Male to Female: Immortal and Immortal, How About Solving the Case?

Catch up on the latest chapter reading experience There is no ambiguous situation at the moment. It is regarded as a single story. I don't know what will happen next. The first thing I don't like is that every relative of the protagonist is urging marriage, which affects the reading experience. Second, the protagonist's situation is also unclear as to whether he should find a man. I didn't deny my thoughts in front of my relatives. I don't dare to read any further because I don't like this kind of situation in transformation tattoos. Third, I met the first love of the high school native protagonist. Although there was no ambiguity or anything, this man was obsessed with me. Although the protagonist did not give him a good look, it affected the reading experience. Fourth, this so-called niece is a bit ungrateful. Anyway, I can't stand this kind of character, which greatly affects the reading experience. Fifth, there is nothing wrong with finding two women to learn yoga and dancing, but I won't say anything if you make videos to share your life, and I won't say anything if you ask them to make videos to teach you. But you have to remember that you are writing about jcs who are fighting on the front line. If you still write about this kind of thing, it feels very disconnected. The character doesn't match. Sixth, I don't know what you think about writing a curse of the immortal in modern times. I want to see how you finish it later. If you don't finish it well, you will be scolded to death. Overall, great potential. Next is personal preference I like to read all kinds of transformation stories, but I don't like the ones about transformation into marriage and those about transformation into a single and having an affair with a man, or about transformation into a woman and giving a harem to a man, because they are too disgusting and have been poisoned. If this book is also about having an affair with a man or sleeping with a man and having a child, then the author should give me an accurate message so that I can avoid it. After all, everyone's time is limited, and the purpose of reading novels is to relax, not to make you disgusting. That's it, thank you.

I feel like this setting is okay, as are the first 5 pictures. I recommend changing this setting. For example, this dog system allows the protagonist to do some very dirty things. I feel that some people will think that the protagonist is sick when they see this kind of system, and then just slide away. And some people think that if you don't stick with women, do you like men? Ah? It turns out that the main character is a gay [Chigua] I think it would be better to change this. If the main character doesn't like women because the plot requires it, just think of me as farting, or it's a foreshadowing.

This is the first time I read a story about transformation and solving a crime. It is a good story and the writing is good. The male-to-female transformation is very consistent with my ideal transformation story. It is either crying or shy. 5 Star praise! Publish the review as soon as possible so that more people can see this book.

I have read three books by this author, all of them are about transformation. Except for the novel Han Bao, which is short and weak, the other two are quite long. This one is over a hundred chapters long. I like to read transformation novels, but transformation novels are too easy and short. I have hundreds of abandoned transformation novels like this in my collection.

Tell the truth. This novel has a score of 7 which makes no sense. It's wonderful throughout and has no bad points. It's better than most novels rated 9 or above on Tomato. Sure enough, when searching for novels on Tomato, you can't just look at the ratings

The theme is novel and the setting is ok. You can add some daily life or simply add a police dog teammate between the two cases to alleviate the heaviness caused by the vicious criminal case. This is just my idea. The author can think about it. The five-star praise encourages the author.

Great book, why are so few people reading it?

I like beauties because they have good figures, beautiful people and good outlook on life, and their strength is incredible...

It's good to read. This is my first crime-solving book and I found it interesting as I continued reading it. Other crime novels become boring after about an hour of reading.

I want to see the heroine take both black and white. . Become the number one killer. . Go black and eat black. [Snickering]. .

Very good novel

Let's not talk about anything else. I'll give you a five-star encouragement when I see the transformation article.

Good looking hehehehehehehehehe

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

It's pretty~ not bad

It's a pity, it's too short. It would be nice if it could be longer. Five-star praise!

Transformation to handle cases is well written [I understand]

It's good-looking. The heroine's strength is very high. She can kill forty or fifty people by herself.

Very good, worthy of being an old author, high-quality grass!

Absolutely high IQ, clear thinking, five-star recommendation

Why did it end so suddenly?

If the protagonist had not experienced two assassinations in a row, how could she dare to let her sister come to her home later?

The author's new book is still okay.

This book is still okay

Okay, I like to see this

It's beautiful, but the number of words is less.

Not bad, pretty good-looking

I highly recommend it. It's very good.

Ah ah ah ah ah [send heart]

Does it look good? Love it. Love it.