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It's okay, just don't always call people by their names before you know the characters in the plot. Some people simply can't accept this. This is a poisonous point. You can write it in your mind instead of calling it out directly.

I read 100 chapters in one go. Anyone who likes to watch routine and anti-routine Pokémon can take a look. However, since it mainly uses relatively famous and special tactical routines, the Pokémon's character is somewhat cute and some elements are lacking. However, the battle interaction is very exciting, and the pig's foot's simple and neat character is also stable, but sometimes it is a bit unscrupulous. The system pops up from time to time to improve the Pokémon's strength and skills, and you can even compete for the weakest presence system. All in all, it looks great so far. Although the number of words in big events is a little too high to get rewards, the free prostitution capital rewards make me have no objections. Keep up the good work. Let me ask you weakly, do you have many girlfriends or many "girlfriends"? As a book writer, please reply [shy]

Latios may know that he is helping others, but the other person is his trainer after all, and since he has become his Pokémon, he must obey orders! ! This setting is a bit difficult. Since I have been subdued by the evil trainer, I can only obey and beat my sister to death, right? [Face covering] [OK] The one I am using is not a dark ball, and all the minor characters have mythical beasts.

It should express the correct ideals of the protagonist. If you want to write a longer book, you can slow down the progress, otherwise it will be over before you reach 500 chapters. For this reason, I decided to maintain the book for three weeks and write more. It is recommended to update 40,000 words per day to make it easier for me to read. It is best to update 20 words per day.

Can. But I feel like it's not feasible to stay in this gym all the time. The protagonist can also travel. Then catch more Bug-type Pokémon. Taoist temple can just find a reliable person. Then give him a few more elves (you can only carry six with you, just give him the ones you can't carry.) And ask him to help you guard the gym. [Laughing evilly] Five stars for you. [Sinister smile]

How should I put it? There are not enough chapters in the novel to give an overall review. Although the description is still too colloquial and the plot is predictable, it is generally okay. However, I am very worried about the emotional line, because the author said it depends on the reader, but having multiple women will undoubtedly reduce the protagonist's care for Pokémon. My suggestion is to try to be single or none, don't be ambiguous, if there is it, there is it, if there is not, there is nothing. The author still listens to readers' suggestions. The timeline is in the old Muji and the plot is slightly changed.

[Laughing evilly] Who is the heroine? The author mentioned Sirona. Does Ke Na count? Do you want to marry Miss Junsha and Joy from Crescent Town? I didn't see that the heroine is these two [Thinking] Xiao Ju'er is not bad either. [Laughing evilly] You can still find a lot of dirty routines on the Internet. Also, how is the heroine [laughing evilly], how is Big Recco, the royal sister Sirona, and prosecutor Joey? Keychain: The mischievous heart characteristic of the keychain can ensure that you strike first in front of non-evil opponents. It combines electromagnetic wave and bluff double blockade to make the opponent immobilized with a 75% probability every round. Combined with the deception skill, you can defeat the opponent without being able to make a move. Hard Ghost Cicada: In a doubles match, the combination of the spirit with hard characteristics and the "acting" skill gives the ghost cicada the hard characteristic. Since the ghost cicada has only 1 HP at full health, the hard characteristic will be triggered after being attacked, so that it will not die. Poison caltrop and rocky gravel: By combining poisonous caltrop and rocky gravel, the movement and attack of the opponent's elves are restricted, increasing one's chance of victory. Sailor Shuriken: Sandeater uses the Sailor Shuriken to attack his teammates, triggering the weakness insurance effect and increasing his own attack power.

It's okay, I can read it, but I don't know why I feel that the author's writing is less meaningful than other classic Pokémon fics. This feeling can be clearly felt. I can only say that I need to work harder, and then the author should not be too watery, because some places are really boring and unsatisfactory. Then I hope the Alola plot line will be over soon, because I feel that there is really nothing good about Alola, and it is not exciting. [Thinking] Finally, I hope the author will work hard and update more, and don't interrupt the update.

Pure gym text, with the unified minimum required attributes of a gym, unlike the previous gyms where multiple attributes were mixed into teams, and it does not resist a lot of crazy cheats from the three quasi-god beasts. It is very interesting.

I feel it's okay, and the plot is okay. The characterization is a bit lacking. I suggest that we put more effort into characterization that has a plot, so that it can be better. But then I just don't know who the heroine is.

I generally support Pokémon books, otherwise I would only give one star to yours. Although a gym leader is relatively weak, doesn't he even know the strengthening moves? Moreover, Xiaozhi's character is to love every Pokémon. Of course, he will like the ones he raises more, but it is impossible to say that he is discriminating against weak Pokémon, let alone the entire category of insect type.

Come on, author💪 I hope the heroines will be Serena and Sirona

The content is interesting. It's rare to see anyone willing to play with Lada.

The novel written by the author is very good about Pokémon, and it is not like other novels. Although it is said to be casual, the racial value is very high. The ones the author found are all insect type, and he also chose the most common roadside rat Ratha to conquer, which is not found in many novels.

Good Pokémon writing (⌒▽⌒) I haven't watched Pokémon since the protagonist changed. It just returned not long ago. The author's writing is also good and understandable. Overall, it's good. I give it five stars (≧∇≦*)

I'm curious, why did Lusamine lose Lilian?

It's a very interesting Pokémon novel, but it's a pity that it came a little early and I didn't read enough. I hope there are speakers [laughing evilly]

I have read many novels about being a steward, and one of my favorites has been discontinued. Then I also found a lot of Pokémon novels. I quite like this type of novel, and I'm not a professional reader of novels, but I think the author writes well, at least I can read it. I will also read some popular novels on the Internet, but after reading a few chapters, I will not read them again because I may not be patient enough.

For me, I can continue to read this novel. It may be because it is relatively tolerant. There are private settings, some seemingly brainless cool points, and some mythical beasts with inexplicable minor characters. Therefore, readers who have high requirements for Pokémon novels do not need to come in and be criticized, and then give bad reviews, or some direct personal attacks. Every novel has its own audience. If you don't like it, You think it shouldn't be rated so high. Others may not think it's very fashionable or ugly, so there is no need to use your own standards to restrict other people's freedom of reading and judge the rating of this novel from your own perspective. If you are lucky enough to read my comments, I hope you can read them carefully and help you decide whether to read this novel in the future. Please remember these words in the future. There is no need to restrict others with your own requirements. [Top post][top post][top post]

It has been a long time since Tomato has seen some relatively good author articles. If this book can still be of such good quality in the future, it may become one of the few elf books to score above nine points.

It's really very beautiful and very logical, and a weak Pokémon can become very strong depending on how you play it. Although my favorite is Elledor, the Bug Pokémon was also one of my favorite attributes in my childhood.

The plot of the story is average. I met a mythical beast man when I first came to the novice village, but the battle was perfect. The tactics explained by the author were very detailed. Is this combat power broken? In the front, Joey and the leader of the thieves group, fw Xin Wu, are powerful. Forget it. In the back, Dodo cannot defeat the siege of the four generals. The protagonist can fight casually. And the recent villain Gilmery uses two to beat Liu Bo + Kona, two of them with championship strength. . .

The writing is still okay. Although it is a systematic article, it does not have that invincible feeling. It is relatively close to the truth.

A rare insect-based Pokémon, worth a look

Super pretty\(//∇//)\millions! Don't stop updating!

It's very exciting. It's really cool to bring all kinds of quality tactics into the game.

The timeline doesn't have to be as stuck as the original. They are creators, so they develop the Pokémon world view online. Mega-evolved fairies and other things can be added directly to the second creation. Do we have to wait for Ash to travel another 20 years before we see the second creation?

A very good insect type, with some tactical display, not obtrusive and very suitable. Looking forward to more updates.

There's more to the branch plot, but I still like the main plot.

Okay, okay, but why is there a Ratha in the insect gym?