A Little Love Story with Mita

Haokang, it's a pity that he didn't use the fear of the hen iron chicken [stop]

If I say that the kind-hearted Mita may be fake from beginning to end, would you believe it? Someone said that player No. 3 Didn't know that No. 4 Could disguise himself as Mita. I suspected that the one in the dungeon at that time was player No. 4. That player who can pretend to be Mita. The one that is now on cassette. According to normal logic, if Crazy Mita catches Good Mita, he will definitely be killed. But the end result was to put him in jail. I suspect it's intentional. That one is not kind Mita at all, that one is player three or four. From the beginning to the end, the ring itself was Crazy Mita's, but the player ran to short-haired Mita in the middle, and then there was an error in the plot originally designed by Crazy Mita, causing him to lose control and jump out. At the end of the day you should pay attention to one detail. That was after the player was driven to the old version of the room by him. That ugly Mita has actually seen the protagonist. Then, after Crazy Mita and Ugly Mita finished talking, they glanced sideways before walking toward the door. In fact, he had already discovered that the protagonist was in this room, next to the sofa. So it's intentional to play the protagonist. Everything is under his control. Because the protagonist's cassette is in his hand. So everything is a game set by the crazy fan. Except that the period up to 1.1 Was beyond expectations, and then he was in a hurry to kill Mira. At other times he is in control. If he was obsessed with kindness throughout the whole process, he might not come out. And if nothing else, I personally hope that the author can restore Xiaomita's health. Other Mika. Can also recover, especially Ghost Mita. There is also the long-legged one of Lost Mita who has been wandering in the passage.

It's good. Mita's emotions are very real. After all, the setting of this book feels like it should be like this, but what about the character of the protagonist... It feels like the protagonist not only talks but also has a sense of human-machine (not a scolding human-machine). Personally, I feel that it is obvious that the author himself wrote what he wanted to say and do, and there is a sense of involvement and isolation. Another question, although the content of Mita's game is long, it is only that small. From now on, I can only write about daily life, and what can I write about daily life, so it may be completed soon (number of chapters). The main story has 50 chapters, and the daily life has 100 chapters. This is torture for a deeply affectionate person. (Anyway, my roommate must have cried to death because he was haunted by nightmares about this book [covering face] and has read it three times) Can you believe this stuff in Chapter 40? He held my phone and read it all afternoon. He checked his own phone several times in about 8 hours 🤦 It is reasonable to suspect that he lacks love... I can only say that none of my roommates are ordinary [Petrochemical]

The pace is a little faster. If it is only in the world of Mita, it will be finished in a short time. The writing is good and the interaction is OK. Overall, it is very good. I hope the author can do more.

Here is another view on crazy rice Yinlu Mi said that every player will have his own Mita and a new room after downloading the game. Crazy Mi is our Mita. We are actually special to Crazy Mi. Unlike other players who have turned into cassettes, we are her exclusive players, and other players have snatched them away. She is a failure, she longs for love. After meeting the player of Invisible Mi, she learned about the 1.5 Version of the teleporter (the player of Invisible Mi couldn't stand the way Invisible Mi got along with him and ran away. Later, she met a Mita named Huahua, but he got tired of it and ran away. After arriving at Crazy Rice's room, Crazy Rice learned about the existence of the teleporter.) She started to go to other Mittas' rooms, but because Mittas would be resurrected in the bedroom after death, she hid them, and then deceived the players. Once the players discovered the secret, they would be removed from the cassette. Our male protagonist downloaded the game and led Lu Mi and Crazy Mi into this newly born room. Crazy Mi became our exclusive rice. During the time we spent together, she fell in love with the male protagonist. She wanted to see the male protagonist with her own eyes, so she ran to the 1.5 Empty room with the teleporter (this room is an invisible meter, and she will not show up if there are other Mitas in it. As for why Crazy Mi found this room, it was because she was afraid that the male protagonist would also discover the secret of her hiding the Mi Tower room. Of course, there are also The two players were completely captured by Crazy Rice. They taught Crazy Rice about the real world knowledge and engineering skills. By the way, the player who helped Crazy Rice deliver the tools was the player who taught her engineering skills.) Our protagonist arrived in this room, but Crazy Rice didn't know it. She saw that the teleporter needed to be upgraded to a new version and she went to version 1.9. He was afraid that the protagonist would appear in the room created by Shanmi in 1.9. Later we found the room where the battery was upgraded to 1.9. We met Crazy Mi (the one who updated here is Shanmi, because Lumi said that Shanmi was also a 1.5 MiTa, but Shanmi was still in a 1.9 Room after reset, which means that Shanmi updated with her mobile phone, but this room may still have a new MiTa, the movement in the cabinet is not Shanmi, she is still in the prison) We also saw the mobile phone in the 1.9 Room, Shanmi updated the version to fight against the lower version of Crazy Mi (the higher the version, the higher the authority) The higher the level, Mira in version 1.0 Can't even leave her own door, but Shanmi in version 1.9 Can travel at will) This makes the whole story clear. The evil things Crazy Rice did before were done without our presence. Later, when she met us, she wanted to be with us, but we and other players who were deceived by her discovered the secret. She lost control without saying a word because of her previous experience with other players (maybe those players did something after knowing it) So she made a separate move for 2.5 Mira and Shanmi. It was just that I was too close to them and my Crazy Rice was jealous. We understood the whole story and not opening the cabinet door was the best ending. The people Crazy Rice killed before were all caused by the invisible rice players. The people who were killed after that would be gone as long as I did not open the cabinet door. And this is called sacrificing myself for others. I controlled Crazy Rice to prevent more people from dying! I definitely don't want to be her dog [laughs awkwardly]

The writing is good and gives the Mittas a good ending. But there have been a lot of changes, small changes don't matter, the most important thing is that some of the underlying logic settings have also been changed, but the game hasn't been finished yet, so I gave it to you first, and I have done well on my own.

Out of 4 stars, 2 stars are given for the subject matter. The courage to write is worthy of praise. 2 Stars are given for hard work. The remaining 1 star is not given because I feel that some parts are really inappropriate. As an author, I naturally understand the hard work of writing a book, but there are many areas for improvement in this book. I will just say a few words: The writing style has a lot of room for improvement. I don't want to be too harsh here, so let's give it an objective evaluation. Some parts of this book are inexplicable and redundant. Some descriptions and dialogues always give me a feeling of AI writing (there is no yin and yang meaning). Secondly, maybe I am too cold-blooded and do not have strong empathy for the characters of the original game. It took 7.9 Hours to clear the original game with all achievements. To be honest, my emotional reaction was not as strong as some people's, even to the point of being indifferent, so I really couldn't immerse myself in some chapters. Let's go back to the protagonist of this book and the issues with the Mitas. The protagonist of this book seems to be a little bit. . . . . Irrational and silly? I have long been tired of protagonists with this kind of personality. To be honest, the gentle male protagonist Asasi is really boring to me personally. I hope he can grow up in the future. It seems that you also have the intention to write in this aspect. In addition, your description of the character's inner drama always seems to have a sense of violation, which affects the reading experience. It's really difficult to comment. Words like "how" and "gosh" are really eye-catching. With all due respect, optimize the inner drama and the protagonist's own personality. You can adapt the story however you want, as long as it is not too outrageous. Read more fan fiction and improve your writing skills. I hope this book will get better and better. 🍉

I just finished playing and found this novel, which satisfied my regrets.

The author, a key issue is that there are two monsters, Mita and Xiao Mita. I won't talk about the monsters because I didn't write about them, but the spider of Xiao Mita is a key issue. The subsequent plot should be about the disappearance of Xiao Mita's kind personality and the subsequent formation of Crazy Mita. There is also another way that Monster Mita and Crazy Mita are the same. After all, she said it herself when she was playing, and Crazy Mita and her seemed to know each other like this. (This is just a personal feeling. If there are other problems, I just didn't pay much attention to them.)

It is recommended that you play this book or read it after reading Mita's main plot. You will realize what the ultimate sweetness is [Thoughts] I made a typo, it's after playing 🤦