Hell Station

Super Invincible is so good. I haven't found such a good novel for a long time. That kid is simply a teammate killer. Hahaha, my head hurts when I saw that part. I continued to hit that part hard. It was really funny, but it's also a shadow for such a small child. I accidentally killed two of my teammates because of the illusion. I hope there won't be CP in the future. I feel that this type of unlimited flow with CP will destroy the atmosphere, and it is easy to overturn. Come on, don't stop updating. I already have more than a dozen books that have been interrupted.

Not bad, but the settings are a bit unbalanced. Both dungeons are low-level dungeons, which is nothing to say. However, there are no rewards for clearing the level and there are no life-saving props in the dungeons. What should I do when I get to the advanced dungeons? All based on brain? If you write like this, either all the smart people in the later advanced dungeons or almost no one can participate in the advanced dungeons, because they are all dead in the intermediate level dungeons, and the balance is not well done. It will be difficult to write in the later stages. I don't know how to write in the later stages.

Let's talk about the advantages first: 1. The rhythm of the story is very good, the plot has ups and downs, and it pays more attention to reasoning. Each story is written better than the last, and the progress is obvious. You will not lose money if you invest in it. 2. The description of the emotional changes of the characters is delicate and very contagious. I especially like the part between Luo Yingying and Chen Dong in the second story. It really made my scalp numb and my heart sour. Full marks. 3. The group portraits are well written, and basically everyone has highlights. They are not black and white. For example, Tian Hao. I was originally disgusted with this greasy uncle, but when I saw him desperate to survive, he faced danger alone but relied on his own wisdom to save himself. I respect him at this time and sincerely admire him. Of course, it is really disgusting that he bullies the weak and treats women as playthings. 4. There is no explicit sexual description. Although the author has written some content related to this aspect, the description of women's appearance is finally not like big white legs. It is really great and it is to the point. However, there are also some shortcomings. Here I list them in order of problem size: 1. The setting is fragmented. It's really fragmented. First of all, when the two surnames Shangguan and Ouyang appeared, I could barely bear it. But when I saw the sudden appearance of the four major families and wealthy chaebols, I even doubted whether I was watching a Mary Sue or Jack Sue. This feeling was no different from me happily eating spicy boiled fish and suddenly biting into a piece of sweet cake. It's not bad, it's too fragmented. This kind of fragmentation The crack is also reflected in the appearance descriptions that appear from time to time, and there is a feeling of sudden nymphomaniacs. For example, the appearance description of the protagonist in the first story, the protagonist looks like a vampire ghost master, and there is Ouyang with long white hair, and Shangguan with long black hair and one eye. Long hair is not bad, I also like long-haired handsome guys, but this content is a bit high. I have read 50+ chapters so far, and all the handsome guys except the male protagonist have long hair... 2. The character stories are told too quickly. For this heart-to-heart talk, give me a way. Everyone starts to reveal their family background proactively together. Generally speaking, it is impossible to talk about family situations that are too private. I hope some guidance can be added. For example, in the first story, Li Moran and Lu Xiaotian can become Li Moran when they have a heart-to-heart relationship. In order to make Lu Xiaotian feel at ease, I chatted with her and comforted her, so that Lu Xiaotian could open up. I personally feel that it would be better for me to introduce myself from a different angle like Tian Hao or as a side story like in Ten Days at the End. However, I think the heart-to-heart talk between Luo Yingying and Chen Dong is very good, it is in line with the logic of the story, and it is very nice. 3. There are some shortcomings in the story, such as the setting of the flower on the other side, why it blooms sometimes and then not bloom, sometimes it blooms everywhere, sometimes it blooms when people are asleep, sometimes it blooms on a corpse, and sometimes it blooms in a cave. This setting is not very clear. I hope the author can pay more attention to its rigor. Finally, overall, this book is well written, and you can see the author's progress. It is worth reading. However, I think the characters of the protagonist and supporting characters are already perfect to a certain extent. There is no need to add various noble origins and strange bloodlines as plug-ins. Their brains are sufficient, and there are no props in the article. They rely solely on luck and strength, which is the charm of this article. (My first reaction when I saw Shangguan Qing's one eye was the Evil King's True Eye. I was really afraid that he would suddenly lift the eyepatch and reveal the seal...)

Looking forward to the author's update🎃It feels like the setting of the platform is like the setting of Tinder Cinema. There won't be any team confrontation later. . . . The setting of the story is very good so far, not too cliché. The pacing and sense of horror are also well done.

The pace is quite fast, and the part between Luo Yingying and Chen Dong is quite touching. I was looking forward to seeing her alive when she was seven years old, but I didn't expect the result to be so tragic. I hope the author keeps his head down and works hard hahaha

In fact, the writing is okay, but the copy is not necessarily too long. The second copy has more than sixty chapters, and it is a bit boring to read. I have to exit and use Douyin and come back several times. It is too long, and the second copy is only so long. The high-level ones in the back will not have one or two hundred chapters.

Foreword, in order to imitate the black fire and the loveless scholar, they are indeed imitating the protagonist like Qin Manjiang, but the story is too monotonous. It is scary and boring for the sake of horror. The most terrifying thing about fire to me is the western vampire family in the movie theater. The plot has the most twist. I watched the first chapter of the bus. The scholar is a ghost story player. The plot of Huangquan has a twist in the previous copy. The author's writing skills are a bit different. I can only say that he has written out his ideas and needs to be tempered.

At present, the protagonist has just entered the third copy. There are not many chapters yet, but it feels like the information in the article is very... Dense? It's a bit dry, but I can still watch it. Personally, I feel that the protagonist is a bit like a dual personality, not quite like a schizophrenic (nonsense, without any theoretical basis)

Not bad, not bad. The last one I saw was so attractive was Guishe. I hope the author will update it a lot 😄😄😄

The first story is well written, the horror, story and logic are very good, I look forward to the follow-up~