So What If It’s a Mental Attack? I’m Just a Good Martial Artist!

Yes, it is good food. I hope the author will not make the same mistake as the previous book, and hope that the author will write more about the daily activities of some characters. Don't write it in a boring way, at least make the characters more three-dimensional. A little more description of the emotional stuff. The parts about Ark and Honkai Impact simulation in the previous book felt pretty good. If you put it in a certain hedgehog, you could probably write a very thick book. It feels like the updates are a bit messy now. The progress of the plot feels a bit complicated, it feels like it jumps too fast, and there is no main plot. The relationship line is so weird. For the first time, I gave Platinum, my fiancée, Tallulah, etc., So the sense of presence is a bit low. The plot is a bit confusing, maybe because I read it too quickly and didn't pay close attention. Anyway, I just feel that the author is stuck in the same problem as the previous book. The plot starts to get messy in the middle. The main plot is not obvious, the branch plots are confusing, and many plots are written into another plot halfway through. It's a bit like playing a game and suddenly changing the save file in the middle. I don't describe it particularly well. Personally, I feel that the latest plots are not as good as those from the previous two days.

It was said to be a mental attack, but he was easily controlled by the mental attack.

It's okay so far, but I haven't played too much of the plots of Arknights and 1999, so I just played them casually.

Keep up the good work, it's great

Never mind. Give me a 5 first. I'm afraid the author will run away

It's a good book👍, but no one reads it.

It's pretty cool, but I don't know if the main character is strong or not.

This book is very good, good luck to the author

This writing style is better than that of a primary school student like me. What am I looking at? 🤦