Raising a Female Apprentice with Her Own Hands, Her Filial Piety Deteriorated

Not bad, but there are too many plot descriptions and not many descriptions between characters. I think the style of this book is for those who like plots, but those who like the emotions between characters may not be able to read it.

It's still quite good to watch. I hope there are more emotional scenes. Also, can you not let the heroine use disguised identity to develop relationships? It feels bad, not to mention that the hero dotes on the heroine so much. It would be better to just follow the heroine Ning Li's true identity. There is no need to pretend.

The subject matter is still very novel and interesting, but the plot is ordinary Boring, boring and long-winded

The faults do not hide the excellence, it is a masterpiece and suits my taste. After all, they are not all female masters. Sometimes I wonder, those novels portray the male protagonist so perfectly. If I don't say something about the male protagonist being good-looking, well-off, and strong in combat, he will die. I don't quite understand what that means. Sometimes such a male protagonist will be paired with an antagonist with poor conduct and a wretched appearance. Uh-huh, I don't quite understand who can fill in for him [laughing]

This novel makes me feel like reading the comic "The Immortal Cultivator Fights Super Powers", but this does not mean that the plots of the two are similar. On the contrary, the plots of the two are almost completely different. I just feel that some of the feelings they bring to me are somewhat similar. Returning to this book, it can be seen that this book instills some of the author's own views on cultivating immortality, and does not follow some of the writing conventions of many other novels. In the first half of the novel, the author's writing skills are a bit rusty, which often leads to emotional interruptions, but other than that, there are no major problems. This sense of emotional interruption does not appear again in the latest chapters. To sum up, the characters in this novel have good character development, the three views are normal, the self-constructed world view of the novel has matured, the military system has not collapsed, the logic is self-explanatory, and the future is stable and promising. Although according to the current writing method, it may take four to five million words to complete, but even so, it is definitely considered a must-read in February on Tomato. After the book score stabilizes, it should be above 9.0.

It has the flavor of White Crow's book Who Let Him Cultivate Immortality? The writing is pretty good on Tomato Overall, it's remarkable The settings are also relatively good The plot doesn't have any big surprises It's a pity in tomatoes This is not a paid chapter, so the author has a poor grasp of the rhythm. Inappropriate details Progress is too fast I feel that most of the parts of this book that are most useful for writing well have been skipped. The plot advances too fast Maybe if it was a paid chapter author, he could expand some things better in order to increase the number of words. Overall, it's remarkable It's already pretty good on Tomato

Well written! It's just not very popular, and I'm afraid the author won't be able to make a living, so I'll support the author by posting a five-star review!

When can I fast forward to education and training? [Sinister smile]

It's good to read. It's more of a light novel than a fairy tale.

The writing is good, some settings are well written, but I don't know if it has a single female protagonist. From the plot, it should be a single female protagonist.

Okay, I have some ideas. The author is free to write whatever comes to his mind. (I support you in this spirit) As for good or bad... I am short-sighted. But judging from the traffic and ratings, it should be considered a mid-to-lower level. There are also some awkward points in the article that I won't explain, such as the serious punch, but there is no feeling in the fingers.

I've watched part of it, and I think it's pretty good so far. It's to my liking. There's just one small problem, I'm a little confused. Who is the protagonist? Which description is the protagonist? @The electric fan is also lacking in oxygen

In fact, the battle scenes are what you want. Anyway, I mainly watch the emotional scenes...

Five stars for this, I really like the subject matter, sweet text + invincible, but the background introduction is not very clear, I suggest you explain the reason why the protagonist is locked up in the first three chapters.

The bold female rebel dared to commit the following crimes The fan also lacks oxygen. It's funny, light-hearted, and quite interesting. But the subsequent plot is not long enough or interesting enough, but it is definitely above average and acceptable. If you can accept it, give it five stars.

The writing is quite good, mainly funny. I laughed so hard in the middle of the night that my stomach hurt [eating melon] The writing is so good, why is it not popular? The author should not forget his roots and has opened a new book, but this book also needs to be updated [crying][crying]

Do you have a single heroine or no heroine? Or maybe the heroine I understand is different from what you mean.

It feels good, it looks pretty

Good-looking, quite funny, not bad

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking It's so well written, you can watch it

I want to watch the training😡 Hurry up and get some dental training! 😡

Good-looking, love to watch, non-toxic

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Overall, it's average. It's not poisonous.

I don't know, I like it

After taking a closer look, why do you want to go back after being ignored and not thinking about running away or liquidating?

Not bad, perfect for killing time

Well written, why are there so few people?

It's not enough to watch, but it feels pretty good

It seems pretty good now, but I don't know if there will be a love line. I hope there will be, but it's time to start school and I won't be able to catch up on updates in the next nine days. I hope the author will continue writing, come on💪💪💪