HP: If Malfoy Were a Gryffindor

The work of the gods! ! ! ! ! ! I don't know OOC, and the plot written by the author simply hit my XP! ! ! This is the first book that fully meets my XP. Moreover, the characters and emotions are created very well, and the writing is also very good. It is so interesting, especially the plot, which is so enjoyable to watch! ! ! ! ! CP is about teasing and making pure love at the same time. I am really impressed! ! ! ! ! And the author will actively respond to some issues raised by fans and make corrections. The author is also very great! ! ! What can I say, those who like to read Teha are in luck, just read this one, I won't regret it for sure! ! ! 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 I was so excited after reading the article written by the teacher that I enthusiastically promoted the teacher's work five times in the square🌚🌚🌚

As someone who has read the original work no less than 20 times, (no kidding) what I want to say is - If you don't have Redha or are interested Then you can go and rush I only spent a few nights and early mornings reading this book. I followed it like crazy and watched the finale with great satisfaction (I'm currently re-reading it). If you have high standards and only accept masterpieces like Again, then don't hesitate, because I think only the setting has changed. For example, a group of eight becomes a group of four, and the dragon becomes a Gryffindor. There is no fault in this book's plot, logic, and writing. I don't like to criticize them, I just say they are all good. I swear to follow you to the death! I think this is the best-looking DeHaan novel in 🍅 (don't criticize it if you don't like it) because it fits the character the best and has the atmosphere of the original work. The writing style makes me have no bottleneck. [Love][Love][Love] I hope the author can do more extras

A very good Dehar comic book, this is the best one I have seen on Tomato. It does not weaken the savior and his character. Draco is gradually changing for the better (I hope the young master will soon step out of the shadows and stand in the sunshine with the savior). The writing is beautiful and moving, and the emotions are sincere and delicate, making people feel the author's intentions and emotions (the emotional part of the article is really well written). The author did not marginalize or perfunctory the non-protagonist characters. They all exuded their own bright spots and were not dimly ignored because of this. What's even more surprising is that the author is trying hard to change the regrets of the original book. Reading your words is a kind of enjoyment, which makes people indulge in it and don't want to wake up. I am really, really grateful to the author! [I have read both the original book and the movie, and have been in the circle for a long time. I am considered a long-time fan of Deha. When I read this book, the characters of Harry and Draco that I took on were those of the original work. I was really touched. God knows that I have watched Deha for many years, and I can only see the pictures drawn by the teachers. There are few fine fanfics or short stories. Some Deha fanfics (although I have put a lot of effort and effort into them) Every time I write about the Savior, I always feel like I'm being pulled out of my immersive state. I can't connect with the original Harry Potter, and I always feel disconnected (from the shadow of stereotypes in fan fiction for many years) (In fact, if the fat is lower, some portray Draco, just a little bit closer to becoming the boss (┳◇┳)). So the teacher's writing about Harry, Draco and others are so easy to post! I hope the teacher can keep updating!つ♡⊂]

I have very high requirements for reading novels, so I summarized some common problems in Dehar fan fiction with a lot of tomatoes: 1️⃣A lot of depictions of Draco and Harry's character image is very flat, 2️⃣After rebirth, Draco is still as stupid as he was when he was a child, 3️⃣Article The writing is completely inconsistent with the original work, with all kinds of emojis added, 4️⃣ It's so sweet that it makes you feel tired and physically uncomfortable... But this one is not like that at all. Personally, it's really top 1. It's exciting and touching. Sometimes I even think I'm watching the electronic version of the original work [KISS]

It's super beautiful. The description of Draco is great. After everything he went through, his smart, kind and brave qualities were highlighted. He abandoned cowardice to protect everything he wanted to protect. Everything will get better. Draco, you deserve what you want.

It's a very good HP book. You'll laugh out loud just reading it. The emotional lines are also gradual and not too abrupt. The plot progression is very reasonable. The more you read, the more you will feel more involved. The above is the official book review:-) The following is a passionate speech: Ah ah ah ah ah ah, it's so sweet to me, Xiaolong, don't love it too much [laughing] Although I don't remember the plot, it is really funny, and it gets funnier as it goes on. How could the author write it so well [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] It's not enough! ! ! When will the author be able to update ten times a day [crying] [crying]

I read the serialized chapters in two days, and the character design is not broken. Thank you to the author. (Although I feel wronged by Ronnie) the writing style is very close to the original work and it is very comfortable to read (I am a fan of the original work, but I like to use movie images to supplement my imagination). Some places are humorous and witty. Recommended The emotional lines are so natural and sweet (cover your mouth and scream), I like watching this. The portrayal of Draco's heart is quite good. The foreshadowing is pretty good. I can't make a long comment due to my ability (I want to say a lot but I can't write it, sorry) I came across this novel recently and was pleasantly surprised. Cheers to the author and Happy New Year!

It's awesome, the writing is very good, and it fulfills all my good imaginations about HP. It's really in line with the original work... Sif, he's really good, very good, woo woo woo Forgive my lack of words. I am very grateful to read this book. It is really easy to cry when I read it at night. I see that everyone in this world is basically alive and well. It feels magical, gratifying, and lucky. I love every character in HP, and I hope they grow up happily. I don't know what to use to describe this feeling after reading it. I just want to cry, but I am also very happy. Thank you, the author. (Xif Weimeng spoke to(?))

It respects the original work very much, and there will be no plot where the protagonist is killed just because he doesn't understand the character. It's very comfortable for me.

Wow, what a beautiful book! ! ! ! ! ! There are spoilers below! Deha is the best book I have read on Tomato. The writing is very good and not OOC at all. I had never dared to read it before because of the name. I always felt that I could not imagine Gede. I felt that it would be the kind of OOC book where the personality changes drastically after rebirth, but it turned out not to be the case at all! ! From the moment he changed on the train, I suddenly forgot my doubts. The relationship between the two did not develop by leaps and bounds, but was even more reflected in Harry's changes. From the initial hostility to acceptance to suspicion to trust to love, I wrote it in a very natural and good way. The two of them were very sweet and sweet throughout the whole process. Harry will always believe that Draco loves him, and this trust is what saves his life. Harry, you are a good baby, and Draco is also very happy to write, although it is very long, but it will not let you down. I think the chronicle is quite detailed and well-written. It is essentially a sweet story about love without creating too many heavy things. The most important thing is that all the positive characters have used reasonable methods to keep them alive. It is really good that Snape did not become a spy. Draco was not tortured when he was a spy. It couldn't be better. It is super good-looking and I can't let it go. I thought it was very long and I finished it in a blink of an eye. I thank the author for creating such a good article. I can only be grateful ~

The writing is very good, and it is at an above-average level among all Harry Potter derivatives. The narrative plot and character creation are very good. Although it is not a masterpiece, it is still worth reading.

I have read all the movie books. I didn't criticize them at first, but I clicked on them by accident. The more I read this, the more interesting it becomes. The characters are really outstanding. [Adoration] [Adoration] It feels like real people. [Chigua] I read very few fan CPs, but I love every one of them. I like it and I will remember it for a long time. Thank you to the author for allowing me to read this perfect book. I have been in a bad mood for a long time recently. When I read this book, my heart surged inexplicably. I read the book when I was in junior high school. It felt like I was reunited with old friends for many years, emmm I can't tell you why, I'm really happy———— ↖↗↖↗↖↗, like this [Explore][Explore] It's great [laughing]

It's really good to read. Both Harry and Draco fit the original work very well. When I read this fanfic, I substituted it for the original work. In fact, I rarely read Dehaven because some of the writing is really a bit broken, but this one is not the case. It fits the original work very well. ! ! ! ! (It made me pick up the treasure) And it's not like other articles that are just a bunch of things. This one is very objective in describing what each person can do based on his personality. That is, when you look at it, you feel, oh~ it is indeed something he can do. I really like it! ! The only bad thing may be that after more than 1,000 pages, the young couple are still not together, but today! ! Both of them! ! Let's talk! ! Kissed! ! So excited! ! Listen to me! Show them all to me! ! ! Ke Deha can really charge! ! Rush! ! ! Look! ! ! (I reviewed it before, but didn't write a review. Today, after reading the book, the two young lovers finally talked about getting married. I was so excited that I got up and wrote a long review. Okay, I have been reading this book for a long time. I have always said that I will keep reading this book in one go, but I am reluctant to read it. Every time I read it, I can't. I can't help but finish reading more than 10 chapters. I hope the author can update more and don't waste time. I love the author so much! [I'm almost crying]!

Author, your writing is great! (Crawling darkly and twistedly) Look at the fried chicken trench! (Have you become?) (Breaking into the virgin forest) (Swinging on the vine) (Snatching the bananas from passers-by) (Stuffing it into the author's big mouth) You are the genius with the maximum invincible force value of the universe's opening explosion and nuclear fission! (Spinning invincible super spiral into the sky) (Blowing up the Trisolaran Galaxy) You are awesome! (Crawling) (Cheering) (Brains spilling out) (Blood flowing like a stream) (Flesh and blood flying everywhere)

Omg, this book must be given 5 stars. It's all very good in terms of plot adaptation, characters, and writing. The pace of the whole book is very good, the logic is very clear, the friendship between several people develops step by step like the author of the original book, and the plot is not delayed. Moreover, the writing style of this book gave me the feeling of reading the original book, which is very similar to the writing style of "Harry Potter". The author is thoughtful. The character design is not OOC at all, and each character's ability to live is just right. Then, Deha is so sweet, and the scene where the two pretend to be tit-for-tat in love is the most tense. For people like Ben Ke who have been involved in the fandom for a long time, it is definitely a must-read. From then on, Deha has another article in the fandom [crying] [shy]

1. The author's writing style is very good. Every character seems to have stepped out of the original work. The text seems to have been written in English and translated by a great translator, so there is no drama at all. The author is so gentle and gives a happy ending to every difficulty in the original work. 2. The logic is reasonable, the foreshadowing echoes well, the plot is smooth and not procrastinating, and the writing is humorous, delicate and beautiful. It is a good book worthy of a publishing contract. 3. The emotional line is very touching. There is a little bit of abuse in the sweet pet, and the taste is richer. As the saying goes, if you want it sweet, add some salt. My aunt almost never stopped laughing. This is my first time writing a book review on Tomato. After I finish it, I will continue to review it for the second time.

In addition to not having the flavor of the original work written by a local, the author almost tried his best to adhere to the original work, with smooth logic and natural connection. Especially the characters' personalities - Harry's poisonous tongue and youthful boy's irritability in the original work, Ron's real flawed character, Hermione and Neville as smart and careless as ever. The emotions woven from Draco's struggle and regret will be as dense as a spider web, binding him. The infinitely magnified obsession and guilt go hand in hand, and the intense pain he carries will cause him to look into the green eyes in his dream. But perhaps what has happened is irreversible. Since you interfere, you must pay the price.

It's really good to watch. I even had to watch it on my mobile phone during class. The whole story changes from Draco's main perspective to Harry and then to the group portrait. It is no longer limited to a single emotional line, but a struggle to save the people who value each other. It gave me the illusion of watching the original work again. The inner monologue and description are particularly delicate, as well as the transitions are very good! ! ! (The plot party received favorable reviews) [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] I especially wonder if the teacher will publish a physical book after finishing it, or make some food for us to collect (¦3 [▓▓], my favorite fanfic, although the title will make people underestimate the beauty of this book, but I really recommend it! [Shy] [Shy] [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss] I don't have much time to watch it because I watched it on another account, woo woo hoo, I feel a little regretful [crying] [crying]

I feel that this is the fanfic that is most consistent with the original work. I personally prefer to read the long-lasting love, so I really like this book, and every regretful point in the original work has been made up for. The original work party of Ke Deha strongly recommends that the plot should have plot, the emotional line should have emotional line, the writing should be as good as writing, and it should be refreshing and refreshing. I have read it three times.

My wife writes very well The work is very consistent with the original work. This can be noticed from what the characters say and do. It can be felt that my wife attaches great importance to the "entanglement" between Xiao Ha and Xiao Long's relationship. I really like a change in Xiaolong: he is now willing to make friends with Neville, whom he used to despise. There are also some small details that really bother me. You guys must read them carefully. When watching this work, I personally recommend playing "A Rainy Day" The work is really excellent, but the rating does not match the excellence of the work. I will give you five more stars. There is a typo in the third to last line. It's Baozi

Update soon, madam! ! ! ! I will support my wife to become the successor of JK Rowling! ! ! Deha is very, very good. The characters in the book are not OOC and are really great. The only shortcoming is that there are too few. Please update more, please please [shy] This is the first time I have read the unfinished story since I read the book. Personally, I only read the ending, but this book is so good that I can't help but follow it [Adored] Update comments Finally the text is finished. During the serialization period, I opened my eyes every day just to see my wife and there was no update. The writing is really good and I want to read it again and again! ! ! Now I am looking forward to the extra chapter with my eyes wide open. "My wife, I will always follow you. The language and demeanor in describing the characters are like inviting the spirit to come to my body (bushi). I love my wife!" ! [Adoration]

It's good to read. What I wrote is really in line with my taste. The writing is pretty good and the plot is also very good. I like the emotional line between Harry and Draco. I personally think it's a bit OOC, but it's innocuous. Especially because the ending is a happy ending, it's very sweet, and it's not Dao at all. Personally, I think it's possible that I'm too naive to notice that there's a small knife, but if there's a big knife, I can't possibly not notice it. I just don't think it's enough, woo woo woo

Deha. De's rebirth speeds up the progress bar of solving the Horcrux based on the information he can know in his previous life. De is busy or protecting Ha, which seems to be sitting back and enjoying the success (only in contrast to De, but after all, De's rebirth is more mature and Haggai has experienced everything). De replaced Si as a spy, and there is no description of being tortured while undercover. Slytherin's public switch of sides became the flag for Slytherin's alternative. In essence, it is a sweet love story, without portraying too many heavy things. Deha goes from hostility, acceptance, suspicion, trust, pulling to love. During Deha's undercover period, the couple is still sweet. Only Haha's different attitudes (De did) or the same attitude (De did not do what the other person did) about things that happened in two lifetimes makes Deha feel faintly compared to the previous life. In the extra story, De confesses to Ha that he is reborn.

After reading it, I feel delicate and happy, calm and beautiful. As long as I read it carefully, I can clearly recognize the teacher's research and polishing of details on the original work. The reflection of the foreshadowing has reached the level of proficiency and spirit in writing. I definitely love all the characters from the bottom of my heart, especially the deep work I put into it. I praise the teacher's craftsmanship as a literary creator! Thank you teacher for giving a happy ending to "Harry Potter" that accompanied me in my childhood, which made up for all the regrets and added countless joy and stability. Thank you for Draco and Harry in the teacher's works. I think it is because of great second creations like you that the classics have reappeared in the public eye again and again, and have been given different meanings and new lives. I am very happy to meet you. I hope that the teacher will be safe and happy in the future, everything will go well, be healthy and happy, and the new book will be a big hit. I will always support you and hope to accompany you on the road ahead. I wish you all the best!

The extra is so perfect, an extra star! To be honest, I couldn't accept Malfoy and Harry being together [I've never read it], but this book is so well written, and every time they kiss passionately, it's just right. If we refer to the representative colors of the four major colleges, this book is undoubtedly black ➕ pink. Black represents Malfoy's depression during the spy period and Harry's inability to control himself as the savior, and pink represents the bubbles of their sweet love🫧

It's really super good-looking. I don't hesitate to praise the author's writing with beautiful words. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh the author has eaten a lot of Rowlings. The writing is so good. Oh my God. Now I see it's my fault. I'm so happy that I don't have to wait for updates. Hahaha, and DaDa explains many characters or things. Readers are very happy. , It reads more smoothly hahaha. Another thing I like very much is the appearance of some minor characters. Even in the original work, their fates were not very good and they only played a role in promoting the plot. But in the big text, they have their own stories and endings. It is really great. It is so beautiful. I think I will re-read it several times in the future! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Damn you are the best! ! ! !

Really like it! ! ! The writing is very consistent with the original work. I rarely write book reviews, but after reading this book, I felt so moved that I wanted to write a short essay! The logic is self-consistent, and the characters don't feel OOC. It feels like true feelings are revealed. I am very happy. I finished reading this book in a few days. It is very interesting and I don't want it to end. Draco and Harry are also very happy. I think I can't stand other Deha fanfics after reading this book. The writing is very good. I'm not a fan of original novels. I just saw the Harry Potter Holy Grail movie on CCTV6 one year and became interested in Harry Potter. It is really a good work. At that time, I finished reading a series of Harry Potter works. I was young and devoured them all. Many details were not clearly seen and understood. After reading this fanfic, I feel like watching the Harry Potter movies again. I am a person who will only read a book, anime, movie or TV series once because I know the plot behind it, and it will become very boring. But for this article, I think I will re-read it once, twice or even more times. The relationship between the two is very good, sour but warm. While I was chasing this book, I had a dream in my nap. It was about my mother and I. In the dream, I understood what happiness was. I felt happiness for the first time. It was magical. I think this article probably brought it to me. Thank you for writing another possibility for the two of them and others, their happy ending! ! !

Haha, lucky for Hades, this is the book that I read. It's super sweet, okay? I'm a movie fan and haven't had time to read the original work, but it doesn't stop the author from making Ron and Draco, who are said to be annoying in the original work, very cute. Rohe is also very cute. Every character in this book is so cute and sweet. The author knows how to write, and everyone is not dead. Sometimes even I am stunned by what the author's characters say. I'm really touched. Any misunderstandings are solved quickly, a complete HE. As for OOC, there are a thousand Hamlets in a thousand people's hearts. Everyone's degree of OOC is different, and their perspective on OOC is different. Anyway, I don't really mind these things. I enjoy watching the main one! Show them all to me, enter the pit vertically!

It took me three days to read it, it's a very addictive fanfic. This is not the kind of sweet story for the general public. Most of it revolves around the growth and destruction of the protagonist group. Deha slowly increases the progress bar in the process. Although there is a bit of OOC, I can understand that it would be difficult for two people to go on without OOC. I hope that this really is a parallel world that belongs to them. Everyone has their own "perfection". The true perfection that I recognize is something that so many fans have not written about. For example, Snape was forgiven by Lily in a certain sense. Sirius did not die, and his brothers could continue to live, including Dumbledore's sister, Gemini, and Lupin. I think Harry Potter has too many regrets. The reason why Harry is the protagonist in a sense is that he is the only one who survived. This book makes up for the regrets of many people, and it is very reasonable. It would have been better if maybe when the author wrote it, Ron's first grade would not be so mean to the young master, he could be offensive but too mean. Because his background is still kind. Also, in the early stage, he was quite abusive towards the young master. However, I recognize that a person who is obsessed with the past, feels guilty, and even knows everything about wanting to change the future, has limited power, and he does have to bear a little more than others. You need to be patient when watching❤️

It's a very interesting book. The emotional pull between the two is very interesting. I can't help but smile like an aunt when I read it. Harry is so cute, but Draco is in Gryffindor. Wouldn't Lucius ask Draco to drop out of school and go to Durmstrang?