Pokémon: Is the Cocoon I Picked up a Y-God?

It's very beautiful, each character has a unique personality, I like them all. The protagonist regards Pokémon as his family, which is very touching. The elf hunter part made me cry. Author, please pay for my tissues! Decided, I will read this book during the holidays. Author, I advise you to update as soon as possible, you don't want to be adopted as a book [laughter]

It's best if you don't need to be tied to the heroine😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

So far, the first volume is quite good, and the reasons for the problems in the second volume are excusable, so overall this novel is quite good, but I personally feel that the bonding relationship is well written. As for the problems in the second volume, the main reason is that the connection is not very coherent in some places, and the emotional processing is not very good compared to the first volume. At the same time, some foreshadowings will be confiscated. Usually I don't write mind-blowing stories or those who want to write long stories and big world views. It is best to recycle no more than 20 chapters (excluding trailers), and the actual time should not exceed about a month. Of course, this is my personal perception. Different people have different feelings. Some original things can be more if they can be balanced. If there are problems with the settings, don't force them. And if there are key plot points that appeared in the early stage, it is best not to light up the key plot points later. Finally, I will talk about the issue of knives at the end of the first volume, which is about the same time as the foreshadowing. At the same time, I personally do not recommend permanent and long-term knives in this kind of writing (ps: It is best not to write about knives to suppress the combat effectiveness. Personally, based on the reviews of some books, it is not very pleasing. It is best not to write too much at this time (ps: here I will keep mentioning it in every article from now on). Writing about combat power is also not a good idea. It may not be handled well, and the sword becomes incomprehensible and emotionally lacking.) The problems caused by the knife are relatively easy to write in the early and middle stages. It is recommended to solve them early (no more than 15 chapters in between). Finally, note that the above are some of my personal opinions based on the sensory summary of some books I have read. Everyone has different opinions. Here are just some references. But I have to say that the emotional writing is very good, much better than the sensory feeling of many mindless and refreshing articles. I hope these can serve as some reference (it seems that there are quite a lot of comments this time) It's over, it's really good to watch. I've been in the not-watching group for a while, and I don't know if it's over. It turns out that New World has been cancelled. I thought it was still being written, haha. It's a very good story. The character change of God Y is also very obvious. It's well written. At least, it fits my aesthetic concept very well.

It's pretty good. I like the regular Invincible version of Notre Dame anyway. Also, I don't really like to watch pornographic characters. This one has no point, just pornographic characters. I think it's pretty good without this one.

Who is the heroine? [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking] Is there a female protagonist? Single heroine?

It's very interesting. I highly recommend it. I hope the author can reply to me. I like it very much. I hope it can continue to be updated. I will keep reading it. Come on, come on, don't give up (›´ω`‹). I hope the protagonist can beat the Eight Masters. More than 100 pictures are really not enough (//∇//)

I will give you a lightning point. Some people may find it objectionable. That is, the protagonist will go back to other planets with Pokémon. This means that the author will create his own Pokémon, which will also have his own attributes, and the strength of Pokémon is stronger in other places. I will use the author's original words. On the new planet, the three holy birds are just green caterpillars. If you mind, you can watch it at your own discretion, but the previous article is indeed quite good.

This book is very well written. It describes the feelings and bonds between Pokémon and people. The writing style is quite good. It is worth reading. If the number of words in the back is not enough, I will make up for the five stars. Five stars for you

Okay, it's very beautiful. I haven't seen such a beautiful movie in a long time. I highly recommend it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's good-looking but there's no female protagonist, but it's innocuous and good-looking.

Looks good, when will the promotion competition start? Yes, yes, it is, computer technology, alcohol wipes, life and death sniping, sleep, sleep, computer level 3, it is, it is, it is, it is, it is, it is, it is, it is, it is

It's very interesting, but I feel that the author could have written a little more, and there are still more than 100 completed pictures. Isn't that a little too little? It should be at least four to five hundred pictures.

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Although the writing is not very good, it is more spiritual than other Pokémon novels I have read. It simulates the real Pokémon world but updates are too slow.

Although it feels a bit fast to evolve and find the super evolution stone, it sounds very good. Then, the author also worked very hard to make this book good-looking. For this book, I think it is still very good-looking, but some friends must not be able to accept the rapid development of the plot, but I think it is okay.

It's very interesting, I just hope the author doesn't end it in more than 100 chapters. I want to see the protagonist fight the Eighth Master [crying][crying][crying]

Watching a Pokémon is like watching a sword from Beng 3. It doesn't say anything, but it seems like it says everything!ヽ(#`Д´)ノThe knife is almost overflowing! (╥╯╰╥)ง

The early writing of this book was a bit lacking, and there is a lot of room for improvement. But in the middle and later stages, the value of this book is improving, especially the daily life of Pig's Foot and his elf family. It is very likeable. Come on, author, and I look forward to your future stories.

It's not bad for now but the main plot is pushed a little too fast [laughing][laughing][laughing]

I like the protagonist who prefers to hide the mythical beast and expose it directly. I've read the novel several times before, and it's all hidden.

It's so beautiful. I suggest you all come and watch it.

There are quite a lot of secondary creations but they are more reasonable. There are many secondary Pokémon bond evolutions and super evolutions. For example, there will be Mega Evolved Sonic Dragon, etc. In the future, there will be new Pokémon submitted by fans, as well as new attributes created by the author. If you can't accept it, you can leave.

It's very beautiful and has a very warm feeling [sending my heart]

My writing style is relatively young, but I always encourage novice writers.

Who knows the crushing feeling at that moment when the shit-yellow button suddenly appears when you are watching it [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying]

This article is good. But I heard you said in this chapter that more than 100 chapters have been updated, which is boring. The only thing I feel is that the baby looks good, but why can't I see it in more than 100 photos?

I personally think it's pretty good, so I gave it five stars, but I'm going to write about the elves from the fanfic later. The elves from the fanfic don't even know what those elves look like or what their attributes are. I don't like it very much, but the novel itself is still okay. Do you need a reason to give a five-star review? Need it? Unnecessary. [Sinister smile]

This book is very good, the main character and Yveltal are so cute

Very good-looking, I like the protagonist very much

Although the writing style is not yet mature, it is very clever. I like that kind of bond very much