A Woman in Power Becomes a Jail Warden, but They Want to Be Her Warden’s Wife

Very interesting concept, makes people want to read more However, there are still a few things you need to be careful about, otherwise you will be prone to thunderstorms: 1. How can the male protagonist avoid the debuff of realm suppression and exert his combat effectiveness? Otherwise, the sky prison will be easily broken again, and the mystery of the sky prison will no longer exist, and subsequent actions will obviously become more difficult. This aspect obviously requires men to take the initiative and use their little brains. Even if many things cannot be done under moral requirements, there are definitely ways to do it, and there are many. 2. How should the prisoner in the prison who is also the harem (?) Be treated? Again, what kind of good person can be targeted by the Heavenly Prison Order? From this perspective, the male protagonist should be treated harshly. But from the perspective of story needs, we need an emotional connection between the male protagonist and Feng Aotian. From this perspective, we need the male protagonist to treat them gently. This see-saw situation between the two sides will cause the plot to collapse no matter which side you take, but if the tightrope-like balance can be written well, it can be rewarded a hundredfold. And here is my personal suggestion: Pay attention to the debugging of the first few dozen chapters (although the book is still a baby). The beginning and early stages are the most decisive in determining whether readers want to stay, so if you can change it better, you must change it.

It's pretty good, but don't accept the peach blossoms. Although they are called lilies, they are still very uncomfortable and dirty.

The author has something, it looks good

The characters are well written, but the part in the flower house is easier to persuade.

It's pretty good. I haven't seen this type before. It's just that the protagonist's strength is too low. There is a huge difference between the characters before and after the plot. Li Luoying used to like the sick woman she was just now, and her identity was a dancer, but later she was no longer a dancer, she became the disciple of Lord Fox. She also said that her brother's illness was cured, and he took another woman. There was no progress in the plot. The protagonist was collecting Tianlao Tokens and wanted to go back to the original time. It was very awkward. , I have been holding back, in fact, no one can beat the male protagonist, he can only rely on anti-armor (anti-armor cannot anti-mental damage), with a little strength, the protagonist in the Nascent Soul stage has no choice but to rely on intelligence; the female protagonist's feelings are completely dependent on her own strategy, all the women in the sky prison like the male protagonist for one reason, their own love disaster; love beads; love lies with the male protagonist.

After looking through "people who have seen it" for a long time, I found it and added a review. It's already marked. I clicked in and read a few chapters of the new book as soon as it was updated, but I didn't expect that I would temporarily cut this book to write a new one. I've almost forgotten the plot of this book. I just remember that I haven't seen enough of Shura Field. Then it's worth it for Master and Flower Demon Eight. I hope I will reply with updates in the future. What I like most is watching women fight. Jpg

The setting is quite novel. I was a little confused in the early stage, but the writing got better and better later on, and the writing style is also very good. Overall, it looks good👌🏻

Why did you change the cover😡It's better than the author's previous hand-drawn one😡😡😡

There is a slight problem at the front, but the back is really exciting.

The plot is good, I won't get tired of it. The only shortcoming is that there are too few emotional scenes. You will know it after watching it [Salute][Salute][Salute]