Honkai Impact************

No, buddy, can you read it after you finish writing it? [Pauses face] There are so many sentences that I can't read. They're either typos or missing words.

To friends who are attracted by the no-CP label: Someone lied about military information! This is not no CP at all! ! ! The official couple of Kevin and Mei was dismantled, and the ancestors were so cut that they couldn't recognize it (I can't hold it anymore after seeing this, I don't know if there will be more in the future, so I can leave) ——The pure love god of war who accidentally entered fell to the ground. Thinking about it, I gave you too much.

So far, the writing is pretty good, but it's a bit weird that Mei and Kevin are separated. Overall, it's okay, at least I can accept it. A friendly reminder, if you can't accept Kai and Mei's PCs being demolished, you can run away in advance.

I was very unhappy when we separated Kevin and Mei [smile]

The author's writing is very good [Love][Love]. The only shortcoming is that the protagonist's combat power is a mystery and the timeline feels a bit inconsistent. Logically speaking, if you become a general in the Star Iron World, your strength will be at least Reishi or Pseudo Reishi level, but in the Honkai Impact World, you have to absorb dead soldiers to increase your strength. This is very confusing [what]

"Let the songs that no one sings sing again" "Write a new chapter for the story that has been forgotten by history" "A noble and pure soul embarks on a journey" "May the predatory beasts love you and bless you, and grant you the freedom of 'empty dreams'!" "May the Feather of Duchen love protect his body and grant him the perseverance of 'floating life'!" "May the scroll of the painting of the world bless him with love and grant him the innocence of 'stars'!" "May the world-eating snake love bless his body and grant him the 'infinite' desire!" "May the Whistle of Dawn love him and grant him the will of 'Rising Light'!" "May the Inch-Breaking Blade love you and bless you, and grant you the decisiveness of 'moment'!" "May the love of the good Dharma protect his body and grant him the wisdom of 'God's Wisdom'!" "May the love of evil calamity bless his body and grant him the sincerity of 'destruction'!" "May the Box of Foolish Plays love you and grant you the miracle of the 'Spiral'!" "May the song of brilliance love and protect his body, and grant him the brilliance of 'gold'!" "May the threshold of deep sin love and protect his body, and grant him the love of 'discipline'!" "May the Emberless Sword love you and protect you, and grant you the ideal of 'salvation'!" "May the flawless people love you and bless you, and grant you the return of your 'true self'!"

Come on, come on Dr. Mei is one of the female protagonists.

Update soon! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Prosperity and blight come to us at the same time. This is how we live here and keep parting. ——Post-Honkai Book On the burned earth... I make a promise to her and everyone! No matter what the cost... Humans! Honkai will definitely be defeated! ! ——Kevin Kaslana People have to grow up three times. The first time they understand that things are right and wrong, the second time they understand that some things are more than right and wrong, and the third time they understand that some things are not right or wrong, they still firmly do what they believe in and take responsibility for it. ——Otto Apokalis (Karen Kaslana) What is really scary is not how many lives this world has taken away, but how many people it has made the loss of life a matter of course. ——Wuliangta Jizi Even if the dark clouds cover the sun, I will burn up the sky to light your way home. ——Wuliangta Jizi Of course the world is not a beautiful place, but some people tell me not to give up. They guide me and prove to me that the world is not that bad. I love them and everything they love! This sword connects us, it will illuminate the dark sky and let the light shine farther. This is me and everyone - the way home! ——Kiana Kaslana I want to make this imperfect world what we want it to be. ——Kiana Kaslana

I think the plot is good and quite enjoyable to watch. There are just a lot of typos, but as long as you can tolerate them. Then this book will be a very good choice for you. Don't ask for too much. What kind of bicycle do you want for free?

Okay, okay, Honkai Impact Harem Collection [sneaky laugh]

It's so well written and the quality of this fanfic is very high. The title of the book is not very attractive. I thought it was an ordinary rubbish live broadcast article. I recommended it several times and skipped it. I read this book after updating when I ran out of books to read. It turned out to be a treasure [laughing] [thinking] It won't be so good later on

I think it's okay. In addition to tearing down the official version, and being deceived by the non-CP in the introduction, it's also okay. I found that most people in the comment area gave the author low marks because of the removal of the official version. I feel like Kevin's character has collapsed.

There is no cp but there is ambiguity, brothers, please be careful [eating melon]

It looks great, but can I remove the ❤️ in front? Very dramatic Try not to have this happen later❤️. No, the author (๑•̌.•̑๑)ˀ̣ˀ̣ Is... How did you write this? (ꐦÒ‸Ó) Open high and go low (ᇂ_ᇂ|||) The protagonist is too frustrated. •᷄ࡇ•᷅ Could it be that the author was changed halfway through?

Your writing is so sweet, especially the part with Aili, tell me what you want to do without cp! ! !

It was the first time I saw the memory of Honkai Impact III and Star Dome Railway exposed. The subject matter is very novel and the writing is good. It's not enough to read. Come on, brother who writes online articles.

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is more focused. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are in the tenth watch, the great Confucian scholars' debates on scriptures are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

If you like it, please give me more [laughs] The current problem with this book is: 1: Too many typos (blind guess, maybe the author typed too fast and sent it directly without checking. Recently, the author has been able to make some corrections) 2: Introduction: It has been changed several times. At first it was no heroine, then it was changed to no cp. I emphasized it three times, and then it was changed to multiple heroines + no original cp (maybe the author doesn't know how to write an introduction, or maybe the author took advice) 3: "❤️" is too dramatic, and many people are uncomfortable with it. (However, it is true that "❤️" is rarely seen in recent chapters) [eat melon]

When will you start writing why birds fly?

Why does such a beautiful novel have such a low rating?

This novel is great, but I have a question for the author. Isn't this exposure flow? Why is there no content about the protagonist's original world playback memory in the follow-up?

Okay, okay, it's rare to see someone grabbing a plum here.

I haven't seen enough, woo hoo, I want to know the follow-up, I want to know Beng Tie's story, I want to eat a knife

The author's book is very nice! It's just that the update is too slow. It would be better if it could be updated faster. Author [][][][][][] @ The author promised good exposure, why didn't it happen?

It's very interesting. I hope the author will keep up the good work. Don't give away girls. Don't give away girls. Don't give away girls. The most important thing I have to say three times is the harem [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile]

It looks great, keep up the good work!

Very good, just a little lacking

Well written, keep up the good work

Come on, no knives.

It's not enough. Hurry up, hurry up, hurry up