Pokemon: Why Does the Art Style Change Completely When It Gets to You?

1. Within ten chapters, three elves formed the main team. Is the protagonist from Team Rocket? So fast! In just over a month, the protagonist encountered Xie Mi, Giratina, and the Three Holy Mushrooms one after another. This is only about 20 chapters! Is this novel a compressed package? Write everything in a pile, or write it in abbreviation, using the outline flow method. If this continues, how many chapters can you write? It should be over with at most a hundred chapters, because there is nothing more to write, so I have condensed it all for you. 2. There is an elf in the protagonist's team who was seriously injured and captured by an elf hunter, so he hates elf hunters very much. Later, the protagonist becomes an elf hunter himself. What does this mean? The dragon slayer becomes an evil dragon before he slays it. For example, it's like Xiaoyan has a grudge against the Soul Palace, but he still joins the Soul Palace. Even just in name, it's disgusting. What would your elf think if he saw it? You said you wanted to help me take revenge, but in the end you yourself became my enemy first. You became a dog in the hostile force. No matter what your brain circuit 🤮, you don't have to be a dog. There are many opportunities for revenge through other channels, and there are also ways to make money. Do you have to be an elf hunter? If your friend pulls you in, you go in. Then if your friend gives you ecstasy, do you take it too? It's not like he's an undercover agent, he just joined the hostile force to be a dog, and he was a dog in name, and that's still being a dog 🤮 If it was equal cooperation, I can still see it, but he joined to be a dog.

Why did the protagonist finally take up the job of a hunter?

So-so. In Chapter 31, I fully realized the kindness of the protagonist.

How should I put it? The pace is too fast and too streamlined. After reading more than ten or twenty chapters, I felt that there was no highlight and I couldn't stand it anymore. In other good elf novels, the initial elf must have evolved to its final form in more than fifty chapters, but the kapok ball in this book seems to have evolved in just ten chapters. Although most people hope to see the protagonist's elf evolve as soon as possible, evolving too quickly makes people feel boring and unattractive. For example, didn't Dianci next door just evolve later? Most of the people clicked in because the initial elf was Dianxi, and then they were slowly attracted by the plot. However, this book gave me the feeling that the initial elf evolved easily, and it was too casual and streamlined. Especially the part about Xie Mi, the writing pace was too fast! If you look at other authors, there will be too much to write about. If that doesn't work, you can even bring in Xiaozhi, or just replace Xiaozhi as the protagonist. Then, I personally think the biggest poisonous point in this article is that no one except the protagonist has discovered the gameplay and advantages of oriented Pokémon!! No one wants the mischievous kapok ball, and the regenerative shield mushroom is also looked down upon. It seems that everyone is pursuing the straight-forward strength of Kuailong. Except for the protagonist, everyone in the world is confused and rigid. No one can see the combination of skills and characteristics. The world with Pokémon should not be like this. At least, in my opinion, I prefer to see this using Pokémon's characteristics, skills, and races to achieve various unexpected effects in actual combat. The author gave me the feeling that he watched a few videos of team members on station B, and then wrote this book on a whim. And also, if it is a utopia like anime, forget it, but you mentioned the integration of reality (I forgot the introduction when I wrote this, please ignore this sentence if there is any mistake), I really can't figure out why no one wants a kapok ball with a mischievous heart and a kapok ball with so many skills? Why does it appear in the protagonist's options? You said yourself that this is not a utopian world, so I don't think this kapok ball will appear in the protagonist's options. Well, it goes back to what I said above - except for the protagonist, no one realizes that there is such a type of play. I have also read a few Pokémon novels that use the same dirty tricks, but those books are not as fast-paced as this one, and most importantly, not as... Well, brainless as this one. The supporting characters gave me the impression that they were just mindless, mindlessly promoting high harm, and the direction seemed unworthy of mention. Well, if you like a fast pace, you can watch it, but if you are like me and can't accept the running account, you can take a step forward.

The plot is a bit stereotyped and stiff, and the battles are a bit rigid. In addition, the setting of letting partner Eevee go and adding hunters later is considered poisonous. However, the first 50 pictures are pretty good. They are not high-quality products, but they are still watchable.

The God of Creation, Arceus, asked the protagonist to help promote and develop more tactics. As a result, the protagonist became an elf hunter 😅. Isn't this nonsense?

Elf level: [Level 1~20: Novice level] [Level 20~30: Elite level] [Level 30~50: Professional level] [Level 50~60: Gym level] [Level 60~70: King level] [Level 70~80: Champion level] [Level 80~90: Master level] [Level 90~100: Legend level]

The plot is okay, but the battle is relatively rigid. Use skills, hit, and win. The shortcomings are passionate. In the early stage, the elves collected a bit too much. The bond with the elves is not enough. I feel that the elves are just tools for fighting and have no individual character. It would be great if you can write it down. Make more progress.

The author is probably a novice, the writing is lacking, the plot is a bit jumpy, and the foreshadowing is immature or abrupt. Apart from the time jumping a bit fast after reading it, there are no major negative points, so it can be read as a short story.

The problem of person pronouns is too serious. The protagonist is both male and female. People watching this frowned. Half of the characters in a chapter are mixed up with her.