Hp: It's Over, I've Become a Heartthrob

I read the first part before, which was very dry, without much description except for the language, and then I stopped reading it. But I went to look through it again today and found that the writing in the back was a visible improvement, so I decided to take a look at it and give it five stars first.

It looks good, but can you make the main character baby live a better life? It always makes me feel so sad 💔 He is so wronged and there is no magic riot. I hope there will be someone in the future who will always be by his side, care for him and love him no matter what.

It's good to watch, the plot has a slow happiness, warmth, and a bit of daily life. I also like the setting. It's really good, and the writing doesn't make people feel embarrassed. Come on, the author is greatˏ₍•ɞ•₎ˎ

It's pretty good, but there are a few typos and a lot of typos, but the author made the changes in a timely manner. The integration of the emotional line and the plot line is a bit stiff. To be honest, I always thought Owini's emotional line was too hasty, messy, and stiff. In fact, overall it's okay. The protagonist has become stronger, and the plot accounts for most of it, while the emotional line accounts for a small part. It's quite interesting.

Owini needs to be good, I really like the male protagonist [Adore][Adore][Adore] Let those CPs chase their wives in the crematorium [Shy][Shy]

It's pretty good, but I didn't read the introduction clearly. I only realized after reading chapter 200 that there are two male protagonists. My fault, the book is still good, but I'm a bit slow and didn't see where the protagonist fell in love with Xiaolong [Exploration] Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie... I hold up the banner for Oveni and Seide CP [you taste it carefully] [eat the melon] [learn it]

The update speed is very fast, the characters have distinct personalities, the characters are well portrayed, the writing is relatively delicate, and the plot is exciting! Most of the characters are not OOC and are very suitable for the characters. It is a very interesting fanfic! ! ! Babies who like all can go and see it, it's very beautiful! ! I hope my wife will write well and I will keep up with the updates! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration] This is the author's first time writing, so her writing will have some minor flaws, but the plot is smooth and the characters are well portrayed! The writing style may be a little rusty, but the characters all fit well with their personalities. Overall, it's a really good book, and I highly recommend it to everyone! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

Dear author, your work is amazing! I hope you will continue to display your talents and write more wonderful chapters in your future creative journey. Come on! 👏Your book is really great👍! Keep up the hard work✨, let's work hard together in the future💪💼. (ง •̀_•́)ง💫🌟

This book is really good, but why isn't it popular? Come on, author, I'm going to school. I'll continue reading your book when I get back from school for two weeks! ! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Love][Love][Love][Love][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] It's so beautiful. The author is great and very active. It's super beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! [Love][Love][Love][Love][Love]

It's a nice book, with a lot of words and good writing. Compared with other books with fewer words, the number of reviewers is significantly less. I feel that people who read this book are quite aloof... I finally found a book with a lot of words that is good to read, so why don't you comment on it? [Thinking] There are also a few typos, and the author is very active [love] [love]

It's good to watch, but I feel that the plot is still a bit delayed. I hope it can be more compact. I also hope that the quality of the subsequent plots will be improved. The author will work hard to update, don't be lazy.

It's very nice, but who is the CP of Owini? (Hopefully Draco)

I can't say it's bad, but I'm inexplicably tired… Fire Tongs Liu Ming (But it's not suitable for me anymore, I'll meet you again if we have the chance)

Teacher, teacher, so who is the male protagonist? [Sending Hearts]

It's really beautiful. The author writes very smoothly. I like it🥰

I hope CP is Professor Snape! ! ! [Shy]

I love, love, love the main character so much. The main character is suitable for a gentler one! ! !

I really like this. It can be seen that the author's wife is very attentive. There is no OOC or bad texture at all. I highly recommend it. It's really safe to have my wife cooking.

This book is innovative and the subject matter is very good. I have always loved the magical world.

It's super, super good-looking. I'm the kind of person who loses interest after reading a few chapters, but I've been reading this for a long time. It's really good, and the characters are so vivid. It's super, super nice. If you don't have any books to read, you can read this during this time. It's really super nice.

Hehe, it's pretty

[Shy][Shy][Shy][Shy] I can't say it. I don't know what words to use to describe my excitement after reading this book. I like it very much [Love]

It's really nice and the article is very compact.

It looks good, but it's a little childish in the front, but it looks better in the later stages.

Really beautiful

It's so delicious, delicious rice, forgive me for not being good at using fancy words (´ω｀♡%)

I was stunned for a moment when I saw this emotional line, it's so beautiful [sending my heart][sending my heart]

Although the writing style is average, the author is very sincere and it can be seen from the text that he has made great progress.

It's good-looking and exciting. I've been in a book shortage recently. I was amazed when I saw this book. The world view is wonderful, the setting is also very good, the whole process is thoughtful, and the plot is compact.

It's quite interesting, but I don't know why so few people have watched it. The author's wife is very active [shy] (by the way, is the cp Snape [shy]) I can't catch up anymore. I hope my wife will get better and better.