Hprose Crowder's Diary of a Parent

It's really beautiful 👍🏻, I feel like the hps of 🍅 nowadays are really Mary Sue Otome and so on, and there are a lot of AI. One of my favorite authors has been restricted because of too many AIs [crying] It's not that there's anything wrong with being an Otome heartthrob. Everyone has their own preferences, but for the original books, some of the characters in the books The books are really OOC. Although there are some that have been avoided in advance, I have never been able to find good non-OOC books. It's hard to find. I just like to read daily life. The interaction between the girls here is really natural and warm. I really like this kind of ordinary and youthful daily life, as if I can really relate to it. I feel like there has always been a lot of controversy between the Marauders and Snape, at least from what I've seen. There are always some people who wash the one they like until it's pure white like a drum washing machine, but this one is good. I don't know much about Snape's ambitions and desire for the power of magic. He was indeed dedicated and powerful, but it was only after he listened to half of the prophecy and told it to Voldemort that he let him kill the Potters. I don't know Snape very well. , But he is indeed a very courageous and powerful double agent, and he was indeed a pure-blooded Death Eater before Lily's death, pursuing power and ambitious. It was only after Lily's death that he was recruited by Old Deng. His guilt towards Lily can only be said to be good and bad. The same goes for the Marauders. Rowling was talking about "endless bullying" of Snape. I read a blogger who said that the Dark Lord was rampant at this time, Slytherin was a Death Eater reserve, and the disputes in the academy were very serious at this time. In addition, Potter Black was basically a young master who had been pampered since childhood, and his character was also arrogant. There is also the relationship between love rivals, and the disapproval of Snape's study of black magic. These have resulted in "endless bullying". These are not reasons for bullying. The behavior itself is wrong. These are just objective analysis. They are not pure white. They are arrogant in adolescence. They grow up and mature later, although they are still mortal enemies. What impressed me the most was that there seemed to be a sentence in the original book that they would bully the lower grade students. The author wrote it in a mature way, which made it feel more real and interesting. They were indeed a group of annoying boys when they were young, including Snape, who was indeed a mean person, as reflected in the original work, and the Marauders were not too conciliatory when speaking, but when they grew up, they were also great heroes who protected the magical world, and they are all worthy of awe. There are also girls getting along, ah ah, I really like the relaxed daily life [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]. The author must keep writing. I don't know why there is no traffic. I don't know what the judgment of writing is. I generally think it is a good book if it is comfortable and not unpleasant. It doesn't have to be gorgeous, but it doesn't have to be gorgeous, but it is good if you read it smoothly, and everyone has their own preferences.

Finished the chase in one go. . It is a very close-to-original story about the original female characters, very high quality. Let's talk about the original characters first. The author really carefully described the complex relationship between the Marauders and Snape, without taking sides, and showed their previous strengths and weaknesses. James's arrogance, Sirius's arrogance, and Snape's selfishness. It can be seen that a lot of effort has been put into Snape. His desire for power, Lily's concern, and hatred of the Marauders—as well as the source of all this, his selfishness, are well reflected, and Rose's view of him is also very suitable. Then there is Sirius, the male protagonist of this article, he is really sweet, with that arrogant look that refuses to let him bow down, but he will give in to Rose little by little because of love, so cute. . Sirius, like his family, is very arrogant and even ignores life, but he also hates everything he was born with. His contradictory personality has shaped his charming character. He is not a bad person, but a good person and he is very good at romance. Our little Rose has nothing to do with him hh. As for the core character Rose, I like Rose's straightforward character. She speaks out without delaying and resolves some conflicts very well. When she encounters injustice, she will immediately jump out to uphold justice. When she encounters discrimination, she will also express her own opinions, break prejudices, and hate the objectification of women. She is smart, but does not pursue unlimited pursuits. She has courage, but is not blindly conceited. She values ​​her friends and those who help her. When I saw the chapter about the death of my wife, I couldn't help but shed tears. The author is also very good at describing supporting characters. The one that impressed me the most was the female captain of Hufflepuff. That chapter made me burst into tears. She is small but has explosive power. She cannot be evaluated as not inferior to men. She is far better than men. I hope she will always shine on the road she loves. All in all, it is a very nice article. The plot is not sloppy and the characters are well-developed. It is a high-quality article that is rare in Tomato. I am very grateful to the author for his shaping. Ps: The young couple quarreled again. I hope that under the guidance of Ross, the master dog trainer (no), Sirius will realize his mistake soon and stop looking at the world through his own prejudiced eyes.

It was very, very good and I could easily get involved in the storyline. There is no pretentiousness like the HP article Mary Su. The little girl Rose is an ordinary but extraordinary little girl. She has a wealth of emotions, and these emotions flow out naturally every time Rose spends time with her friends. I particularly like the relationship between Rose and Lily, they are really two very good little girls🥺 I took a closer look at the cover. It's called Past Events. At the moment, it seems to be in the direction of daily life. But this title makes me a little scared😱

What a great write-up, Mrs. I really like the heroine of the Lion House who is talented but not cowardly. Sirius and James' characters in this article are also very good. The friendship between the girls is also touching [blowing kiss] Please don't cheat me🙏

A rare piece of writing from the HP era! The author's writing skills are really first-rate, and his ability to create characters is also really strong. He tells the story of the grudges and hatreds between the four important Taoists of the era and the Sri Lankan religion, which is reasonable and reasonable, but does not discredit Potter, Lily, and Sirius. , Every person in the Sect, they are all portrayed with great personality and charm. This is simply a perfect group portrait of pro-era characters in my mind. Only such robbers can be remembered by the Cat Sect more than ten years later when they mention it!

I think it's still okay. The first part may be a bit confusing, but I personally think it's okay. Maybe the writing style is not very mature yet. But it gets better and better later on. Also note that it is best not to read the commentary in the first part. I feel like there are many people who are not fans of the original work and have not even seen the movie asking who xxx is. And there are a lot of comments that are very heart-warming. Reminder, if you like Snape, you can leave and find other novels that are more to your liking. I feel that many people have been influenced by fan fiction and think about what the character of xx is like, ignoring the character in the original work. The movie really gives points to some characters, such as Voldemort, Snape, etc. To be honest, I also like the teachers' interpretations. I really give these characters too many points.

The writing is really good, it's my favorite HP fanfic from Tomatoes! [Crying][Crying][Crying] The brushwork is not childish at all! The plot is also very good, Maya. There are no words to describe how much I love it, my family.

A very good little couple, it makes my heart warm ❤ The author creates vivid characters, which enriches the characters of the era in addition to the original Harry Potter books. The plot setting is reasonable, the characters are not OOC, the pages slowly unfold, showing us vivid images, and the readers feel as if they are in a wonderful magical world. The interaction between the female characters in the book is very loving. There is no vicious female counterpart in the true sense, but only involuntary and personal self-salvation, and how to get rid of the inner demons that besiege oneself. This statement about Lily being a human being first and then the mother of Harry, the savior, stuck with me. We often overlook that a woman is an individual, not someone's vassal, someone's wife or mother. If you love others, you must love yourself first. The heroine's personal growth is also gradual. Being born as a Muggle will always have a sense of alienation that she does not belong to the magical world. Fortunately, the heroine's background is courage and tenacity, just like her patron saint Nightingale. She overcame her inner struggles and remained resilient, both in the orphanage and at Hogwarts. Her friendships with Lily, Marlene and others are also beautiful. Beautiful girls save the world! Her love story with the male protagonist is also worth savoring. At first, she was afraid of the ending of the story (there is a popular saying recently, "I stand at the beginning of the story, looking at their tragic ending"), and she was afraid of the tragic ending of love. But the love between the couple who adopted her shakes her up and takes a step toward happiness. There may be conflicts between two people, but mutual understanding, tolerance, and sincere love can always resolve them. In short, this is a good HP fan novel. I thank the author for creating such a beautiful novel. I hope the author can finish it and hope that more people can discover this excellent novel. Haha, I've talked a bit too much, it's just so beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

It's very, very good-looking. They are the kind that are popular among many people. There is nothing like this. I think this is a HP fanfic that is very, very good-looking and beautiful. I didn't know Sirius very well before, but the author has portrayed everyone very well.

It's good to watch. The timing of the explosion of Goldfinger and the subsequent development logic are very good. The relationship between the two of them and Sirius is also written very naturally, because the plot before and after the explosion of Goldfinger is also very compact, not protracted but not monotonous. The daily life of studying at Hogwarts is quite life-like and warm, but Lao Fuzi is rushed. Appearing and disappearing haha, but the key points in the whole article mentioned that he also gave the villain a sense of oppression hahaha, have a good journey, Lao Fuzi [snickering] [snickering] [snickering], our little ha will be a happy child with a father, mother, godfather and godmother, and a younger sister [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

Wow, I finished watching it, it looks great! The parent generation is finally not a pure-blood heroine. The real orphan heroine does not hide her family background, nor repeatedly emphasizes the heroine's appearance. Instead, she writes about the heroine's tenacity and independence, kindness and bravery. What is noble is not the family background, but the heroine's soul. What is beautiful is not the skin, but the heroine's personality charm! It's particularly good-looking. The male protagonist, Sirius, has a yandere vibe and also has the madness and persistence inherited from the Black family. It's delicious! Very very beautiful! Highly recommended!

I am really grateful to Yang Persimmon for recommending this book to me. Just by looking at the score, you can tell that it is not easy! ! ! First of all, this book is not a cool novel, not a Mary Sue, not an otome. The sweet love with Sirius is enough for me to stay. Moreover, the teacher has made the heroine baby and all the characters in it very three-dimensional. I will really fall in love with every character in the book (except the villain). The heroine baby Rose The fact that she grew up from a little girl to an outstanding woman is super awesome👍The content of the whole book is warm and healing with a touch of sadness. The writing style is very humorous and very similar to typical European literary works. There is always an illusion that Rowling is writing, surpassing 99.99 HP fanfiction. The masterpiece in my mind is irreplaceable! ! ! [Sending Hearts]

So pretty! You can feel the personal charm of many characters in the article! Especially Sirius, I felt like I fell in love with him after reading it! Every character written by my wife is very vivid, as if I have met them. The wonderful adventures and experiences I experienced in the magical world with my sister. When I saw the person who adopted her passed away, I couldn't control my tears. It was so well written! Venricius's love is so beautiful and vivid. I hope I can meet someone who is so vivid and loves me in 2025!

So well written! ! ! ! ! ! ! I like Oyashidai very much, but I have found a lot of books, either Otome Mary Sue or AI Saccharine. There are very few books that write about Oyashira in a real sense. This is one of them. It is worth following up. It would be even better if it lasts ten thousand times [laughs] [laughs] [laughs]

It's not easy to write an original heroine that is close to the original work and not be Mary Sue😋Yummy, delicious, delicious! I Love My Parents [crying] The extra story about baby Ollie is also very good [sending my heart] Looking forward to the author's new article!

This is a very warm book, but with a hint of sadness and regret. The writing style is beautiful yet humorous. The character of the heroine Rose is very full. She is an innocent and kind-hearted but witty and brave lion. She is a true Gryffindor. The character of the male protagonist Sirius is also very consistent with the original work (personal opinion). While highlighting his bravery and freedom, his nobility and arrogance have not been ignored. His gentle and considerate image in the later period was perfectly laid out. There are also many small conflicts between the two people. These small conflicts are resolved reasonably and appropriately, and they better shape the characters of the two protagonists and promote their relationship to a further step. In addition to the two protagonists, the characters are also very vivid. Both Lily and James have their own characteristics and are in line with the original work. Their characters have changed as they grow up, and the pace of the change is reasonable and comfortable. It allows me to feel that Rose's emotions towards them are living independent individuals and not just "parents of the savior". They have their own thoughts and love. The characters and images of others such as Marlene, Snape, Dumbledore, Peter Pettigrew, Mia and his wife are also very three-dimensional. I am very grateful to the author for giving them a tender ending [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

New book, very nice! (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ Everyone is really nice. My corpse feels warm and the spots on it have faded [Blows a kiss] Rose was bullied in school in her previous life. I hope she can be loved well in this life. She and Sirius really feel sweet♡

This is the thesis that I have read that best describes the original work. It is very beautiful, the process is reasonable, the plot is delicate, and the characters are rich and full. In short, if there is a good word to describe it, then I can only say that it is no meal replacement, absolutely! ! ! ! ! . And there won't be any OOC image that goes beyond the original world, and there won't be any big cheats. It will just be a normal flow, a daily flow. And the key CP is Sirius. I rarely see such good fanfics about Sirius.

The writing style of Dada is not bad. It is rare to see such detailed articles written during the mother-in-law era. The content also contains love and hatred. The reading of the article is also very good for the senses. I hope Dada will continue to update [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts]

I really like the characters written by Da Da. Whether it is the main plot or the branch plot, they are all very well created. I have not read much of the original HP novels, but some of the characters in the fanfics I have read before are really OOC! My eyes hurt when I looked at it (there is some popular science in the comments and I can piece together some of the characters) and it's very flat! This is the one that I think describes the best. I have been searching like crazy for a book similar to this one these days, but maybe I am a bad person, so I haven't found it yet. I hold my phone and check QAQ over and over again every day. By the way, it's really super! Like! Lily, the kind little witch, baby, you are a baby~ Ross's friendship and affection are also very well written, but my Mia, such a kind and gentle Mia, you are such a cruel heart. I think there are some minor flaws, but they are not concealed. It is still a great book~ At least I have re-read it N times, just to wait for the update... QAQ Why is it not finished when I read it? Actually, I'm quite curious about Peter's ending, and I don't know how it will be written. I hope Harry can have a happy childhood. He is just a child, and those so-called honors are not as important to him as the love of his parents. He is only in elementary school...

Super sweet. The heroine who went through the book originally wanted to live a stable life, but when she got along with them, she wanted to change their ending. Later, I confessed my feelings to Sirius, but they didn't get together immediately. They also went through some tangles, and Sirius was jealous in various ways [blowing kiss] [smirking] and later they got together and got married, and the heroine also changed everyone's ending [blowing kiss] The writing is very good, and the story is very rich in content. It is highly recommended for those who like CP Sirius to read it [like] [like] Each one has a rich image, very distinct.

The writing is really great. It really felt like it brought us to another parallel time and space in HP. The emotions were written very delicately. I cried after reading the whole text. I really, really, really liked it [crying] I couldn't help but come back and read it again. It was the first time I liked a book and read it over and over again.

Awesome! Awesome! I have read a lot of hp fanfics and this book is a masterpiece! Very, very friendly to my eyes, no Mary Sue, no heartthrob, no OOC, no unreasonable! Please give the teacher more updates🙏

The overall article is very sweet, basically free of abuse, and the story is relatively smooth. Except for occasional bugs and a slight weakening of Voldemort, it does not affect the overall story. It gave the Potters and Sirius a good ending, and it was a worthwhile endeavour.

I especially like Baby Rose, everyone has a little bit of shortcomings, she is always growing [blowing kiss] Natasha, Mary, and Marlene are really well portrayed, and the plot of the orphanage also has its own unique charm. I will always shed tears for the true friendship between girls [almost crying] The sweet love with Sirius is really delicious I hope there won't be a fatal victory this time. Thank you to the author for sending a lot of love [send heart] [please update]

Very very very good! ! ! What touches me even more is that in 2025, there are still people who love to generate electricity [crying], which is particularly good. Even the supporting characters have their own story lines. This is the meaning of group portraits.

The writing style is very delicate, and the author is very good at writing daily and delicate emotional dramas, including friendship and love. The friendship line between the heroine and Lily is very well written, and the early ambiguity between the heroine and Sirius and the sweetness of the early love are very touching. Although the characters and the plot feel a bit traditional to me, with nothing new, and the adult plot later is a bit boring, but this is not a big shortcoming, and overall it still has its flaws.

Finished spreading flowers! It's a very warm book. Because it's so warm, I feel like crying. This is something Harry and Sirius never got in the original book... I hope they will be happy forever in this parallel world.

Everyone is very cute in Da Da's writing. [Sending Hearts] The protagonist's relationship comes naturally. The various emotional changes and daily interactions are all described very well. I kept laughing while reading the article. I can feel everyone's happiness from the words!

It's really good-looking. Maybe the thoughts and actions of the heroine in the first few chapters will make you uncomfortable, but the later chapters are really good-looking. If you feel that the first few chapters make you feel uncomfortable, you can skip it. Don't give up on this article. It's really, really good-looking.