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When you update, the subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be magnified. Astringency will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the plot progresses Exhibition is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the slightest praise starts to sound, and the dead numbers are collected. Volume begins to decline. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voice of praise will The sound became louder and louder. When you were at the tenth watch, the scholar's debate was deafening, and his tolerant attitude was deafening. The degree is implemented internally and externally. When you are twenty, the memory of the bookworm has a place for you, even if In the long life, your name will also leave a dazzling mark. Traces. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of them The problem all comes from insufficient updates.

It looks pretty good now, but I also think the male protagonist's Honkai energy battery life is a problem. The Herrscher core in Skyfire must have its own energy, but according to the author's intention, it seems that the Herrscher core is simply written as a Honkai energy crystallization. When will the battery life problem be solved? You can't always go to Collapse World to refill it every time you use it, right?

Give me a five-star review and just ask for a quick update When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, the memory of the bookworm has a place for you. Even in the long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

In fact, you can return to the battle without adding spells.

It's beautiful, but it's too short😭😭. I haven't seen this type of fanfic like Captain for a long time. The cover has the moonlight on it, so how come it's under the moonlight? It's been a long time since I've been in contact with Valkyrie, and the characters on the protagonist's side haven't appeared in a long time [Thinking]

What I'm most afraid of is that the protagonist will be discovered by the authorities. The protagonist is a time traveler who knows the information, but still pretends not to know. Pretending to be a master of analysis to reveal some information, it's better not to know, or even to be aboriginal or from other different worlds.

I forgot to comment. This book looks pretty good. Those who say the protagonist is weak actually have nothing to do with it. After all, there is a hook that can absorb Honkai and become stronger. In fact, the strength is greatly improved. Well written so far

The character descriptions are all good, and the logic is also pretty good. There is also a lot of communication in the daily plot. I like this very much. The main plot is also developing slowly, but basically the main character appears unexpectedly and it is okay [like] [like]

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I won't disturb everyone. I had some opinions at first, but then I stopped. Well, my opinion is that of course I like to read those reviews from 4 to 5. It looks great, I forgot to comment after watching it for a while. I want to see the captain's identity and his relationship with Beng San

Come on, come on, you can do it, but can you speed up the process of the protagonist becoming a captain? I came here with this theme in mind, but as of now, there is only one Paramecium related to Honkai Impact If you don't write about the relevant plot, others will scold you: the headline is @MyGoodProtagonist's Surname is Lin [It's definitely not what I want to see, definitely not (I firmly believe it)] [Please take a closer look]

Very good, the character of the protagonist is set very well

If a concept-level Kamen Rider W is signed, and if it uses people, then it will bring together the power of everyone in the sky and on earth, the past and the future of the world.

@ Protagonist's surname is Lin. I feel that the combat power is not quite right. I suggest that we unify the combat power, otherwise we will have to compete in combat power later, which is very troublesome.

The book is okay, but there are too many powerful brats, especially the Bengsan ones, which are simply sugar pills. I recommend reading the book without commenting on it.

It's pretty good. Except for the first few chapters, the content is a bit messy. The layout in the later chapters is obviously much better. It's very smooth to read, and there is a feeling of unfinished content. However, the disadvantage is that there are few follow-up chapters, which can easily lead to a feeling of decline. If you lose the enthusiasm to follow the book, and if you become addicted to the book, the data will become worse.

From the first chapter to the latest chapter, I read it in one go, which was great. Not enough, not enough at all. Come on, author!

It's developmental but pretty good. It's not a straightforward novel, but it could grow a little faster.

Kavin is a genius, you

I need more, I haven't seen enough. Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

Good book, but the author seems to have crashed [face covering]

It looks pretty good so far, keep it up

Support the new book By the way, when will the JueZuZero book be updated again?

Let's give it a 5-star rating first. It feels good so far and is very appetizing.

Now I have to finish watching it. It's pretty good. At least the protagonist doesn't complain about goldfinger and other poisonous points, and the character design is not considered OOC. I look forward to the follow-up.

The author is awesome and very interesting. Please don't stop updating and continue to update.

Overall, it's very good, except it's a little too little and a little watery [you taste it carefully]

It's very confusing, and I don't think it's toxic at all, but my brain rejected the words in the book. Although I feel uncomfortable, like I want to rush out but can't, I still give it five stars.

It's okay. The setting is quite interesting. A rare comprehensive comic chat group series.

By the way, can the author add a stone man (Kujodu)?😭😭😭