[Traditional unlimited flow without gimmicks + upgrades to fight monsters + funny + inner drama + complaints + slow heat + no knife]
In the bustling ruins filled with dense fog, strange monsters whose outlines are unclear are wandering. Here, death no longer follows the laws of nature, but interprets the final chapter of life in a strange manner.
Maduge stood alone on the foggy street. In front of his eyes, a light curtain was clearly projected in his mind: [Entered G-level copy: "Mysterious Fog"].
The capital English letters are particularly eye-catching among the Chinese characters, but the pastoral expression is lost in confusion.
You call this a G-level copy?
[New author, the coding speed may be slow, please bear with me.
[PS: This book is a slow-burning book, and the protagonist prefers to talk to himself. In addition, the first dungeon may seem boring, but I tried my best to make every chapter of this dungeon interesting, but in the end something went against my wishes. I beg you readers to bear with me.
[PS: It will be better if you persist until the second copy.
Reader comments
(Upper middle) 8 points, mark,,,,,,
The sense of substitution is average, the plug-ins are average, the imagination is good, the characters are excellent, the writing is excellent, the rhythm is excellent, the main plot is unclear, the subject matter is average, and the logic is excellent.
Your name is not attractive, and you seem to want to cut the book, so the rating is lowered, and the subject matter is not popular. Your writing style is the writing style of a famous author, with a certain number of fans, which is not suitable for newcomers. You should find a popular subject matter and write a book first. If you have a mass base, you can write like this.
I advise you to change the subject, otherwise it will just be a waste of your own time.
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Objective evaluation, if you have different opinions, you can evaluate it yourself.
1. Evaluation of the novel:
(1) Sense of immersion, plug-ins, and imagination;
(2) Character design, writing style, and rhythm;
(3) Main line, theme, logic;
(4) Economy, sense of space, and other characters;
(5) Evaluation: ① Excellent, ② Excellent, ③ Good, ④ Average, ⑤ Unknown, ⑤ Poor, ⑥ Extremely poor.
2. Rating of the novel:
(1) Shangshang (a good book that suits my taste very well, unexpectedly excellent) Five stars and 10 points.
(2) Superior (recognized as a good book by everyone, the number of updates exceeds 1,000) ① 9-1 points out of five stars, ② 9 points out of five stars, ③ 10 points out of five stars.
(3) Shang Xia (good books with rigorous and self-consistent logic, good books that do not meet taste) ① five stars 8-1 points, ② five stars 8 points, ③ five stars 9 points.
(4) Above average (a good book in the conventional sense, without special features) ① Five-star 7-1 points, ② Five-star 7 points, ③ Five-star 8 points, ④ #8+1-point#.
(5) Medium (the reading experience is disappointing, far from expectations, and difficult to objectively evaluate) ① Three stars x points, ② One point minus.
(6) Middle to lower (a work with average performance, no outstanding highlights, and no major problems) ① Three stars 5-1 points, ② Three stars 5 points, ③ Three stars 6 points, ④ Four stars 6-1 points, ⑤ Four stars 6 points, ⑥ Four stars 7 points, ⑦#7+1 Points#.
(7) Xia Shang (a novel with major flaws, but there are still some merits) ① One star 1 point, ② One star 2 points, ③ Three stars 3 points, ④ Three stars 4 points.
(8) Inferior (a novel that is as boring as tasteless reading, unattractive, and difficult to bring reading pleasure) 2 stars/0 points.
(9) Xiaxia (a book with good writing but distorted views, harmful content, seriously affecting the reading experience) ① two stars - 1 point, ② two stars - 3 points, ③ two stars - 6 points, ④ two stars - 7 points, ⑤ two stars - 8 points, ⑥ two stars - 9 points, ⑦ two stars - 10 points.
Copy this, fifth edition
(lower middle) good/point, mark,,,,,,
Sense of substitution, plug-ins, setting, writing, rhythm, imagination, character, main line, logic.
Additional deductions:
Personal feelings:
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#Objective evaluation. If you have different opinions, you can evaluate it yourself.
1. Evaluation of the novel
(1) First impression: sense of substitution, plug-ins, settings
(2) Overall experience: writing style, rhythm, and imagination
(3) Detailed description: character, main line, logic
(4) Extra deduction points: data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge...
(5) Evaluation: ① Excellent (+4), ② Excellent (+2), ③ Good (+1), ④ Average (0), ⑤ Unknown (0), ⑤ Poor (-1), ⑥ Extremely poor (-3).
Centered on "lower than average/four stars good/7 points", the evaluation criteria are based on the first nine items, and additional points can be deducted for other items. Every +2 evaluation will increase the score by one level, every -1 for middle or lower will decrease the score by one level, and every -2 will decrease the score by one level.
2. Rating of the novel
(1) Shangshang (a good book that suits my taste very well, unexpectedly excellent): (24) Five-star quality++/10 points+.
(2) Superior (recognized by everyone as a good book, the number of updates exceeds 1,000): (18) five-star excellent +/9.5 Points, (20) five-star excellent/9.5 Points+, (22) five-star excellent +/10 points.
(3) Shang Xia (good books with rigorous and self-consistent logic, good books that do not meet taste): (12) Five-star excellent++/8.5 Points, (14) Five-star excellent-/8.5 Points+, (16) Five-star excellent/9 points.
(4) Above average (a good book in the conventional sense, without special features): (4) Five-star good++/7.5 Points, (6) Five-star excellent-/7.5 Points+, (8) Five-star excellent/8.0 Points, (10) Five-star excellent+/8.0 Points+.
(5) Middle to lower (a work with average performance, no outstanding highlights, and no major problems): (-5) Three-star poor++/5 points, (-4) Three-star average-/5 points+, (-3) Three-star average/6 points, (-2) Four-star average+/6 points, (-1) Four-star good-/6 points+, (0) Four-star good/7 points, (+2) Four-star good+/7 points+.
(6) Xia Shang (a novel with major flaws, but there are still some merits): (-13) One star is extremely poor +/1 point, (-11) ② One star is poor -/2 points, (-9) Three stars are poor/3 points, (-7) Three stars are poor +/4 points.
(7) Xiaxia (a book with good writing but distorted views) , the content is harmful, seriously affects the reading experience, and makes people physically uncomfortable): (-15) Two-star extreme bad +/-1 point, (-17) Two-star extreme bad/-3 points, (-19) Two-star extremely bad -/-6 points, (-21) Two-star disaster++/-7 points, (-23) Two-star disaster +/-8 points, (-25) Two-star disaster/-9 points, (-27) Two-star disaster -/-10 points.
(8) Medium (the reading experience is disappointing, far from expected, personal experience): Unknown three stars/x points.
(9) Inferior (a novel that is unattractive to read, no evaluation): 2 stars unknown/0 points.
The book is pretty good
Both the protagonist and the supporting characters have IQs.
(Upper middle) 8 points, mark,,,,,, The sense of substitution is average, the plug-ins are average, the imagination is good, the characters are excellent, the writing is excellent, the rhythm is excellent, the main plot is unclear, the subject matter is average, and the logic is excellent. Your name is not attractive, and you seem to want to cut the book, so the rating is lowered, and the subject matter is not popular. Your writing style is the writing style of a famous author, with a certain number of fans, which is not suitable for newcomers. You should find a popular subject matter and write a book first. If you have a mass base, you can write like this. I advise you to change the subject, otherwise it will just be a waste of your own time. ─────────────────── Objective evaluation, if you have different opinions, you can evaluate it yourself. 1. Evaluation of the novel: (1) Sense of immersion, plug-ins, and imagination; (2) Character design, writing style, and rhythm; (3) Main line, theme, logic; (4) Economy, sense of space, and other characters; (5) Evaluation: ① Excellent, ② Excellent, ③ Good, ④ Average, ⑤ Unknown, ⑤ Poor, ⑥ Extremely poor. 2. Rating of the novel: (1) Shangshang (a good book that suits my taste very well, unexpectedly excellent) Five stars and 10 points. (2) Superior (recognized as a good book by everyone, the number of updates exceeds 1,000) ① 9-1 points out of five stars, ② 9 points out of five stars, ③ 10 points out of five stars. (3) Shang Xia (good books with rigorous and self-consistent logic, good books that do not meet taste) ① five stars 8-1 points, ② five stars 8 points, ③ five stars 9 points. (4) Above average (a good book in the conventional sense, without special features) ① Five-star 7-1 points, ② Five-star 7 points, ③ Five-star 8 points, ④ #8+1-point#. (5) Medium (the reading experience is disappointing, far from expectations, and difficult to objectively evaluate) ① Three stars x points, ② One point minus. (6) Middle to lower (a work with average performance, no outstanding highlights, and no major problems) ① Three stars 5-1 points, ② Three stars 5 points, ③ Three stars 6 points, ④ Four stars 6-1 points, ⑤ Four stars 6 points, ⑥ Four stars 7 points, ⑦#7+1 Points#. (7) Xia Shang (a novel with major flaws, but there are still some merits) ① One star 1 point, ② One star 2 points, ③ Three stars 3 points, ④ Three stars 4 points. (8) Inferior (a novel that is as boring as tasteless reading, unattractive, and difficult to bring reading pleasure) 2 stars/0 points. (9) Xiaxia (a book with good writing but distorted views, harmful content, seriously affecting the reading experience) ① two stars - 1 point, ② two stars - 3 points, ③ two stars - 6 points, ④ two stars - 7 points, ⑤ two stars - 8 points, ⑥ two stars - 9 points, ⑦ two stars - 10 points. Copy this, fifth edition (lower middle) good/point, mark,,,,,, Sense of substitution, plug-ins, setting, writing, rhythm, imagination, character, main line, logic. Additional deductions: Personal feelings: ─────────────────── #Objective evaluation. If you have different opinions, you can evaluate it yourself. 1. Evaluation of the novel (1) First impression: sense of substitution, plug-ins, settings (2) Overall experience: writing style, rhythm, and imagination (3) Detailed description: character, main line, logic (4) Extra deduction points: data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge... (5) Evaluation: ① Excellent (+4), ② Excellent (+2), ③ Good (+1), ④ Average (0), ⑤ Unknown (0), ⑤ Poor (-1), ⑥ Extremely poor (-3). Centered on "lower than average/four stars good/7 points", the evaluation criteria are based on the first nine items, and additional points can be deducted for other items. Every +2 evaluation will increase the score by one level, every -1 for middle or lower will decrease the score by one level, and every -2 will decrease the score by one level. 2. Rating of the novel (1) Shangshang (a good book that suits my taste very well, unexpectedly excellent): (24) Five-star quality++/10 points+. (2) Superior (recognized by everyone as a good book, the number of updates exceeds 1,000): (18) five-star excellent +/9.5 Points, (20) five-star excellent/9.5 Points+, (22) five-star excellent +/10 points. (3) Shang Xia (good books with rigorous and self-consistent logic, good books that do not meet taste): (12) Five-star excellent++/8.5 Points, (14) Five-star excellent-/8.5 Points+, (16) Five-star excellent/9 points. (4) Above average (a good book in the conventional sense, without special features): (4) Five-star good++/7.5 Points, (6) Five-star excellent-/7.5 Points+, (8) Five-star excellent/8.0 Points, (10) Five-star excellent+/8.0 Points+. (5) Middle to lower (a work with average performance, no outstanding highlights, and no major problems): (-5) Three-star poor++/5 points, (-4) Three-star average-/5 points+, (-3) Three-star average/6 points, (-2) Four-star average+/6 points, (-1) Four-star good-/6 points+, (0) Four-star good/7 points, (+2) Four-star good+/7 points+. (6) Xia Shang (a novel with major flaws, but there are still some merits): (-13) One star is extremely poor +/1 point, (-11) ② One star is poor -/2 points, (-9) Three stars are poor/3 points, (-7) Three stars are poor +/4 points. (7) Xiaxia (a book with good writing but distorted views) , the content is harmful, seriously affects the reading experience, and makes people physically uncomfortable): (-15) Two-star extreme bad +/-1 point, (-17) Two-star extreme bad/-3 points, (-19) Two-star extremely bad -/-6 points, (-21) Two-star disaster++/-7 points, (-23) Two-star disaster +/-8 points, (-25) Two-star disaster/-9 points, (-27) Two-star disaster -/-10 points. (8) Medium (the reading experience is disappointing, far from expected, personal experience): Unknown three stars/x points. (9) Inferior (a novel that is unattractive to read, no evaluation): 2 stars unknown/0 points.
The book is pretty good
Both the protagonist and the supporting characters have IQs.