After the Soul Passed Through Lolita, the Yandere Qingmei Also Came with Her.

Hmm... Based on what I'm following personally and my not-so-much resume, I'd like to describe my personal views on this book. First of all, this book breaks out of the general framework of Lily that I've read, and it has a novel feeling. Generally speaking, the premise of traveling through books is that the plot of the book has been completed. Many authors may not have thought about the discontinued novel, or have thought about it but not implemented it. Secondly, the rhythm of arousing and mitigating conflicts in this book is also very good, which is still in line with my personal taste. Let's talk about Xiao Chi's second book. I finished that book a long time ago. I can definitely say that Xiao Chi's writing style is really good. I have personally read some highly rated books, such as "Su You" or "Li Anxin and Xiaolu (although the author has been the same for a long time)". I put Xiao Chi in that category. Including the second book, his delicate writing style is evident. It's hard to believe that this was written by a junior high school student who is facing the high school entrance examination (after all, I followed two books by the same person for several nights in a row without knowing it...) Finally, I very much hope that everyone can read Xiao Chi's works seriously. I am short of words and cannot describe this excellent work, so I can only sing "Out of Control" on my bed. Also, Xiao Chi is very cute (=^･ｪ･^=)

Before commenting, I would like to say sorry! To be honest, I was charged with reading with my brain for more than an hour, and I couldn't help but feel unhappy. The following is just my personal opinion: Chapter 23: "Bai" doesn't want to go out of the plot. The female protagonist has to go for her and has to save the original male protagonist. I personally think that reminding the male protagonist is the most benevolent thing. Secondly, I mentioned at the beginning that there are police around, and you can find the right time to fall into the trap. Can't you tell the police at the right time? Do you have to go alone? I also have a anchor who promotes legal education! Then the system is like an afterthought. It doesn't say it before the heroine starts taking action, and then later says that the death of the original hero will have an impact on the world. Can't it rationalize the heroine's actions? In the end, according to the system, a lucky male lead can be beaten to death by a group of actors who don't have golden fingers? In various novels I read, it is considered an endangered species; the world is still going to be affected, so does the heroine have to die at the damn time, and some supporting characters who don't die at the damn time have to be rescued, and the original heroine is soul-pierced, does the world have to die first? Regardless of the above, here are my guesses about the plot: After the female protagonist rescued the original male protagonist, the original male protagonist began to have contact with the female protagonist, causing the female protagonist to become dark and yandere? Or maybe the original heroine didn't care at first, but later discovered the heroine's identity in her previous life, and then became seriously yandere? If that's the case, don't you think it's a bit too deliberate? It's like I'm trying to find a reason for "Bai" to become a yandere. If you don't think I didn't say it. …… Oh! Please forgive my presumptuous behavior, just treat it as a fart, let me release the depression in my heart, and it made me feel better. Dear gentlemen, the road to rivers and lakes is long, and the brave will win when we meet on a narrow road. I'll take a step back, the sea and the sky are vast, and we will meet again if we are destined!

It's really good to read, and this time it's not the type of Big Leaf and Little Leaf. I've read 5 similar books before, and I really don't want to read them. This book's worldview is finally more unique. I'm really looking forward to the Little Dark Object plot, and I hope the ending of the second personality won't be too bad.

If I could only describe this book in one word, I would say "Brilliant!" From the subject matter of the novel and the several buff-stacked tags, I can tell that this book is definitely not simple. The very stylized and colorful descriptions at the beginning quickly lead people into the rhythm and enter the world described by the author. Various contradictions, conflicts, various dislocations and misunderstandings caused by incompleteness fill the plot with tension and make people feel excited to read. Whether it's the extreme depression and love that the two yanderes bring to each other, or the fierce collision and love between the two yanderes due to the information gap, the subject matter of this novel is destined to be depressing and uncomfortable in some parts (just like the one next door), but at the same time it is particularly touching. (Just as some people like to watch more twisted plots) The particularity of this book's body is destined to be secretly compared by some readers with Xiao Cheng's book. However, in my opinion, both books have their own characteristics. The author himself is also reading that book. There must be some borrowed parts, but the author has his own things and has sewn them in well. (For example, some of the plots that appear later can clearly be seen as referencing parts of certain books) From the current point of view, there is not much poisonous point, but there are many typos in the later part, and some contents have a strong sense of fragmentation and are not connected to the above. Generally speaking, it is very good that the author writes so well for a junior high school student (I am also a junior high school student myself). Finally, I want to say good luck to the author, your book is very good. (If the review is good, can the author give me a reply?)

I have read two books by the author, and it still has a fast pace that is rare in the industry. It seems very smooth and not so "plain water". The plot is relatively new, unlike that kind of template article. It can be seen that the author has many unique ideas in the middle (I have seen many Bianbai stories, which usually start with misunderstandings, then go through many, many events, finally reconcile, and then make love. Such a pure two-way rush? It is still relatively rare), but it also has the same common problems that many Bianbai stories have: the psychological and behavioral incompatibility of the characters before and after the transformation is not too obvious, but it is not harmful, and it can still be treated as a pure Baikan. I think the highlight of this article is when multiple souls are revealed at the end, which is really eye-catching (I read it several times before I could sort out the order. The author's logical thinking is still very strong, which is also reflected in other works). The evaluation is weak. Book friends please move to the main text [Love]

Mo Qian is ignorant and pathetic. Her parents died unexpectedly when she was young. She was bewitched by the devil and made a deal with the devil she didn't know. But she didn't know that fate had already marked a price. Three dreams brought three heartbreaks. Mo Li is pathetic, an accessory brought by Mo Qian's dream. As a sub-personality, he gave everything for the main personality Mo Qian. For the sake of her personality, she is willing to be forgotten; for the sake of her personality, she is willing to die; in the last few moments, she truly lives as Mo Li, which is considered a good ending. Mo Qian is sad. As a man, he lost his life due to the illness of his childhood friend in his previous life. In this life, he was involved in Mo Qian's dream and became a tragic victim. He was rejected by the world and his soul is unknown. Bai Yuning is pathetic. She is the only full witness in the story. She is the heroine in the original story, but she is unable to do anything for her friends and lovers. How can she not feel sad when she sees one miserable person leaving one after another? Author, what if the ending is a happy ending? Please @Fu Chi

I have read half of this book. To evaluate in one sentence - very good From an emotional point of view, readers can feel not only the feelings between the "male protagonist" and "female protagonist", but other things in the text also imply the author's own feelings. At first glance, the protagonist in the article wants to live broadcast the law to earn points, and there are restrictions on earning points in the article. At first glance, of course I feel that the author likes to copy and paste the word count, and I feel a little unhappy. Later, of course there was something I could understand. In Chapter 35 (because of this) the protagonist is disappointed and stimulated after realizing his emotions, and then explodes. I think there must be a lot of the author's emotions in it, and it can be seen just by reading the readers' comments. Is it dissatisfaction with the gap between rich and poor? Aversion to the darkness of reality? … Of course, as an "urban, funny, book-traveling, soul-traveling" yandere love novel, the more important thing is the description of the protagonist. Indeed, the interaction between the protagonist and the heroine and the system, especially the system, is full of humor. The intricate relationship between the protagonist and the heroine is clearly described and the emotional changes are rich, which is really good. As for the protagonist's second personality——Mo Li. My understanding is that a yandere is very kind to the protagonist, and you can see it in just a few words, let alone the main description. Regarding her background and other information, the author dug a hole and hopes to fill it. Regarding the shortcomings of this book, let me briefly summarize it for you: the writing style is too green, and the emotional changes of the characters are a bit unfamiliar; the emotional expression is too direct; there are too many chapters, pay more attention to rest, and remember to study hard (if you are a junior high school student. Allow me to question it a little) ---------------------------------------- The above are all personal opinions, please view and treat them rationally

Very! ! ! Good! ! ! Look! ! ! Come and see! ! ! I have followed the first book to this point, and I don't want the author to be discouraged by the popularity! ! !

Keep up the good work.

First of all, the author's avatar is Xiaote, secondly, Theresia is very cute, and finally, the novel is okay

It's super beautiful, and the subject matter is also very novel. It's easy to find soul-wearing lolita, yandere, and double-wearing, but it's not necessarily the same when combined. It's all good-looking.

Big cheers for the author! I finally found a book that I read in one night, support the author! The following is my personal opinion, simply because I have some over-imagined fantasies about happy endings. Because in the middle one glance and ten lines, some key plot points have been left out. I have made up some key nodes in my mind and have some ideas about the subsequent plot. Is Mo Qian's second wish similar to the death of Bai Yuning, the longevity lock between Mo Qian and Bai Yuning, and their death experiences? If the price of the soul does not mean that the soul is scattered, but the price of the soul like "Home Alone" (it's about the devil fulfilling the heroine's wish, the cost is a part of the soul, the main body of the soul is still there) or putting a curse on the soul, the story line can also be explained. Here are the reasons: 1 The first wish is to have a companion, which has two points. The first point is that the name "Mo Li" appears in the murmur that the protagonist hears, and the other point is that Mo Li is still there when the protagonist passes through. 2. In the second wish, Mo Qian wanted to be with Bai Yuning, and Mo Qian also wanted to be with Bai Yuning, but they all ended up being sent. 3. The protagonist female falls too fast. The name is also similar Maybe Mo Qian is Mo Qian's previous life. This may be a bit far-fetched. To me, isn't this a hope for a happy ending? Regarding rejection, isn't the return of the protagonist a variable in the destined tragedy?

Only then did I realize that I had read another book by the author on another mobile phone

I thought the author's first book was very good, and this one is also very good.

It's so beautiful. It would be better if the writing could be a little sharper [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

I see, it's not generally good-looking. Not many Lily novels nowadays can attract me. Either the development is too slow, or it's too fantasy, etc. But this one is completely in line with my taste. It's really beautiful😁, especially the plot. The author will update it quickly [Love]

Cheers to the author, you wrote it very well. It's so good. I've been following the book from the first book to this. Kudos to the author! ! (˵¯͒¯͒˵)

To be honest, it's okay, but this type is too easy to be blocked, kid, you must live well.

Look, when will the protagonists recognize each other (can't wait)

[Laughing evilly] I finished it in one hour, it's not enough

Emmm, I've always wanted to see this ending, where I use my body as a medicine to treat sick people for a lifetime, but it's too short (sad)

Although it feels weird in some places, it's actually pretty good to read, especially since the author is still in junior high school. I wish you good luck in your high school entrance exam, and I hope this book has a good ending.

I've speedrun it, it's currently 2025.1.19 10:45. I've seen it since 8:30 in the morning. It's worth watching. There are a lot of foreshadowings, but I'm too lazy to think about it.

I found another yandere novel that suits my taste, I'm so happy [please update]

It's the first time I've read Yongjiao. I think it's quite interesting. The plot has ups and downs. I think it's really great considering the author's age. I don't think I can write it.

It looks great, please give it a thumbs up, author

I really like watching girls post

Good looking, good luck to the author

So pretty

Finally finished