Sun and Moon************

It can be considered a very good fan novel. When there are two obvious loopholes in Sun and Moon and it is still half a year away from being completed, it is quite capable to dare to write it. Moreover, the content does respect the original work (can you not respect it if it is almost a novelization of the comic content), and the content is not awkward or messy. It respects the original work very much. The extra parts are also normal and consistent with the content. I can only say that I will wait and see the subsequent development.

Believe in you, don't let us down

Okay, it's pretty awesome. It didn't change three people, but it interfered with three people.

It's a fanfic of Sun and Moon that I've read. The most beautiful one.

You can watch it without any basic knowledge. Most of it is based on the original dialogue with a little author's thoughts interspersed. It can be seen that the setting is quite interesting, and then I saw a few pitfalls that have already been laid foreshadowing. For those who have already watched Sun and Moon, it is best to watch it again. Yes, there is one thing that is not good about what I have seen. It is that you don't have to swipe a few times to see the author's repairs to the knife plot. The author is good at everything, but it's too short. Can there be more? It's not enough to watch [cry][cry]

It's very brave to dare to write "The Sun and the Moon Make the Same Fault" before it's finished.

Not bad, the writing is clear

It's okay except for the protagonist's strange hatred for the zombies. Everything else is okay. It's okay, nothing too shocking.

This type of article is really good, so good luck to the author. [Thinking] 🐴 word [punch hard]

Niubi looks good and I love watching it

It looks good [like], I love watching it [admiration], please give me more [anger]

Very well written, keep it up

Looks good, looks good, looks good.

I believe you, what you wrote is very clear.

So is the white light the protagonist? [Smile]

There are very few fanfics published by Sun and Moon, and I don't have much support for you. I hope this 5 points can help you go further. [Please update]

I still think it's quite interesting. If the author opens a new book, I'd feel it's a pity.

Great writing! The characters are vivid and vivid! [Like] When my novel reaches 100,000 words, I must come and enjoy the fairy spirit!

Come on, work hard and fight hard✌︎' ֊'

Come on, come on, come on

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I like the sun and the moon very much

Come on, come on, come on

Yes, it is indeed rare to write about the same mistake of the sun and the moon. I hope the author can successfully complete it [eating melon]

It's pretty good so far, no discomfort at all