The Immortal Clan Started as an Apprentice in Alchemy

It's almost 100 chapters, and the protagonist is finally invincible in his Qi training, but he is also 40 years old, and the system of many children and many blessings has no future. In 20 years of cultivation, he only married two Taoists and gave birth to three children. The novel next door has tens of thousands of children, and the rewards are soft!

I saw someone saying it was a bit poisonous, but I didn't believe it. Now I'm going to die [almost crying] [almost crying] My last words: The pace is slow, I rarely do system tasks, and I don't make good use of the system. I first practiced for more than ten years, during which I gave birth to two children, and improved my cultivation a bit. Then I took over a territory with a woman, and immediately started to retreat. I stayed in retreat for 10 years [cover my face][cover my face]. No, I didn't make good use of the system to improve, so I just stayed in retreat for 10 years, and became an entry-level physical practitioner. The people around me were 10 years older, and I didn't complete many tasks. His cultivation level is also very low, and his cultivation level has not changed in the past 10 years. Maybe it's because I'm eager for success, or maybe it's because I haven't watched much, and I've seen others say that it's a bit more toxic in the early stages. I have been in seclusion for 10 years during my Qi training period. I don't know why the score is 8.5. It's a bit high.

To give an objective evaluation, this book is quite satisfactory. It is a relatively traditional family story. The readability is okay, but there is nothing particularly eye-catching. There are many bad points. There are also some problems with the settings. For example, the author has no idea about the prices, so the settings are very inappropriate. It's reasonable. For example, if you wash 100 pieces of clothes, you will get a spiritual stone. Other small poisonous points come one after another. However, the overall plot is relatively stable. The small poisonous points can be overcome after a while. It can still be read. It can be regarded as an average book. It is not great, but it is not bad.

The thinking is clear and makes you want to read more.

To be honest, it has been a long time since I came across a fairy tale that made me want to read on. Although at first I thought it might be a system about having many children and many blessings, it was not nutritious and I just enjoyed looking at the pictures. The result was far beyond my expectation. The author is great and the writing is really good, although there are some places where the handling is a little bit awkward. It's good, but it's not bad. I don't know why the rating is not high. I said it's not worse than ordinary people, and some may say I'm exaggerating, but for now, I feel that the writing is very good. It's not just a system that keeps coming and going, but each character has his or her own emotions that are very specific and unique. Generally speaking, the flaws can't be concealed! I sincerely hope that the author will continue to work hard and write this book well. I hope you will also like this book. There is another important point! ! ! ! I have no choice but to watch now! [Smile] You know! Speed ​​me up! The quality cannot be low either! It must be completed with quality and quantity! Can you do it [make a face]

The plot structure of this book should be imitated by Wenzhao Gong's "Gou Zai Cultivating Immortality in the Troubled Times of Demons and Martial Arts", and a lot of novels have been edited into it; but later on, the author also wrote his own characteristics in the direction of family flow. The overall evaluation is pretty good. I hope the author can write in his own unique style.

It's actually quite beautiful and exciting. But the author is also a god. In order to keep the word count down, he writes the story of the protagonist's family every time he becomes famous [face covering] "At the age of five, I was alone in selling the small fields in my family home for two big cakes and dozens of pennies to enter the world. At the age of seventeen, I stood at the top of the martial arts. But when I heard that there were immortals in the world, I gave up everything and went to the Zixu Sect to seek immortality..." I can't stand it anymore. Anyway, the author will continue to write this plot in the future... He is completely immersed in his art [face covering] [OK]

Five stars, I can't watch the Second Generation Tang San by myself

The protagonist kills decisively, and the system is light on immortality. What I like the most is that every character in it has its own characteristics, even the small characters are vivid and vivid. It has been a long time since I have seen such a wonderful book on the theme of immortality. I feel it is better than many books with a score of 9 or above. I read it in one sitting, but it is not satisfying. I hope the author will update it soon. This book is really good. I hope it will be updated soon but it cannot be written too hastily. Come on! #Xiuxian#system#killing decisiveness#

I have looked at more than 50 pictures, and there is no big problem so far, except that the spirit stones are a little bit poisonous. For example, buying ten of the most common Qingchenfu costs 5 spirit stones, but what? I only get two spiritual stones after working for a month, (´--`;) I can bear it,

I've read a hundred chapters and it's really good, not bad.

At present, there is no poisonous point, it is ok

I've read Chapter 24 so far. Two big poisonous points, a little fat guy who had only known each other for a short time, directly lent each other the elixir. I lent 10,000 yuan to the other party, which was equivalent to my own salary of 4,000 yuan. What a good boy. The second poisonous point is a girl. His father treated him very badly. Her father prepares to sell her to the protagonist. In the end, the protagonist really agreed. It is beautiful to say that his name brings compassion to his heart. Virgin mary

Not bad, the author's writing style is very sophisticated. Although it has multiple heroines, the writing is really good and it captures the feeling I want, which is sentimental but not sentimental! Although the protagonist is also sexy, he is a man! Normal, right? The system is also a family flow system! I will continue to support you more in the future. Please keep updating, author!

I personally feel that this is a good book about family cultivation of immortality. I can only say that the shortcomings do not hide the good points, and there are many poisonous points in the middle. For example, practicing Qi at the 6th level and being in seclusion for ten years, but the character portrayal is better, and the family characters can all have distinct personalities.

I think it's pretty good-looking, although it's a bit bland, but it looks pretty good! Why is Mo Yunyu so unimproved? The protagonist has been in seclusion for ten years, but she has made no progress at all outside. [Laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

I have tried it for everyone. Chapter 75 of Little Poison in the early stage, Big Poison, run away. Brothers, I will give full stars first. I can't be the only one who gets poisoned.

After reading the first few chapters, I think it is a good book as a bookworm for many years. But I would like to warn you, don't read that review. Some of the comments made by elementary school students in it can affect your mood. They are all a bunch of comments that are out of ideas and have been read too much. It is not easy to evaluate, because the evaluation is to lower your IQ to () level. The plot behind it is emmmm hard to describe in a word

I feel very good about adding more male protagonists fighting. Get rewarded with stuff. Richer, feels a bit small. It's still very good. I wonder why the rating is so low? Don't be ridiculous, it's really good

I have finished reading the updated one. It's a story about the cultivation of immortality by the Liangcao family. Although there are many female protagonists, I have a good grasp of it. I recommend it.

The score is a bit low, but with luck I can get it to 9.0

It's not bad. It's a family fairy tale that I like.

The author's logical thinking is clear, his writing is fluent, and his story is wonderful. It's worth reading. Five-star recommendation.

Categories: Mortals cultivating immortality, system, slightly cool, harem, many children, many blessings Rating: 1. Plot: It is a relatively good book about mortals cultivating immortality. Compared with other mindless and cool articles about refining qi in one day and building foundation in three days, this book also writes about the unpredictability of people's hearts in the world of immortality and the hardships of cultivating immortality. The pace is relatively slow ("What?! It's actually the founder of foundation building!" [Face covering]). The gift packages given by the protagonist's system are quite powerful but not invincible. 2. Small questions: 1. Poisonous points: There were a few minor poisons in the early stages of the work, but after enduring it, it seems pretty good at almost 300 chapters (I forgot the specific minor poisons, but I remember feeling a little poisonous at the time), and there are no big problems with the overall thinking and logic. 2. Classification: I don't really like the label of "many children and many blessings", it probably has to do with personal preference [currently working on drafting] Another disadvantage of building a family is that there are too many names and I can't remember them.

The writing is okay, compared to traditional immortal novels, it's pretty good. It's just that it's a slow burner. It's 200 chapters and hundreds of thousands of words, and I'm still building the foundation. I don't know when I can break through and go to the spirit world.

The writing is very good and the setting is novel. Among the family portraits that are currently popular, the author has innovatively invented the concept of family repair. The author's writing is not bad, and the connection is smooth. It is a rare book in Tomato.

Only those cultivators who have the seven emotions and six desires of mortals are more real! Although this book is not amazing, it is certainly worth reading! I hope that the author's potential will explode in the later period, and the more he writes, the more exciting it will be, and make this book the pinnacle of fairy works!

This is one of the few that has over 500,000 readers and I can continue to like it! Comments on the work are as follows: This family is either already seeking death or on the way to death. But he is the protagonist, so it doesn't matter! For example: the protagonist plans to teach several of his children the magical power of a true immortal. This is seeking death! If the child is captured and soul-searched, everything will be over! In addition, there are more and more people who betray their blood relatives. The bigger the family, the more of them! Once the magical power is exposed, the game is over...

The content is actually okay, it's a harem story, the emotional description is okay, the plot is reasonable, it starts in a low-level supercontinent, and it's reasonable to suppress the realm. The map is large so it can be expanded slowly, which is no problem. I hope I can grasp the rhythm in the future. This map is still not big enough. It is recommended that the protagonist needs to expand the existing map a little before turning into a god. Otherwise, the situation of pressing the realm in the front will be a bit unreasonable. After all, only the world map section is too big to really be too far and remote to bother. After all, this is a world of cultivating immortals. The territory that cultivators can control is actually very large, and cultivators are selfish. Even if there are few resources, they still have to drain them. Only when the map is so big that it is really difficult to manage, the various settings above are really reasonable.

The pros and cons are clear. Pros: The protagonist is really a villain, unlike 99% of Douluo fandoms where the protagonist is a typical hypocrite who is just a gutter rat pretending to be a human being, which is disgusting, and the content is passable; Cons: "water" from the surging river