We've Obviously Broken Up, Why Are You Arresting Me?
明明都分手了，为什么还要抓我
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 21k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Subgenre
- Urban Everyday
- Audience
- Male
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
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In booklists 19
Yandere Royal Sister! Yandere Royal Sister!
Yandere! Single Heroine! ! Pure Love! ! !
Is there a single female protagonist who is a yandere who is pure love? Recently I see the male protagonist getting entangled with so many yanderes and it makes me so sad~
I've Seen Too Many Male Yanderes. I Want to See Female Yanderes and Criticize Them Like Crazy. Please~
I want to read a book similar to "The Yandere Queen, She Turned Black and Exploded". Cruel and murderous~
Arrogant, Women Chasing Men, Yandere
Nurture, Villain, White and Black, Yandere
Hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey
Yandere, Beauty, Male Video, Royal Sister
Whether There Is a Female Protagonist or Not, the Male Protagonist Always Gets Beaten.
The Female Protagonist Is Extremely Beautiful, Vicious and Cruel. She Loves the Male Protagonist, but Also Tortures and Humiliates Him.
Please Read a Novel About Forced Love from the Heroine! ! !
I want to read a book like "Quickly Wear: The Yandere Male Protagonist is Jealous Again". A novel in which the female protagonist is forced to love the male protagonist. You can also tell me which plane you want to travel to. I really need it. I want it! ! It's a little sadistic but a sweet one. The male protagonist starts to hate the female protagonist and then the female protagonist forces her to love her.
A Story About the Heroine Imprisoning the Hero
The Heroine Imprisons the Hero
Similar to the heroine who has a crush on the hero, but cannot love her, and is finally drugged and imprisoned, but the hero desperately escapes
The Heroine Is a Yandere! Yandere! Yandere
I want to read a book similar to "After Rebirth, I Get into the Arms of the Yandere Chaebol Wife".
Is There a Yandere One, a Very Exciting One?
Ask the Heroine to Imprison the Hero
The female protagonist is a shady person, an ordinary person. She is not familiar with the male protagonist but likes him, so she has been preparing for a long time and planned to imprison the male protagonist. The male protagonist fell in love with the female protagonist while being imprisoned.
Big Giant Yandere
I want to read a book similar to "Beautiful Baby Is Pampered by Yanderes".
Is There the Kind of Book That Is so Yandere That It Makes Me Excited in the Middle of the Night?
I want to read a book like "After Failed to Escape from the Yandere Heroine". That's about it. Is there anything crazier than this? I hope it's the kind where almost all the text is about Bing Jiao. There aren't many other characters.
A Yandere Novel, a Complete Lunatic
Want to watch something like "Surprise!" The book "Failed to Escape from the Yandere Senior".
Is There Any Female Protagonist Who Tortured the Male Protagonist to Death?
I want to read a book like "I was kidnapped by the Demon Emperor, and I cried and begged to be let go (Yandere's disease)". Are there any painful stories about the female protagonist abusing the male protagonist, like cultivating immortals?
As a short work, the main plot of the male and female protagonists from unexpected love to escape from imprisonment is relatively clear and complete. The dialogue design fits the character's personality (such as the heroine's paranoid lines), and there are no obvious loopholes in the basic logic. However, the rhythm control is slightly unbalanced: the lack of foreshadowing for the passionate love weakens the impact of the later twists, and the escape at the end is handled hastily. The author still has a relatively good understanding of the core characteristics of the yandere genre (controlling desire, extreme emotions). After all, it is the first time he opened a book and he dared to try such extreme emotional descriptions. The oppressive feeling in scenes such as the female protagonist imprisoning the male protagonist is qualified, and some dialogue conflict segments are described in more detail. Compared with assembly-line works of the same theme, it is obvious that the author put his heart into it. The current shortcomings are mainly in the writing style (such as relying too much on dialogue to advance the plot) and rough details. It is recommended to increase the interweaving of environmental and psychological descriptions in subsequent creations to balance the "plot density"; at the same time, the ending should be kept open and full of regrets. This traditional ending method is relatively unique in the current novel environment, but it still lacks some detailed descriptions and the impact of the scene is not strong. As an article for a newcomer to test the waters, it is considered a good one. If the author really plans to go down the novel route, he should be prepared to write a lot of short stories like this. As for writing style, there are not many good writers in the Tomato field. They are all about the same, but he still needs to develop his own characteristics. Finally, after reading the previous preface, I also hope that the author will continue to work hard and have expectations for life [laughs]
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You can still work harder
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