We Already Broke Up, So Why Are You Still Arresting Me?
明明都分手了，为什么还要抓我
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 21k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Subgenre
- Urban Everyday
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
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The Female Lead Is a Yandere! A Yandere! A Yandere!
I want books like Reborn into the Arms of My Sickly, Female Tycoon Wife.
Looking for Novels Where the Female Lead Forces the Male Lead to Love Her!!!
Looking for books like "Quick Transmigration: The Sickly, Brooding Male Lead Is Jealous Again". I want a novel where the female lead forces her love on the male lead. Quick transmigration is fine too, just tell me which arc it is. I really need this. It has to have a happy ending! A little angst, lots of sweetness. The male lead starts out hating the female lead, and then she forces her love on him, and...
Yandere Female Leads, Come On In! 😍😍😍!!!!
Yandere! One Female Lead!! Pure Romance!!!
Are there any pure-love stories with just one heroine, who's a yandere? Lately I've been seeing male leads get tangled up with so many yandere girls, and it makes me so sad. Sob sob~
The Female Lead Imprisons the Male Lead
Stories where the female lead secretly loves the male lead but can't have him, so she drugs and imprisons him, while he desperately tries to escape.
A Female Lead with Obsessive, Possessive Tendencies
Any Female-Supremacy Stories Where the Male Lead Is Always Beaten?
Yandere Mature Women! Yandere Mature Women!
Any Really Intense Yandere Novels?
Looking for a Story Where the Female Lead Imprisons the Male Lead
The female lead is an ordinary, gloomy person. She isn't close to the male lead, but she likes him and has spent a long time planning to kidnap and imprison him. During his imprisonment, the male lead falls for her.
A Stunningly Beautiful, Vicious, Cruel Heroine Who Loves the Male Lead but Torments and Humiliates Him
I’ve Read Too Many Yandere Men. I Want a Yandere, Unhinged Woman! Please Recommend Some
Looking for books similar to The Yandere Queen Goes Wild After Her Dark Awakening. A ruthless killer who has slaughtered countless people~
Yandere Stories, I’ve Recently Lost Control and Become a Yandere, I Need Yandere Fiction
Yandere, Beautiful Woman, Male-Oriented, Mature Woman
Tsundere, Female Pursues Male, and Yandere
Any School Romance Where the Female Lead Is a Yandere with an Extreme Possessive Streak and Is Super Jealous?
Any Yandere Novels That Get Right to the Point from the Beginning? 😊
Character Development, Villain, Sweet on the Outside, Dark Within, Yandere
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Yandere! Leave Your Yandere Recommendations Here! Male Protagonists
Please, I Need the Most Unhinged Yandere Books on Tomato!
Looking for books similar to The Deity Kneels to Kiss Him Tonight.
Stories About Yandere Characters
Anything about yandere characters is fine.
Yandere Stories: Pure, Unadulterated Psychos
I'd like to read something like "Shocking! I Failed to Escape from My Yandere Senior".
Extremely, Extremely Yandere
I want to read something like Pretty Baby Imprisoned and Doted On by Yanderes.
Obsessive, Possessive Love
Hey, everyone, any recommendations for stories with a really possessive character? Please, I’m out of things to read.
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As a short work, the main plot of the male and female protagonists from unexpected love to escape from imprisonment is relatively clear and complete. The dialogue design fits the character's personality (such as the heroine's paranoid lines), and there are no obvious loopholes in the basic logic. However, the rhythm control is slightly unbalanced: the lack of foreshadowing for the passionate love weakens the impact of the later twists, and the escape at the end is handled hastily. The author still has a relatively good understanding of the core characteristics of the yandere genre (controlling desire, extreme emotions). After all, it is the first time he opened a book and he dared to try such extreme emotional descriptions. The oppressive feeling in scenes such as the female protagonist imprisoning the male protagonist is qualified, and some dialogue conflict segments are described in more detail. Compared with assembly-line works of the same theme, it is obvious that the author put his heart into it. The current shortcomings are mainly in the writing style (such as relying too much on dialogue to advance the plot) and rough details. It is recommended to increase the interweaving of environmental and psychological descriptions in subsequent creations to balance the "plot density"; at the same time, the ending should be kept open and full of regrets. This traditional ending method is relatively unique in the current novel environment, but it still lacks some detailed descriptions and the impact of the scene is not strong. As an article for a newcomer to test the waters, it is considered a good one. If the author really plans to go down the novel route, he should be prepared to write a lot of short stories like this. As for writing style, there are not many good writers in the Tomato field. They are all about the same, but he still needs to develop his own characteristics. Finally, after reading the previous preface, I also hope that the author will continue to work hard and have expectations for life 😄
Very pretty, oh, good, come on
It's great if you give me a big drop
You can still work harder
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