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It's good to watch. Although the plot is very typical, it makes people want to watch it. It's a rare masterpiece in Western fantasy. In addition, the will of "seven" runs throughout the entire article, and even the time when the author publishes the article is exactly 7 o'clock in the morning and afternoon every day.

It is a masterpiece among otherworld novels. It is very popular and classic, but it has a more soothing feeling compared to some veteran otherworld novels of the same type. So far, it seems to be okay. Good luck, author! Keep writing hard! Later on, I couldn't read it anymore, it was a bit redundant.

It looks pretty good. It's a very traditional Sai Wan work. I haven't seen this kind of work for a long time, and I am very interested in it. The characterization is too typical, it feels a bit mask-like, but I don't think it's bad. The only thing that makes me feel abrupt is that the heroine's character change is too sudden. Why did she change from a cute little lolita to a lumpy and complaining servant in just one year (although this kind of character is not bad) and it is completely unimaginable that the protagonist is only about 10 years old. If the age of this book is ignored, the impression of this book is still very good. There are a few minor flaws, but they are innocuous. Those who like Western fantasy can really read it. To be honest, the impression from the back is not as good as the front. Let's see how it goes from the back.

I have read 37 chapters so far, and overall it is very good. Each character in it is very well portrayed. It is a traditional Japanese RPG world of swords and magic. Hulim at the beginning shows the mentality of an ordinary seven-year-old girl very well. This kind of innocent little loli is so rare. Then he learned seven basic first-order magic through interaction with his family. His mother Lilia gave a lot of help. Later, he was taught by the Elf King and the preparatory school teacher. He learned and grew quickly, and it was obvious that Hulim's own efforts were rewarded. But there are also some shortcomings that can be improved. For example, the bet with the Elf King was written directly one year later, which made it feel weird for Fran to be tsundere towards Hulim when she appeared. If a paragraph about Fran's family's attitude towards other nobles in the town could be written first, and then it would be more natural to write about Fran's tsundere in school a year later. The same goes for the part where Fran was kidnapped. Both the family and the school were very warm and safe. It was a bit strange to suddenly write about being kidnapped. Although there was a foreshadowing of Fran refusing to be picked up by the housekeeper, it was still abrupt. It is recommended that the plot of Hulim passing by the old neighborhood after school go to the forest for training. Overall, the author's writing is excellent. It's been a long time since I've seen a novel with such a realistic world, three-dimensional characters, and compact writing. I hope the author will stick to it!

This book is really good, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Dong Zhuo. However, Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuo Shou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. Apart from that, I prefer Zhuge Liang's use of flowers. A sentence said by 108 Monkeys in Guoshan: "Young man, don't show off your arrogance in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey knocking him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowing of the fighting scenes that make you feel like you are there, and the description of the characters is very good!

This book should be a hands-on work by a foreign author. The plot is very traditional. Many of the routines seem to go back ten or twenty years ago, and you can immediately guess the plot behind it. It also has advantages. You can intuitively feel the psychological growth of the protagonist. At the same time, the flavor of Western fantasy is very authentic. It is not a fake Western fantasy covered in Eastern fantasy. The "indigenous" can better reflect the author's skills.

Facts have proved that even a relatively primitive Western fantasy can be turned into a fascinating masterpiece with the author's better writing style and complete and harmonious character creation. There are no exaggerated rhetoric or abrupt insertions, but a delicate picture is unfolded to you, as relaxed and comfortable as drinking a cup of coffee on a bright afternoon and letting the clouds roll and relax.

The one who came to fry the fish belongs to +Concise yet graphic text +A Western Fantasy Story of New Wine in Old Bottles +A protagonist who is genius but not arrogant, and has divinity in his humanity +Non-stereotypical characterization

It can be used as a daily listening book. The heroine has no cp, is light-hearted, her current family situation is safe, and she has no knives, no poisons, no bulls. Part of the plot can be guessed, and there are also some surprises.

This book tells the story of a young girl's growth and the rise of a genius. It is a very good article about Xihuan Feng Aotian. The writing style is delicate and tactful. It is worth reading.

In today's situation where there are many invincible streams and system streams, it is really a breath of fresh air to have such a simple alternate world novel. The excellent narrative ability makes people very comfortable to read, and the description ability of each fragment is also very good. When reading, the reader can follow the text to present the scene in the mind, and it feels like returning to the Japanese comics a few years ago. It is excellent and deserves a high rating. I look forward to continuing to write and leave me with a good reading memory.

Writing style: good, very immersive Plot: Good, with many climax points and little hydrology. The unimportant ones will be skipped appropriately. The viewing experience is good. Story: Generally speaking, it's a standard Western fantasy, but some changes have been made. It won't feel too cliche, but there won't be too many new ideas. Non-toxic Overall quality: excellent

A quite classic Western fantasy Japanese RPG light novel. The heroine Hulim is a descendant of a hero and a hereditary noble. Although the family has been lonely three hundred years later, there is still a swordsmanship inheritance passed down. Hulim is even more gifted and has all the magic adaptability to summon the Elf King. Three years of training has transformed her. Three years later, the Elf King left, and Hulim also embarked on a journey to the Royal Capital Magic Academy. Hulim's journey continues...

At first glance, the rhythm is okay, and no poisonous spots have been found so far. Revise it, it was not written well after the academy. 1. The turning point is abrupt 2. There is almost no role creation

The impression that the protagonist gave me is not only that the battle is great, but also that it is fun to play. I will give a comprehensive evaluation. However, I mainly want to give other readers who want to read it a judgment standard, and also tell the author what needs to be improved, so I will not talk too much about the advantages. The advantage is that the plot is relatively coherent and there are not many flaws in the setting. The protagonist is not completely crushed in the main battle, but has some backs and forths. The shortcomings are the various typical plots of the plot, such as the protagonist having to solve a lot of troubles by himself and arriving late even if he calls someone, as well as the pacing problem. There is no real daily life to ease the tense and continuous plot conflicts. The enemies come one after another, but the daily life is brushed off. This will increase the reader's boredom and pressure, especially the protagonist's emotions are generally relatively flat. The low degree of relaxation caused by troubles one after another will become more serious, so I can only give 3.5 To 4 stars out of 5 stars.

It's a pretty good Western fantasy novel. The logic in the book is strong. As long as you don't skip it, it's unlikely to be toxic. I don't agree with Chapter 93 being toxic. The protagonist is just a child, and there are inevitably shortcomings in his actions. What's more, there is nothing wrong with the battle from the perspective of the protagonist. Why is it so bad [crying]

It's a very good book. The college feels like Hogwarts. When you see the stairs moving, your mind automatically generates pictures. The whole book feels bland and not boring. I personally like reading singles or hundreds. After catching up with the progress, I thought this Arthur was Artoria at first, and now it's the struggle for imperial power. I don't know if the author wants to write this as a female protagonist cp or something. I'll wait and see.

This book is more of a refreshing novel. The heroine is super strong and the protagonist's image is well portrayed. She feels a bit like a lone wolf and is relatively introverted, but it does not prevent her from being very powerful. Those who like to read face-slapping and entertaining novels and book lovers with strong mobility can read it, but it doesn't require any brainpower.

The atmosphere of life that I read reminded me of "The Witch's Journey", "The Burial of Florian", and "The Jobless Reincarnation". It is very leisurely and refreshing, the mood is very comfortable, and the writing is exquisite. I feel that many characters in the book have emotions that can be contagious. It is so real that I am a little yearning for it. The content is not boring. As far as the 80 chapters I have read, this is another book that ranks first in my heart. My love for this book now is indescribable, as if I am reading Jobless (I have only watched the anime, and I may read the novel in the future). I hope it will be longer. I will give my final thoughts after reading it.

It is a novel with a traditional Western fantasy flavor, and the protagonist is female, but it does not have the problems of some other novels. The protagonist is not overly proud and has his own ideas. This book has its own main line and a logical narrative. As a free novel, it is a rare treasure. If you like Western fantasy and like the protagonist to be female, I recommend reading this novel.

A classic western fantasy novel, very plain and comfortable to read. (Why is the rating even 7 points? [Shocked])

A few clicks are very fast. The interaction between the protagonist and Semilia in the early stage is quite interesting. The training and growth of the protagonist are good (although it is very classic, but it is not bad as a way to pass the time). However, from the eighth to the ninth volume, a large number of characters appear with a controlled rhythm, but there is almost no impression. It sounds a bit like the products of the industrial assembly line (focusing on Arthur and Alice. In fact, this section can definitely use more words, including the description of the brave) [face covering] I hope the pace can be slowed down a bit in the future and I will give five stars mainly because of personal preference [face covering]

A masterpiece of Western fantasy. The setting is not novel, but the writing is good, the story rhythm is well controlled, and the story content is also excellent.

This is my first time rating on Tomato. I have finished reading the first volume, but it has given me a great feeling. It turns out that the ending of the volume does not need to be spectacular, it only requires one person's waiting and one person's thoughts. The witch of the Seventh Witch does not symbolize the villain, but the best hope for the future between a child and another older child. Unlike those novels that use witches as synonyms for villains, this one is synonymous with hope and friendship, waiting and longing!

The rhythm is smooth, it's a classic Western fantasy, the writing is not bad, but I haven't read enough of the 100 chapters.

Renaissance text. The first volume was eye-catching. It was about the little witch's childhood daily life and cultivation. It felt very warm and cute. The second volume may have been because the first volume felt so good, which led to high expectations for the second volume and a mediocre impression.

The front part is particularly beautiful. I really liked the way Xilim looked when she was a child. It was so cute. It was a bit delayed when writing the ending. The overall style is that of a Japanese light novel. The way the characters talk is very Japanese. Every time I see "Uncle Ben", I automatically think of Oresama's voiceover... Overall, there are more female characters than male characters, but those in high positions are basically male characters. The description of female characters is a bit stereotyped, which is a bit regretful. The author's writing style is very good, the plot design is also very good, and the description of the fighting scenes is also very direct and will not be confused. It should be the trumpet of some big boss in Tomato. It's just that the battle at the end was a bit draggy and made me a little impatient to watch, but overall it looked good despite its shortcomings. As soon as I wrote about the war, I started to feel dragged out. It felt like I suddenly wanted to write a group portrait, but every character was very one-sided and couldn't stand up. I skipped the memories and kills, so it felt very dragged out. But when it comes to the protagonist, especially the part where he becomes a god, it feels like it ended in a hurry, and the second half is very painful to watch.

This is not a good work, but it is a work that I like, just like "Guilty Crown". Although it has many shortcomings, I still like it. The first thing worth mentioning is the protagonist Hulim. I have read a lot of cheating articles on Tomato these days, but the protagonist is like one of the seven deadly sins. He will do anything that can increase his power, and he has no companions around him. It is simply unbearable for me. Gentleness, kindness, and strength are words we often hear and say, but it is difficult for a person to truly achieve these. This is one of the reasons why I like the protagonist Hulim. Overall, this story has an uncoordinated feeling. Sometimes the sudden acceleration of the pace makes me feel a bit abrupt, but overall I still like this story very much. There is no need to say much about the protagonist. Even the supporting characters have specially written their stories, and the ending does not involve forcibly resurrecting the dead. How can I put it, this story gave me a sense of long-lasting flow. Our story with Hulim ends here, but her story continues Also, the author definitely reads Japanese comics or light novels😋😋

It is a very high-quality novel about another world. All in all I feel very comfortable and there is nothing toxic about it at the moment. It's just too little, I look forward to the author's update [Thoughts]

I have read nearly 300 chapters, and it is well written. It tells the story of the protagonist's growth and adventure. But when I think back about it, I am a little vague about the character of the protagonist. I only know that he is a bit shady, smart, and the characters are not three-dimensional and have no real sense. The article often describes the protagonist as being of that person's bloodline, which is a metaphor for what the protagonist is destined to be. It makes people feel that the protagonist is shrouded in a shadow, and all her efforts, experience, and luck seem to be worth mentioning. The article is a long paragraph about the daily life and cultivation life of the protagonist. There are very few climaxes, which makes people a little tired. I saw the protagonist taking care of herself and writing about her past life again. I was really tired of reading. There are also companions. While watching, I felt that the protagonist had no feelings for everyone except the Elf King. Whether it was Xiao Qingmei or the companions she met later, the protagonist did not show any emotions. However, later, when the white cat encountered something, she went to save it without hesitation. Maybe it was a comradeship that the author did not write about? It is clear that the traffickers were cautious and well-planned in the front end, but here a reckless character is directly highlighted. I really can't figure out the character of the protagonist. This reckless recklessness, and I don't know where their friendship was established. But overall, it's still a good read. If you have the patience and don't mind the lack of fun, if you want to read a Western fantasy novel, this book is highly recommended.