Madam of the House, I Take on the Top Tycoons in the Modern World

It is recommended to reduce the narration of the love line and make the narration precise and profound. Show more of the talents and personal charm of the heroine. Deep friendship and family relationship (brother line) can be more outstanding. The male protagonist has fallen into a cliché. The brother line can be written as a stable backer that supports each other and goes hand in hand instead of love. The male protagonist should be more three-dimensional. The current descriptions are very flat. Abao's family line is very touching! You can also write a plot about taming your sister-in-law Xiaoyun in the future! It will definitely be interesting. The emotional line between the brothers can also be portrayed more deeply. The author can enlarge the frame a little more! This kind of subject matter is very attractive. I hope you can do better!

It's okay, although I can't see the mistress' magnanimity, but it's okay

I just love watching sober heroines act a little confusing sometimes

Not bad, the heroine is very good and I like it very much It's just that the updates are too slow. It's just one picture every day. Can I update two more?

I haven't read a novel about ancient times and the present, and this is the first one. The heroine seems to be as smart as a modern person, which is very interesting. I hope the author will update it quickly.

Gives me a feeling of dual strength. The rhythm is quite tight, and it shows off her abilities as a past matron.

The plot is not protracted and compact

I thought it was finished, but I didn't pay attention, but a new hole opened up. It's okay. I hope it's a short story and not too long.

Please update!!! This is my only spiritual support during pregnancy qaq

It's a rare modern business war article that makes people read. I hope the author will update it every day 🤭🤭🤭