Demon Slayer: Starting with Fate at Its Full Strength

Emm, invincible text. But it is also a purely entertaining story. The protagonist is like a high-latitude observer who occasionally takes action and usually lies back and eats. This inevitably gives people the feeling of being outside the plot and watching the original work again. My personal suggestion is that it is better to write the protagonist as an indigenous person, as it is easier to operate and can write more plots and emotions. Secondly, there are the details. No one finds it strange to take out things like melon seeds, benches, and snacks out of thin air. There is also a plot where the protagonist says that he has gone down the mountain to "borrow" a lot of things recently. At worst, he will help kill Wu Mei in the future. Everyone has their own opinions on this. In fact, I think it can be completely removed. A design that has no impact on the plot and characterization but may cause objections is best left. It's okay to just have fun and make up for your regrets. Of course, these are my opinions and suggestions after only reading the previous parts. (Tomatoes don't have dog heads [cry]) (🐶 Dog heads save lives [eat melon])

It's so well written, I like it [laughing evilly]

There's nothing to say, come on, author

Come on, you're probably the only one on this track

It's so cool, I like it so much, the protagonist is super strong

Fragrant, fragrant and delicious

Good, good, good-looking! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Very lively, I like it very much

The plot is very interesting

Do not comment on your own opinions, do not disturb, or criticize others.

It makes me laugh so hard. Do you know how hard it is for me to hold back laughter in the middle of the night?

There are many embarrassing and toxic points that I hope can be improved.

Still pretty good

Well, it's the same as mine

@ Mrs. Gu of Dry Island [laughing]

Woo woo woo. So beautiful.

It's so funny, but it's really good-looking

Very pretty But the protagonist didn't take part in much of the plot, and it wasn't written in a three-dimensional way. Just write this aspect better.

Already brushed it many times. Personally, I think it's pretty good-looking, especially the one I just updated today, but it's a bit lacking in updates.

It's pretty good to watch, and the main character's character is also very interesting.

I think it's quite interesting. The main character is very unique. Yeah... I haven't finished it yet, but it's quite enjoyable.