Beng Tie: Krypton Fate Acting? I Wholesale Directly Myself

Uh-huh, because the emotional value provided by the author is extremely high, so, um, although it is a bit hindsight, I still wish the author a happy New Year. I also wish those who have seen this comment and those who have not seen this comment healthy, safe and happy (˵¯͒¯͒˵) Speaking of which, it's really a coincidence. I'll follow up on the comments.

Laodeng updates quickly. I want to watch Taichu Promise be released in front of Sunday.

I personally think this book is a good book, but when the author wrote this book, some of the titles might be better if they were marked in another way, like writing a complaint about the plot. You can create a separate thing similar to a side story, and then you write or create a new title, such as the protagonist's views on the plot. Anyway, the title can be quite long, and there are some plots that you can write separately, such as the statement about the protagonist himself. If you write it together, it will have a particularly depressing feeling. But if you write it separately, just read it every few pictures, and look at it every few pictures. I feel that the impact will not be great, at least it will not be very depressing. Because I read about ten chapters in a row and was stunned by the description of the protagonist. It made me feel bad and made me angry, although I didn't know why I was angry. Another bad point is that you, the author, write a lot of plots similar to extra chapters. You write them all at once, often writing the main text. When you are writing a paragraph, five or six chapters or even ten chapters of extra chapters suddenly pop up. In this case, some people who follow the reading will easily forget the plot, and if you write a book, you The updates are not completely stable, and sometimes there will be delays, which makes it easier to forget the plot, so for things like extras, or plots that have little impact on the main plot, try to divide them into multiple pictures, and then put a few pictures in each section, so that you will not forget the plot. However, it seems that some plots are very well written and the readers respond relatively well. There is nothing wrong with your writing. Overall, I think this book can be just like reading. You really have to focus on the words. Otherwise, it is easy for you to feel that something is missing in the following plot, because I just listened to the novel while playing the game. , Which also led to the feeling that I was a little unfamiliar with the plot in the middle. Anyway, these are some of my opinions. It is a good book. Anyway, when I read it during the book shortage, it can be considered a good book. But if I read it at normal times and have just finished a particularly good book, I will feel that there are many bad things about this book.

The novel will be better if you add more plots [laughing crookedly], and maybe some driving.

How shameless! How proud! Here is the author's addition to the introduction: This book will write stories about the factions corresponding to the many equations of the differential universe~ However, due to the appearance time of a certain character, these stories will have to wait until the end of the volume "Pinoconi No. 1". Considering that the author mainly plays MiHoYo games, the "characters outside the world" who appear in the series will mainly be the characters of Beng Tie's sisters.

Look! It's just me who likes harems

Personal feeling is very good They're all pretty.

It's good to read, I love reading it, cheers to the author [blowing kisses] [sending heartfelt wishes] Also, is there a group chat? [Sinister smile]

It's a pity that the main character is on the bright side, so the fun is cut by half! Obviously the main character should be downplayed and the vest should be left to play.

It's pretty good, but I can't stand it for some reason [face covering]

By the way, the author's third picture was so fun, why didn't Aha come?

Very pretty. Is there a female protagonist? How many female protagonists are there? I didn't listen Got it, tell the truth

It's okay, but it's a bit hard to look at from the front.

It's so pretty, the corners of my mouth are so raised that I can't hold it back [laughing evilly]

It's very good. I think it's very novel to play multiple personalities.

This book is very well written, the content is in line with my taste, lively, interesting and funny

... This book... Is no longer good... I can't stand it... It's so beautiful, how could it be so beautiful, hey hey hey hey hey [laughs evilly], I've already fallen in love with it, after all, it's so rare

It's great to be happy, right? ? ? ? ?

They are all guys who want to tear other readers' umbrellas apart even if they get caught in the rain.

It's so beautiful and so fun

Forgot to give five stars.

It's good-looking but the author is too short

I watched it for a while, it was okay

Invincible, kid, you are invincible [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face]

Very good, good, come on✊

Is there a group chat? , I want to tease the author So pretty ah ah ah ah

To be honest, I still really like books compiled like this.

So far, I think it's okay, but it's not particularly good-looking. The subject matter is interesting.

Very good. As a newbie, this is pretty good.

Nice! It was fun to watch! Come on, writer🌷🌷