Become a Disciple, Start by Training the Sword Immortal in White

I like that the main character is an old man, the one with a big mouth and a foul mouth can be watched

I think this is one of the rare harem stories that is very good [cool] and very good! It's well written. I guarantee it by its length. It's worth reading.

"Diamond King in the Immortal World" is well written, but I feel that except for Ji Ruxue, the other women are attracted by the protagonist's handsomeness, wealth, and billions of dollars. I don't think there is a big problem, but it seems that the relationship is a bit unreal, but there is a system that continues to provide items. I think this is not a kind of single-mindedness [smile] (this is still a bit more restrained) To put it bluntly, this seems to be too materialistic for the female counterpart, but I think it is natural. After all, she is handsome, has good character, is rich and powerful, who can refuse her? [You taste carefully]

The author has a special liking for the elderly. The system gives top-notch physiques, countless treasures and elixirs that increase longevity, and even the Nascent Soul still looks like an old man. Even a pig should become younger.

The story is exciting, the plot is compact, and it is lighthearted and humorous. If you don't mind the official content, you can read it. The male protagonist has a distinct personality and the female protagonists have their own characteristics and character descriptions. [Laughing] [Laughing] [Laughing] [Laughing] [Laughing] is not enough. I hope it will be updated three to five times a day.

Writing is not easy, five stars support, I finally returned to my youthful state, continue

This book is a little bit toxic, but overall it's still good. The author should have read Feng Ling Tianxia's books. The fantasy and otherworldly stories written by those old authors are all good. Keep up the good work, author...

It's okay, but the protagonist still looks a bit old now. Can he regain his youth quickly?

It's okay, an invincible and enjoyable story. There is no disgusting xx in the plot. The protagonist is in a critical situation and deliberately blocks the plot. There is no deliberate pretending to be a pig to eat the tiger, or the younger one comes to fight the older one. The protagonist kills decisively and does not delay. The heroine also has a unique flavor and has her own characteristics. The poisonous point is that the setting is confusing, the system is too one-sided, the protagonist relies entirely on the system, and the protagonist can have unlimited matryoshka dolls, endless.

A very good novel, worth reading. The 5-star rating encourages the author. Come on, author, take good care of you!

Super good-looking, powerful system, lots of beauties, fast upgrades!

Shu Huang Liang Cao, although some of the details are not very reasonable, that is a general problem of this type of book. The strength is based on the strength of the protagonist, but the protagonist's strength still grows very quickly. It is basically a good article, but it cannot pay attention to the details. This is also the gap between Liang Cao Shu and a real high-quality book. But relatively speaking, Tomato is already pretty good, and I feel it deserves five stars!

I'll give it five points first, and we'll look at it later. However, when the protagonist is lucky enough to find trouble, he will cut her off with a knife without blinking an eye. The other one is more unlucky. It was bad luck to be eaten. There is no intersection. I feel that there will be no resurrection line, so I will continue to look at it. To be honest, when I saw this book, I thought I had read it somewhere, but it was not a novel.

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If you don't lick the dog, you won't be a supervisor. It looks pretty😊

Good in every way! What's the point of always buying second-hand stuff!

It's beautiful. I hope the author will finish this book soon.

It's much higher quality than Xu Xiao's book

Hey hey hey hey, good looking, so good looking! Come on come on!

It looks great, why are the ratings so low?

It's not bad, but you can return the returned items as gifts. This bug should be fixed.

It looks good, but remember to kidnap the princess back early, otherwise it will be bad if she gets bullied

It's okay, it's pretty good-looking

Not bad (≧∇≦*), I like it very much I suggest you improve it, otherwise this book will really have no future. To be honest, take a closer look (｀Δ´)! There are a lot of loopholes. The protagonist should be more determined and not tell the truth so easily. If you look carefully, there are really a lot of loopholes (｀Δ´)! Nowadays, the protagonist is manipulated by female disciples every day, and I feel that the protagonist is a bit cheap. After all, the person he gave me is really a handsome and cold-blooded male god. I used to have such good concentration, but now I stick to a woman when I see him, which is very contradictory and not good at all. ,վ^վ,,😔, Those sons of luck can appear more often, and by the way, they can have more roles in the sect, and they can snatch women in front of the sons of fate, and become younger early and so on⊙_⊙, the technique is too complicated, Jian To sum up, it feels like everyone around the protagonist is used to giving away treasures like this. It's a bit like taking advantage of others (don't give them away casually, it feels a bit overwhelming), and every time the disciple is very touched. (ಥ_ಥ), It's a bit unoriginal. The protagonist's combat power now relies solely on magic weapons and those talismans. He can add some abilities or something, such as showing off to others, refining alchemy, refining weapons, writing talismans, and pretending to be a slap in the face╯╰, so that he can feel it. These elixirs and magic weapons are all given by the system, so the protagonist is very useless. These female protagonists are too easy to repost. You can increase the drama between men and women. In front of others, let's use an analogy: The woman sees the male protagonist as too handsome, so she directly posts her, and then finds a reason and excuse. Then the male protagonist doesn't dislike it →_→ and directly greets her. Then afterwards, the male protagonist gives some magic weapons. , And then the woman fell in love with it, and then they got together. This process is too simple, and there is really no feeling. ╯▂╰ You can refer to other novels where the villain pretends to slap the protagonist in the face. Those systems are all appropriate help. Yours is just a big round. It is too complicated and not very good. I sincerely recommend that you change it.

Very nice, but a bit short. . .

It's still ok, just use less water

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Hehehehehe looks good [shy]

Relatively relaxed, pretty good