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I am Shennong. This book is not poisonous. At least I have seen that it is not poisonous and has caused death. Run. All I can say is that it's not too poisonous, but it's really stupid.

Nice. The only victim in this game: the weasel "Feed me the peanuts!"

A group of sixth graders scored very high. You guys are so strict, show me! There's really nothing to say in the first 18 chapters. Just show me the rest! I can't eat bran pharyngeal vegetables alone

First of all, the best thing about the author is that the writing style is very good. It can give me a feeling of modern people traveling back to ancient times. The emotional lines are also very good. There are many people who are related to the male protagonist, but everyone has their own position. Then the setting of the female protagonist is also very good. She is not the kind of heroine who talks nonsense without thinking. It makes me feel like I want to read it all the time. I rarely publish works, so I don't know what to say. Anyway, I think this is a super good-looking novel. I hope everyone can give it a try. The genre I prefer can be said to be Xiaoshuangwen. The female protagonists have delicate emotions and are more everyday. The male protagonist has a super good personality. This is the kind of feeling I like to read.

There is a little smell of the world of mortals And Wang Linghua's character also reminds me of Cui Muning? It's been too long and I forgot The writing style is also relatively comfortable The pace feels a bit fast It feels like the progress is a bit too fast Maybe it's a common problem in tomatoes Not making money by subscription Don't want to make money by clicking a subscription Therefore, the pace will be slow in the early stage and even water injection will make money. But I personally feel that the pace is still too fast. The other thing is the number of female protagonists At least five so far In these short words And the first three emotional scenes are too clear There is less writing about daily interactions Although there should be stories to develop characters in the follow-up All I can say is look forward to it. I hope the heroine doesn't need too many Don't rely on each heroine's story to get more words There are too many female protagonists and it's easy to become a stallion if you can't control them. Nowadays, when watching the harem, the main thing is to watch the emotional drama and the interactive Shura scene. There are many high-quality female protagonists in their own entertainment Spring and Autumn Evil God But looking at it now, I feel like the characters are a bit flat. In recent years, the writing style and plot of Jicha Xiahuaguan have become more delicate. The number of female protagonists is also controlled The author still writes well

The blind princess, the amnesiac killer, the elder sister with a broken sword, the protagonist is walking on thin ice in this life, do you think he can make it to the other side? That's it, the front part is okay, but I don't like the back part

It was a good read! I just hope that the number of female protagonists will not increase in the future. There are many stories with multiple female protagonists that cannot be written once there are more female protagonists. There will always be someone who will inevitably be offline for a long time to squeeze out writing space for the new female protagonist, and then repeat this step. This book now has three female protagonists, and it feels like it's just right

It's good-looking, so far there's nothing sinister about it, the writing is pretty good, the emotional lines of the heroines are handled very clearly, and the foreshadowing is well laid out. It's a lot more fun to have Runbao in it. What fascinates me right now is the issue of "staying or leaving". At present, the male protagonist can still stay here peacefully with the two female protagonists, but it is known that the identities of the two are not simple. One is a hunted princess, the other is a killer who has lost his memory, and the official sent by the martial artist Zimo should be a help if something goes wrong in the mid-term, but Zimo is here To win over the male protagonist, the princess must be picked up in the end, and the killer must also regain his memory. At this time, whether the male protagonist will stay in Cuiping Mountain again depends on how the author writes it. Anyway, I think he will go down the mountain, but for who and what reason, I am looking forward to it. Come on, author! Ps: Runbao is so cute [laughs]

Very good book, my bookkeeper

It is a very good book. Due to unknown reasons, the author stopped updating it for a long time, but I feel that if it can be updated steadily, there will be many people reading it. Generally speaking, I quite like the worldview of this world, and I hope the author can communicate more with readers.

It's okay, the writing style and rhythm are okay, the characters are established, lively, make mistakes, and grow, the daily writing is OK, the emotional drama Shura Field is also good to watch, and the foreshadowing and world view now seem to be quite well-developed, good luck to the author

I found this book by chance. It's well written. I've read 50 chapters so far. There are two small spots in the middle, but it's okay, as long as you're not afraid of embarrassment. [Working on draft] In addition, if this book is not supervising, it should not involve actual combat in the early and middle stages, unless there are some special circumstances. The last sentence is that it is worth watching, but it is a pity that I am afraid of entering a small dark room.

It's really good-looking. I hope it doesn't become a tomato-type feature. It looks good in the early stage but sucks in the later stage. Please update it!

The early stage was very good, but I saw that Duan Ping was a year ago, and I was afraid that he entered the dark room in the middle of this book. Alas, the number of words was too small, and the number of people urging for updates in the dark room was also small. I hope it can be revived.

Okay, okay, this book is non-toxic, the protagonist is a wizard practicing Taoism and martial arts, and there are many women, it's cool and that's it, soldering iron [Like]

It looks good, but it would be very unkind if you stop updating it! [Sinister smile]

It's very interesting, but the author often runs away [rolls eyes] [rolls eyes]

The writing is first-rate, the plot is smooth, smooth and engaging.

The emotional line is delicate, the protagonist's character is to your liking, and the author's writing and description are also very smooth. The current writing is also very smooth. It can be said that I will keep reading and will read the book for the second time. Come on, author, I have read a lot of serialized books, and most of them are popular. If not popular, they are at least well-received. This book of yours will definitely become popular.

It's very interesting. Except for the love between the silly and beautiful girl Qingcheng, which is a bit sudden, everything comes naturally. The heroines are all very unique, and the protagonist is also pretty good. Finally, Runbao is so cute.

As of Chapter 18, I must praise it. The writing is very good, flavorful, and natural. Secondly, the three heroines currently appearing have their own portrayals, which can be said to be very natural. The emotional lines are not visible at the moment, but the three views contained in them are still very positive. Finally, I would like to say that the writing of Yizui Runbao is really super cute. It has been a long time since I have seen the role of raising a younger sister written in such a quirky way. It seems that she is already raising a female goose. Jie Jie Jie, keep playing at the top level

Reading a good book for the first time is like finding a good friend. Reading this good book again is like meeting a friend again - Aventure

The writing is great and full of laughs, but it's a pity that no one seems to be reading it.

It's good to read. The part where the princess escapes is a bit abstract, but the rest is very good. The protagonist's personality is very good, and the characters of each character are also very vivid. I hope it won't be interrupted again. If it is completed as it is now, it will be a very good book.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, it is true that the writing is very good for Tomato. However, as a layman, I would like to know if there is anything to eat in the back. Can any brother who has seen the back reveal it? [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Is this alive or just a fake corpse?

That's great, it's been a long time since I've read a book that appeals to me.

Well written, but the author seems to be missing [smile][smile][smile][smile]

It's a very good novel with rich characters. I hope I can stick with it.

It looks good, non-toxic, no ink stains, feels good when it feels like it, feels good when it feels like it, but it's really a bit lacking.