Why Mess with the Mortal World

Don't be misled by the title of the book! This is suspenseful and supernatural! If you are bored, you can read it. I thought it was some kind of ancient romance when I saw the title, but when I looked at the cover, it didn't feel right. After reading the first few chapters, I thought it was relatively novel. The female protagonist has a lot of personality and the male protagonist is funny and dramatic. The plot of the story at the beginning is not bad, but the writing is average, but the later story is not bad with the writing, and it is becoming more and more interesting. The heroine is neither humble nor overbearing, very smart, not the Virgin White Lotus, she dares to love and hate, which is good. It's nice to describe scary places without too many details. It's so friendly to people like me who are both good at food and love watching! [Laughing]

This is the first book I have written on this platform. I know that my level is not very good and my writing is not very good. I will also listen to other people's opinions and there will be some improvements in the subsequent content. I will really continue to work hard! I hope my first one ends well and this is my experience whether anyone reads it or not. OK! This book is written in the suspenseful and supernatural genre! Make no mistake! Not a romance! ! Not a romance! Both male and female protagonists are very smart! The plot will definitely not drag on! I focus on plot points, so I will only occasionally send some sweets about the emotions of the male and female protagonists, eh! Thanks anyway! Thank you to the few readers who have been reading my writing, and thank you to those who read this book in the future! ! ! Thanks! Sincerely! ! ! I feel that it is my greatest luck to be able to read what I have written. (I wish you all a fortune, but if you don't want to be practical, people who play games will win in a row and get paid out as soon as they win! People at work can work smoothly and not be squeezed by their bosses! Finally, I wish everyone can live a happy and comfortable life!)

I just started reading it. I have never read any suspense novels carefully before. It starts from the dream, and the links are closely linked and fascinating. It makes people want to continue to understand the subsequent plot of the story. The protagonist is very clear-headed, not a brainless character. In addition, there are many case analysis or detailed analysis. The author writes it with great care! [Adoration] [Adoration] The writing is not very pretentious, and the various descriptions are very delicate. I'm working hard to catch up with everyone's progress, and I look forward to more reading and sharing. [Top post][Top post][Top post]

I've read the author's full text! ! ! During the process of reading the novels, I described the plots, character creation, theme expressions and styles of these novels very vividly. The stories were heart-wrenching and moved the plot step by step. I noticed some noteworthy details, such as the psychological changes of the characters, the rhythm of plot development and the creation of atmosphere. These details can help us better understand the storyline. At the same time, suspense is also used to stimulate our interest and curiosity. I also noticed that some horror novels explore and reflect on social issues. For example, some novels arouse readers' resonance and reflection by revealing the dark side of human nature. I hope the author will continue to work hard💪 to write better works! ! ! 🎉

After reading the previous part, I thought it was pretty good, had a story, and was quite attractive. It seems to be mainly about the female protagonist, which is good. After all, the female protagonist has a very unique personality, which makes me feel very happy. The title of the book seems a bit tragic, I hope I won't read it later, keep up the good work!

Read a little bit. The content doesn't quite match the name, it's a suspense type. I like the character of the heroine very much. She is not a white lotus. She has a lot of personality. I like it. The male protagonist has a cheerful and funny personality, and the chemistry between the two is very interesting. The author seems to have always focused on the storyline. I think the story of each dungeon is quite interesting, quite explosive, and the pace is quite fast. This is what I like the most. Pretty good.

Oh my God! I can actually see such a serious novel on Tomato! It's not a mindless piece of writing, and the heroine's highlights have not been weakened. The author is really attentive, keep up the good work!

Overall it's okay, but some people's branches are a bit incomplete