Sun and Moon in Discord: From the Start, I Was Struck by the Punishment of Causality

It can be considered a very good fan novel. When there are two obvious loopholes in Sun and Moon and it is still half a year away from being completed, it is quite capable to dare to write it. Moreover, the content does respect the original work (can you not respect it if it is almost a novelization of the comic content), and the content is not awkward or messy. It respects the original work very much. The extra parts are also normal and consistent with the content. I can only say that I will wait and see the subsequent development.

Okay, it's pretty awesome. It didn't change three people, but it interfered with three people.

You can watch it without any basic knowledge. Most of it is based on the original dialogue with a little author's thoughts interspersed. It can be seen that the setting is quite interesting, and then I saw a few pitfalls that have already been laid foreshadowing. For those who have already watched Sun and Moon, it is best to watch it again. Yes, there is one thing that is not good about what I have seen. It is that you don't have to swipe a few times to see the author's repairs to the knife plot. The author is good at everything, but it's too short. Can there be more? It's not enough to watch 😢😢

It's a fanfic of Sun and Moon that I've read. The most beautiful one.

Believe in you, don't let us down

It's very brave to dare to write "The Sun and the Moon Make the Same Fault" before it's finished.

It's okay except for the protagonist's strange hatred for the zombies. Everything else is okay. It's okay, nothing too shocking.

This type of article is really good, so good luck to the author. 🤔 🐴 word [punch hard]

Not bad, the writing is clear

So is the white light the protagonist? 🙂