, and the characterization is well brought in. I am really into the drama. First, I understand Xiaochun's life experience, and then I learn from the "god" that other gods are looking for fairy stones. Xiaochun belongs to the mini version of fairy stones, and then the gods have stronger combat power (kill Xiao Xie easily, and Xiao Xie's combat power unit). Then I look forward to the next copy. Come on, author teacher. The following is a subjective discussion. Just leave comments if you want to discuss it together. After all, this is a discussion post. The second plot dungeon unlocks some of Xiaochun's life experience as "ordinary stone, head". To be honest, an "ordinary" stone can be used to cultivate adults. This should also be an immortal stone, right? (After all, I haven't seen the Immortal Stone even if it's missing, so why can't it be fragments of the Immortal Stone?) Then it's said that the soul has predicted the plot, which is also the type I don't like the least (it belongs to the remnant soul who has reached the current society, and then returned to the ancient cultivation of immortality and the like). This kind of thing will give the protagonist Xiaochun a sense of fate. (It's like you were originally a garbage collector, but you just happened to go to college.) But one good thing is that now Xiaochun's character is worried about gains and losses, not confident, lonely and separated (this will fit the setting of split souls returning to cultivating immortals), so the character will not be offensive to people, but it will become a plus point, making people want to protect Xiaochun. And I really want to complain about that god (complaining is purely subjective, and when discussing the plot, I don't mean to say that the novel is bad. The novel is very interesting, and I only complain when I get into it). When I was reading it (thinking that I must not do this, the thing you least expect is often the appearance of Shui Lingling), I guessed that Xiaochun was going to kill him, but he didn't want Xiaochun to kill him, so why not commit suicide himself? I have to ask for help. Is this novel so disgusting? It's just this one (but I feel like it won't be much better. Chino said that maybe looking for the immortal stone may eventually find Koharu). He hit the sword and died to give Koharu strength. It's just disgusting. If you want to die, die, if you don't want to die, just save Xiaoliu. In the end, the village cannot be defended, and Koharu is still disgusted, so he is freed, right? Then there are other immortal stones. Can't Teacher Immortal Stone stop being enshrined by "gods"? Lao Da, why are you a Liu Da chicken? 🐔 (Our genius, Xie Gongzicai Jindan, even beating the "god" Zhiye is a piece of cake, how do you ask him to clear the copy), and Xiaochun also has problems, but when I saw it, he was covering up. Xiaochun is not a confident person in the first place, and then he travels to an unknown world (although it is Huihunao), which will cause loneliness. , Coupled with buffs such as predetermined destiny, I am very tolerant. It doesn't matter if the plot after Xiaochun is rubbish, Xie Xiaorenji can protect me (the protection is endless, it is just a seesaw, a ghost scale), they say that sensitive people need more love and care, our Mr. Xie has not done it yet (just come on) In the latest picture, after breaking through the Golden Pill, I met Xiaochun who was taking the Huayan Pill. There were two people who were talking about it. Why didn't Xiao Xie give them a mouthful? Just take a pillow, okay, Xiaochun cannot be seen when others don't want to see him, it's pressure Xiaochun, pressure cooker, why Xiaoxie is a steam robot) In a place surrounded by more cold people and surrounded by more kind and honest people, you want the most obvious thing, right? It makes sense for Xiaochun to want to leave [Like] Then it's time to kowtow. It's more than 70 chapters, and now is the hardest time to kowtow (come on, I can hold on, the cookies are right in front of me, wait until the party can win, teacher?) Xiao Xie thinks that it's enough to have people around, and even said the famous saying of a scumbag: How can we be so far away when we are so close? , Xiaochun had no intention of sending a good person card and said yes (I have never seen such a helpful brother Leng say yes) The follow-up review is over. It's too subjective after writing. I feel so ashamed when I get angry in the comments [face covering]

It's so desperate. It's so beautiful. Why do you want me to see it when it's not finished? The author begs you not to stop updating it! Please! And Xiaochun makes me feel so bad when I see her, woo woo woo Damn, the writing is very good! The setting details of Chun Baobao's inferiority complex are written very delicately, and each character's personality is very distinct. This is the charm of group portraits! Love it, love it! [Blowing kiss]

Oh my god, this is a very cute book. I really like the characters of the two protagonists. The relationship line is also very interesting. It is very fresh and natural. I kept laughing unconsciously while reading it, hahaha. The interactions are also so cute. The plot is not delayed at all. The two of them even had misunderstandings and just said ah ah ah ah. I like it so much.

It's beautiful, and it's really very real. Xiaochun's previous experience is very similar to that of ordinary people like us. We are powerless and unable to control ourselves, but Xiaochun is very strong and optimistic. I like this kind of character. Come on! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

I read it for a few hours and finished it all. The young lovers are so awkward, but there is an inexplicable sweetness in their words and actions. The emotional line and story line of this novel are also well written, and it feels like a long stream. But the latest chapters suddenly feel like they are on the highway. I can't understand it. Maybe there are more pits. I have to wait for the author to release the next few chapters. Overall, it is very good. The writing is okay, but I think the author can still keep up. And finally, let me say something The group portraits are the best! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Finally, I wish the author a happy New Year and good fortune, and more to come! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I finished reading it in a few hours. Woooooooooooooo

I don't know what words to use to describe my current mood. It's so beautiful, so beautiful [please update] [please update] The slow love is written very well. Few of the articles I usually read can make me feel that kind of love. This book really captures the feeling. Even though Gong was a bit arrogant in the early stage, he actually felt very good towards Shou [love] [love]. Later, when he and Shou became close friends (actually his wife), he really stuck to Shou like a kitten every day [send heart] [send heart]. A best friend is a best friend. A best friend cannot become a wife. Once a wife becomes a wife, she can no longer call him a best friend. My best friend is my wife! [You taste it carefully][You taste it carefully] It's really beautiful [send heartfelt message] Such a wonderful wife, Xie Xiaohan felt so happy, and I felt so happy too [blowing kiss][blowing kiss] The two of them really dote on each other, it's so sweet to me [star][star] I hope they can continue to be sweet.

Chunbao is so gentle, I like it! (I feel a bit like a guidance type, teaching Lao Xie to talk) I hope Lao Xie will enlighten and protect our Chunbao [Sending Hearts] Lao Xie lives up to his name as an arrogant brother, but he is so well-behaved. Haha, his wife told him when he was hurt, and he coyly said, "Cute!" Big cheers for the author! I will always support you! [Sending Hearts]

A very complete story, with a strong martial arts flavor, hahahaha. The young man is in the world, full of high spirits, and you will forget that this is a story about cultivating immortals. Actually, I came here because I wanted to read about the widowed king's upgrade to become an immortal. This article didn't fit that tag at all, but I still finished reading it. At first, I was attracted by Xiaochun's character. Shen Liuchun is so cute and lively. In the early stage, Xie Xiaohan was outspoken and upright, but his background was kind-hearted. In the later stage, he became talkative (Xiaochun trained him well). It was so fun to see the interaction between the two protagonists!

It's good. Do you want to watch two idiots fall in love? They are almost close friends. Fortunately, there is a friend to help (isn't this a bit of a spoiler?) It's still very sweet after getting started. The author's writing style is good and the plot is not sluggish (in my impression, two idiots can talk for at least two hundred chapters to get started, but the author didn't write it like this). Overall, it's a good read. I recommend it.

Like, like, like! The writing style is exquisite, the articles are fluent, the characters are rich and full of flesh and blood, and the emotional lines are smooth and smooth. The plot is very interesting, and it is sad to have a story that is not all smooth sailing. But because of this, we can be moved by the ordinary Shen Liuchun's tenacity to make progress and retain his own spring when he was with the big guys, and feel his growth. Each character has his own shining point, ah! Ah! Ah! The author's group portraits are really gentle and loving. Everyone is a good person and encourages each other to move forward. I like the sweet cookies! ! ! [Love][love][love] And then: Come on, the tsundere brother from the north! If not, just go and be an air conditioner! Quickly spit out the venom in your mouth. If you can't spit it out, seal it! (Irritated) (Irritated) (I hate iron but it cannot be made into steel) Give me a straight shot! [Like] After the beating, hit yourself in Xiaochun's arms! Go, go, go! Brave people enjoy the world first! Those who can cry will be comforted! He who can act coquettishly will get a wife! Come come on me! Let Xiaochun make your little heart beat! Use your beauty to your advantage! Xiaochun was so coaxed that she was dizzy! [Cool] The author should update soon! Renew! Don't let your pen stop even when you are tired! Otherwise, I will go directly to your house and cry and hang myself. It will be dark, twisted, and crawling like crazy. I will stare at you forever (sad) [smile] [smile] [smile] [please update] [please update] [please update]