Primordial World: Snatching a Chat Group at the Start

After reading more than two hundred pictures, 90% are about the plot of the group members' world and have nothing to do with the protagonist. Seventy-eight percent are about the group members being in the water group and have nothing to do with the protagonist. One percent are about the protagonist himself. The result is all about introducing the realm. Only one percent of the plot is relatively normal. Hmm,,,,, it's pretty good. . . . . . I've finished watching The Horror of Water. The protagonist's normal plot is at most 1% It doesn't look like a novel. It's introduced and explained over and over again. . . . .

It is impossible for the Daluo Jinxian under the concept of high-end prehistoric in the Internet to succeed in cultivation. The Daluo Jinxian under this concept becomes the Daluo Jinxian when it becomes a embryo, and it is all born. A living being has trillions of possibilities, trillions of developments, and trillions of timelines. As long as there is one possibility of becoming a Daluo, then the Daluo on that timeline will converge on the timeline. The past, present, and future will all be unified, and the possibility of one in a trillion trillions will immediately become a 100% chance of becoming a Daluo. Because Daluo does not exist in the past or future, only the concept of the present exists. Daluo is Daluo at any time, so the embryo is also Daluo, that is, born Daluo. It is impossible to grow into a Da Luo through practice. If you can do it through practice, then there is no need to practice. Therefore, when writing about cultivating Da Luo, there is only one possibility for the protagonist, Da Luo's clone, Da Luo washes away his memory and experiences life. Personal opinion, corrections welcome

After reading these chapters, I looked solemn, lowered my head deeply, turned off my phone silently, stood up, opened the refrigerator, took out a bottle of 1982 collector's edition Nongfu Spring, held it tightly in my hand, and slowly walked to the window. The scenery outside the window was a bit dim, just like my mood, heavy, very heavy, gradually , it started to rain lightly in the gray sky outside. Why, my vision was blurred. I don't know if it was because I was crying or because it was raining harder. It might be both. My mood was even more melancholy. 3. I could no longer suppress my inner emotions, so I opened the window and shouted out the window: Who do you look down on in just a few more chapters?

I have read the latest 51 chapters so far, and they are very well written. The protagonist is a high-level prehistoric man. His combat power crushes other worlds. He relies on his own system to return to the Blue Star before time travel, and then seizes the invitation letter of the chat group, and then seizes a system in the world of Nirvana in Fire. The ideas and writing are very good. There are no poisonous points at the moment. It can be regarded as a source of food.

Humans have human fighting methods, and gods should also have divine fighting concepts. God, why do you want to confront people with swords? [Learned]

The protagonist is devoted to the truth. There are many female characters but no vulgar and ambiguous behavior. However, sometimes the topic easily drifts away and the protagonist is almost marginalized. Summary: There is no poisonous point, but the subject matter can be written more excitingly.

The protagonist is too invincible, and all the plots are supporting characters (I also want to watch the protagonist in Invincible, so I keep reading the protagonist's appearance stories. For those few appearances, I feel that you, the author, are suitable for writing behind-the-scenes stories, because in this way, there are not many protagonists whose plots develop according to the world. I feel that this is really good). I read it quite comfortably. I gave you four stars for this novel. My true opinion is "not bad" The subject matter is pretty good, but it still needs some supplements. I'm looking forward to your next novel. Please @ me if you update it. Thank you.

To be honest, if you have a main plot, you will not be criticized by so many people. After watching part of it, it gave me the feeling that a bunch of people are chatting and chatting and chatting. This is the most dedicated "Wanjie Chat Group" I have ever seen. It is really just a group 🤦

Just one chapter on other worlds is enough. The prehistoric world is the main world.

It's quite novel, but the theme of getting stronger all the time is a bit monotonous, and it will get boring after a long time. If the protagonist could change his personality, for example, to be a cold-blooded person on the outside but a sinister person on the inside.