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I think this one is already very good among the first genius themes, especially the plot of the manor. It can be said in one sentence that courage is the hymn of mankind. The fire of hope is sown by the predecessors, and cultivated by the descendants in the footsteps of the predecessors. Like a torch, it is passed down from generation to generation.

Not bad, not bad, looks quite comfortable and smooth, but I feel like there are a bit few main character shots.

Well written! It feels like a game that is too real!

The upgrade is too slow. Will anyone really play the game and not be able to upgrade to the first level in a few months?

It is a novel written with great care. I really like this kind of novel without all kinds of magical puzzles. It can be seen that the author wants to build an ideal version of the "game world". The shortcoming is that it is a little stiff, but this is not a problem. It will become natural if you write too much. Very good, there is obvious improvement, it is no longer as stiff as before, it is very smooth, and the plot arrangement is also very good. I like this kind of random events very much. The author has to make good use of his own vitality and vitality. This is the only novel I have ever given such an evaluation to among all the fourth natural disaster novels I have read with a score of 8 or above. When I get older, I no longer feel like writing.

Alas,, , very good. It was midnight watching. The protagonist cheats once and changes from the early stage to the middle and late stage. I feel like it will be over after just one or two more attempts. The author wants to speed up the process? ? ? It would be a pity to throw it away if it becomes tasteless.

I can't help it. It turns out I haven't given any comments yet. Beautiful! ! ! I think about the fourth natural disaster, and there is no ambiguity! What a delicious meal! Boss, I will follow you Typo... The fourth natural disaster. I feel that the world framework of Boss is quite large, and the pace is relatively slow.

It looks good to me, so encourage me and keep up the good work

The writing is pretty good, but the upgrades are not clear, there are no professions, and there are too few players. These are all problems. Come on, author.

When it comes to the serfs in the manor, it is really touching and trembling. It's as good as the hot-blooded novels I read.

Said that good-looking things will happen in this life

Four stars support it

Except for those emotional descriptions that made me feel very awkward, luckily I skipped them Looks good, keep up the good work