One Piece: Don Quixote Who Grew up in Hakudan

It looks great. I really never thought that Don Quixote would develop like this. Likewise, the healing power of the Baituan family cannot be overemphasized. Marco is also an acquaintance in the humanities, hahaha. What I like most about this book is not the cp (of course the cp is also very sweet!), But the family love between the three Don Quixotes. Brother Ming finally behaves like a human being in the article. He is ruthless but also contradictory. When he is angry, he will be determined to kill Rossi, but when he calms down or the incident is over, he will silently care. But after all, Xiaomi Guo and Flamingo are not the same kind of people. The male protagonist arranged by the author is just right. He is crazy in the same vein as Ming Ge. He is equally powerful and independent, but also soft and detached enough. It makes people wonder: If there really was such a Don Quixote, would the original novel have escaped the tragedy of death and injury?

It's okay, the setting is good. When I watched it earlier, I felt that the characters' actions and dialogues were sometimes out of touch, and the writing didn't connect one sentence to the next. The plot progresses quickly later on, and there are some light-hearted jokes and complaints from time to time. The overall reading will be much better, and the interaction between the young couple is also quite sweet.

It's very beautiful. Please give me more. It's not enough.

Super good-looking, dual male protagonists, cp Marco. The protagonist is Doflamingo's twin brother, and their brotherly relationship is particularly well written! The same goes for Red Hair and his brother, who are best friends and bad friends with Perospero. The daily interactions are particularly well written! I loved watching it so much 🥰

So pretty! ! ! Marco, don't be a coward and confess your feelings quickly! ! !

I originally wanted to rate it 4.5 After reading it, but the plot was so well written that I couldn't resist. My first five-star Tomato novel (I've read 59 chapters so far). The main subject is cp pineapple. Dual strong. He and Dover are twins. He kicked away Xiaomi Guo's bento, but Rossi has not seen the navy again. The protagonist's character also has some Don Quixote paranoia. He is redeemed by the love of Bai Tuan. The fighting method is a bit bloody and has been ridiculed several times by the candy man. The main line is smooth🆗. The ambiguous part of the love line has a little ink, so it is a little abrupt, but it is sweet after being together. There is basically no OOC in terms of characters, but the author has not described the height in One Piece at all. It is a bit strange to see Whitebeard touching the protagonist's head and other actions. There is also very little description of the physical characteristics of the protagonist and other people. Don't watch the farewell of Whitebeard, his family and Roger in the middle of the night (not the top one. I don't know the ending of my dad if I haven't seen the top one). The reason why I decided to give five stars is that these two supporting characters, Helinos and Alinda, only appeared in a few chapters. The author's character creation of the supporting characters is also very full, Helinos! Lu Qi, what are you doing! (Picks up the whip and prepares to whip the leopard) The first book I have read on Tomato... 3.5-4 The summary is that a good hand was wasted and the author was too anxious. Starting from the top, the rhythm becomes weird. If you look at the word count in the table of contents, you can see that it takes at least several thousand words to write something like this... The level of excitement has also been reduced. The two climaxes of the top and the subjugation of Im are completely broken. There is no passion at all and it has become an assembly line. This part of the plot is one of the last in the pirate novels I have read. It starts high and goes low and ends in a hurry. The description of the protagonist's battle in the early stage is gone. Beat Im, what's the use if the protagonist is gone? What's the use if Marco's gone? Shanks is gone and I don't see any use. It's all Shamrock's fault. What about the climax? What about passion? It's basically a one-sentence scene Regarding the relationship with Marco, I can only say that the author wanted them to look like they were in love, but instead of describing the psychology of the protagonist and Marco in a big way, he just wrote I want to kiss you and I love you... In terms of family relationships, Rosinandi appears very little and Dover appears quite a lot. The relationship is quite good.

Nice. It's a really good one among 🍅One Piece fics. Everything about the character is well grasped and there is no OOC. The protagonist seems to be a bit of a drama queen and is crazy. I really like this attribute. Personally, the only shortcoming is that their early relationship was together. There were relatively few emotional lines before. I can understand why they are together, but I want to see the detailed process. The main plot is pretty well written.

I really like this kind of narration from another perspective, and the author's writing is very close to the original work. It is not very OOC. It needs to have plot and emotion, and the narrative rhythm is compact and not procrastinating.

Nice! Hehehe, it's so pretty! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! You must read it, you really believe me! ! ! ! ! ! ! [Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss]

I just said that the cover is familiar. I have read all three books [laughs][laughs][laughs]

So pretty! The relationship is super sweet, Rosinandi also survived [crying][crying]

The emotional line is well written. I look forward to the next development. I really like the relationship between the protagonist and Brother Ming.

Regardless of the low rating, it is really beautiful. Everyone should follow me to see it! ! The interaction between brothers is also very interesting hahahahahaha [full]

Come on! Big! So pretty!

Beautiful and emotionally delicate

Some brothers, some have always been looking forward to a book about Marco and Dover, and now my dream has come true [Like]

Although it's not the CP I wanted to watch, it was well written and I liked the story of getting along with Doflamingo.

It's so good to read. I've read all three of the author's One Piece novels. How could there be such a good book?

The writing is very good. I really enjoyed reading it. I can't get enough of it. Great support for the author💪

Don't Stop Watching is super cool, but I don't know why so few people watch it [crying]

Very good writing style. Compared with other novels, the writing style is very good. The plot is also good and the characters are very original. It doesn't feel particularly OOC.

This book is very good. It has been added to the bookshelf for a year. I listen to this book when I have nothing to do. When I get bored and there is a shortage of books, I read it again. Teacher I want to eat delicious new book [shy][shy][shy]

What a happy ending [shy][shy] Corazon, dad and Ace are all alive and well, so happy [send heart][send heart]

Nice! Like! More!

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

A very interesting fanfic

The writing is very good, very beautiful

The love line is pretty nice

Okay, okay, take a look

Super pretty! Does it mean that it is out of date if it is not updated for more than half a month? I'm still looking forward to the follow-up. I also want to read other pirate fanfics written in big letters. I've already finished the other one.