
After My Death, My Junior Brother Who Cultivated the Ruthless Path Became a Demon.
我死后修无情道的师弟入了魔
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I Beg for a Book That Comes Back After Escaping from Death. It Doesn't Matter Whether It's a Quick Time Travel or Not. It's About Shuang Nan.
I want to read a book like "After seducing my master and escaping to death, I became a ferret". Books like this
Shuangnan Xiuxian Has No Good Reason to Argue (The Struggle of the Shuangren)
I'm asking if you have any good books, I hope you can recommend them to me ˶╹ꇴ╹˶
Novel in Which the Protagonist Cultivates the Path of Ruthlessness, Such as Taishang Wangqing
There is no heroine, the protagonist cultivates the path of ruthlessness, a novel similar to Taishang Wangqing and other techniques.
Is There Any Article That Is so Interesting That People Won't Put It Down? Bisexual
Is there any kind of interesting article that people won't want to abandon? Don't want the kind of article that suddenly loses interest halfway through reading, bisexual, kneel down! ! !
Is There Any Story About Two Male Protagonists Who Chase Their Wives at the Crematorium?
Is There Such a Thing as Horse Armor (Dropping the Horse in the Later Stage)? Two Men! Please
I Have Recently Fallen in Love with Shuang Nan's Senior Brother Wen
A Novel with Two Male Protagonists Worth Reading
Give Me a Tomato Top 1 Shuangnan Novel
Two strong points, good writing style, and no loss of intelligence.
New Book! Just New Books! the Kind with No Traffic!
As long as it's a new book, it's fine. Any new book is fine. It's the kind that has no traffic. It's difficult for new writers, so refuse to stand alone!
Please Write a Story About My Senior Brother + the Villain in the Book + My Junior Brother on Top (Rubbing Hands in Anticipation)
The villain brother in the book is practicing immortality, the younger brother is on top!
In the Book Shortage, I Am Looking for High-Quality Articles with Good Writing and Not Embarrassing Plots.
It's more of an ancient style, a farming fantasy, a palace fight, a romance with two male protagonists, as long as the writing is good and the plot is good, it's best if there is no misunderstanding about the relationship between the protagonists. Nowadays, I give up too much without even getting halfway through the article. The ratings are all too high. I don't even want to criticize the male and female protagonists that they should be.
Shuangnan, Xiu Xianwen, Is There a Crematorium Where the Master Chases His Wife?
Shuangnan, Fake Death, Death Escape, Quick Travel or Immortal Cultivation
I want Shuangnan, the kind that my senior brother has, please.
I Beg You for Some Reasonable Abuse, but in the End It's He's Shuangnan Novel, Don't Go Through It Quickly
Two Men, Cultivating Immortals, Not Master and Disciple. I've Read Too Many Articles About Masters and Apprentices, and I Don't Want to Read Anymore.
My Child Has Recently Wanted to Read Articles by Senior Fellow Apprentices, but Unfortunately He Is Too Picky, so I Beg You!
I want to read a book similar to "After passing through the book, there is always something wrong with Junior Brother Green Tea".
Two Male Protagonists, Master and Apprentice, the Master Is on Top! ! Disciple, Don't Be Soft and Cute! !
I'll scold each one of you for being so delicate! ! I am a huge thunder...
Is There Any Good-Looking Two-Men Redemption Story Please? ! !
I Beg for a Truly Charming and Heartthrob Male Protagonist! Soul Attraction>appearance Stacking
Please take out all the good articles at the bottom of the box! The ending is the best! Please! The male protagonist can be good-looking, but please let the charm come from his words, actions, abilities, thoughts or mystery, rather than the author reminding me how handsome he is every three lines. Refuse to wear quickly.
There Is a Shortage of Books. Are There Any High-Quality Ones That Are Not Bullshit?
I want to read a book similar to "Dear Director Wen". If you want high-quality writing, don't want a stupid one, don't want a heroine who's all-powerful, anything from modern to ancient times will do 😍








































































































One of the few articles that I could finish reading. I don't know why the rating is so low, it's worth at least 7.6-8 Points. The vocabulary is not gorgeous, but it is very warm. It can explain things clearly in a few words. The protagonist always gave me a faint feeling of being alive and slightly dead, which was very funny. To be honest, the plot is old-fashioned, but the narrative technique is refreshing, there is no bad ending, and there is no protagonist pretending to be mad and stupid with passion, which makes me very comfortable. At the end, every supporting character has their own place. These are handled very well, and it is a good article in my mind. It's really hard to read it if you can't accept this bland approach. I hope someone can calm down and read it, and I also look forward to the author's new works.
On the contrary, I think the author's writing style is very good. Either the words are gorgeous or the writing is good. It is difficult to explain the plot carefully and with enough details to be warm and tender in just a few words. I like this book very much. From a small number of single perspectives, it is easier to see the friction caused by the cognitive differences between the two people. It is very interesting. I love this book!
It's very interesting. It's a first-person narrative. The protagonist's life experience is told from the protagonist's perspective, with secrets and twists revealed step by step. At first, some people commented that the protagonist's character is not perfect, but I think it is very real. Human desires and fears, because he and their imperfections in human nature, are the souls of flesh and blood. The two protagonists in the story are both chess pieces wrapped up in fate. All thoughts, twists and misunderstandings are like fools of fate. Fortunately, the ending is he. I really like Yao Yu's extra [Adoration], the sweetness is beyond the limit [laughs] Push push push🥰🥰🥰
The writing style is quite interesting, but the setting is easy to read, or maybe it won't be revised after it's finished. The characters are a bit pretentious, but the writing can make up for part of it. He likes to leave small clues, and he can mention the foreshadowing many times. It's impossible to tell if there will be a big twist. The comment section of the book friends is more confusing. The middle period was a bit draggy, but in the early stages the two of them were able to tolerate the unpleasant things they said, so the plot wasn't really a big flaw. It can be seen that the author is particularly fond of this kind of character. When there are no major misunderstandings, the awkward and sour writing becomes very smooth, as if for this plate of vinegar-wrapped dumplings. But just eating dumplings is okay, but just being jealous is not okay. The dumplings are still delicious.
The story is very good. I don't like to read first-person articles, but this article is really interesting. Even if it is read in first-person, it won't make you feel uncomfortable. Instead, you can better put yourself into the character's perspective. Only then did you find that it is very interesting to read the story from a character's perspective.
To be honest, I think the first-person narrative is a test of writing skills. This is the first first-person novel I have read on Tomato. There are many themes about brothers and sisters. The plot of our novel has ups and downs, and the relationship develops slowly (I think it is not suitable for people who are impatient). In the early stage, both of them were not talkative, and there were many misunderstandings and contradictions. Later, as they slowly grew, I watched Gong become addicted. The tongue attacks everyone equally, and later learns to coax Shou, hahahaha, and starts to think that Shou is a vicious beauty. Later, it is discovered that he is a chess piece and can't help himself. It was the sect that raised him and wanted to make him a waste, which led to his arrogant personality. In fact, he is very kind at heart. Later, he considered that many people had wronged him alone. The love between the two fathers is also very easy to relate to. Finally, I wish the two young lovers a long life! ! Good writing needs to be savored slowly. All book friends are destined to meet each other, so I will accompany you here. See you all! !
[Admiration] Niu's book! You took away three of my firsts. It was my first time to read an entire book on Tomato! This is my first time to review a book! This is the first time I want to follow an author! Indeed, I also commented and paid attention [blowing kiss]. I really like it! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] I read sporadically during the day and listened to the book for two nights. It's really rare to find such a good Danmei book in my life! [Sending Hearts] The writing style is very good. It does not pile up empty words. It is simple and vigorous. It deeply conveys the inner feelings of the characters. The buried clues can be connected one by one. The logic is clear. The plot has many twists and turns. One word, good! In terms of character creation, Long Aotian is the best! Goldfinger is welcome! Your love for Jiang Qu makes me cry to death! [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] It's not like others who only know about torture... In this arrangement, you can really hit it accurately and feel better [Learned] The extra episode at the end is also very sweet~[Shy][Shy]Watching it at night will cause tooth decay [laughing] I really love reading first-person stories! [Send heart] It's a big trouble, I'll give birth soon [I'm full]
The plot of the story is so twisty and unexpected that I felt like I had a split personality. Sometimes I was sad, and sometimes I was happy [I almost cried]. Fortunately, the ending was sweet, and overall it was refreshing.
Highly recommended! I was attracted by the introduction, but when I came in I found that it was a subjective narrative. To be honest, I wanted to give up at that moment, but the setting was very interesting to me. The writing is so good that I stayed up all night reading it [crying]. "The wind at Wuji Gate is very bleak at night. My room is airtight, like a drum that has been blown full. I can only hear the howling wind outside the door and the whipping of branches on the drum surface, which makes people feel frightened."
It's so good... The author begs you for more extras. I haven't seen enough. Help, this is the first time I've ever heard of this first-person thing. The first day I discovered this book, I read more than 90 chapters. Now that I have finished reading it, I feel empty, lonely and cold. Secondly, I really loved the scene when Yao Yu came out of seclusion and found out that her senior brother had married someone else. Hahahaha. She was so awkward and unethical in her words. It felt like a reunion after breaking the mirror. The relationship between the two parties was confirmed repeatedly, and the spiritual contract was also very cool.
It's rare to see a book with such a long running-in period. I think the author's writing is very strong, and every chapter is on point. The first person narrative is very instructive. Every time Yao Yu changes his face, I feel just as baffled and emotionally affected as Jiang Qu. I think Jiang Qu is very miserable. He was forced to get married, and his sweetheart is still cultivating the ruthless path. He can't even swim out of the hospital. It seems that with a snap of his fingers, he is actually imprisoned for decades. The first-person narrative is very deceptive and partial, and you have to work together from multiple sources to get to the truth. This is a good reflection of Chinese language knowledge. Every time I read the first-person narrative, I sound the alarm. It is so tempting.
The writing style of this article has a faint sense of death, but when describing the emotional line between Jiang Qu and Yao Yu, the warm writing style fascinated me. The characters are well drawn and there are a lot of twists and turns.
It's the first time I read an article from this perspective, it's very strange and novel! I took a look and saw that the senior brother was pitiful because he was deceived by the bad guys from the demon clan. But luckily, they are together again and have two children!
The plot has twists and turns, and finally it doesn't deceive the readers into thinking they are children. It's a pity that it's from the first perspective. Although it's very interesting, too few people read it from the first perspective now. I'm a bit annoyed that such a beautiful book doesn't get the rating it deserves.
It's very good. Although it is in the first person, there are quite a lot of dialogues. Unlike some novels where there are very few dialogues and the writing is very thin. The two people communicate a lot and it really feels like a real couple dealing with problems. Moreover, many details and foreshadowings in the plot are perfectly connected. Anyway, the holes I noticed are all filled in without missing a beat, and the whole logic of the text feels very rigorous and complete. I like both Shou and Gong very much. Their personalities are very distinct but full at the same time. What's more, I think one of the best things about Gong is that although his mind is more logical, he rarely sticks to his own will. He is also very angry when two people misunderstand, but he is very keen to catch doubts and always loves Shou. Both of them are smart babies. If this book is published, I will really buy it. The author begs you to write more about Gudanwuwuwuwuwu.
I finished reading it in one day. I originally gave it 4.5 Stars, but after reading the two internal monologues in the extra story, I decided to lower it to 4 stars. The overall plot is promoted as well as the characters, especially the first-person perspective which is quite a test of writing. The characters' inner monologues are all presented very well, and the protagonist's image is also very three-dimensional. But because the meat is not visible in the plot, otherwise it would be very fragrant and fragrant if meat is added. Then there is the plot advancement which feels a bit difficult to deal with. [Beware of spoilers below] Many of the twists and turns are quite interesting, but after watching the extras, I felt a little disappointed. Both of them had their own selfish motives, and they were both talkative people. In fact, I couldn't explain the situation at that time. It was just two people missing each other, torturing each other, etc., I felt like ugh [laughing awkwardly]. At first, the experience was pretty good. I thought the other person really hated the other person, but then the pulling feeling was still very fragrant. Especially Gong. After watching the extra episode, I feel like Gong is so greasy. I can't stand him anymore. He has such a strong sense of masculinity and feels like I have sacrificed a huge amount to hold Shou firmly in my hand. The extra love between parents is quite sweet [blowing kiss]
It's good to read, I rarely read first person, but as soon as I opened it I finished it without even realizing it. The author's writing style is very witty. Although there are sad and frustrating parts, when it's funny, it's really funny, when it's sweet, it's really sweet, and when it's sad, it's not too sad. I originally thought that my junior brother is a typical cold-blooded person who never opens his mouth to attack, but I didn't expect that he is very flexible and able to express his feelings when he needs to and explain when he needs to, even though he can be very venomous at times.
There is a very novel sense of reading. It is written from a first-person perspective. Don't criticize in the early stage because the protagonist's life is controlled, so no matter how bad his character is, his essence is that he was raised. In the later stage, it is very sweet. Although the protagonist is bad, he is indeed There are actually some good parts. If you can't stand it, just leave. Don't leave the review before running. When I saw the later stage, I realized that it was the early stage that I had misunderstood. The disgust is because you haven't finished watching it. Some parts you feel are forced, that is, you have not seen part of the rationality of the plot.
It's brutal at the beginning, sudden in the middle, and sweet at the end, but overall it's a good story. However, students who want to watch hzc should not have too much expectations, because I thought I wanted to watch hzc. There is no hzc content, and I was immediately coaxed after the attack. Both of them are so in love that they can't get into hzc at all [smile] In fact, it would be nice if Gong's state after suffering death escape could be written in detail. I feel that the impact of the truth was quite big on Gong, and he must have been quite sad at that time, but all the side descriptions are just too far away [crying]
Compared with many high-scoring books on Tomato, they are good, but there is still a lot of room for improvement. The author's narrative and character creation can be improved a bit. The early description is very detailed, but later it becomes more rushed. Some plots are a bit hasty and cannot be connected with the early stage. The whole book seems top-heavy, and the character interaction is slightly flawed, and the character is somewhat hollow. However, the author's writing is really good. It is also very difficult to write a first-person narrative. Personally, I think the author's book is ranked in the middle of the Tomatoes. If the writing is polished, it can go to jj and v (of course it can now), and it will be very popular. I also wish the author can continue to improve himself, write good books, and make a lot of money [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]
What a twisted relationship, what a sour development. Moreover, my wife's writing style is very good, fluent and logically consistent.
It's pretty good. There may be some problems with the characters in some aspects, but the writing and plot are good. It's not uncomfortable to read. I feel it's much better than Tomato's nine-point novel. 🤌The rating feels like it's been lowered.
Personally, I think it's good-looking. It has the feel of an ancient novel. It's full of twists and turns, and the style of painting is strange. Hahahaha. The first-person perspective is also very novel, but I still can't read it with my brain. Although it's fun to read, there are some places that I still can't go into details, but the feelings The lines are very well written, very real, awkward, immature, and sarcastic. It really has an old-fashioned feel. Those who like it should like it very much, and those who don't like it probably can't stand it. How can I put it? It's a personal preference. I don't recommend it and I don't disparage it. It only looks good if you discover it yourself.
✅✅✅The god of first-person narration😇😇. It made people anxious in the early stage, but after seeing it, I have to admire the author's strict logic👍Not a single foreshadowing fell to the ground. This is so filling that the second brother in the 300th sect has been filled in all the thick parts🤭 The character design is also very good. The more I watch it, the more I like it. It's great that the character's surface design and true temperament can be described in detail from a single perspective. On the surface, Yu is a spoiled and selfish child, but in reality he is a kind, helpless, and somewhat naive little idiot🥹 Please refer to this book if you write vicious and idiot characters. On the surface, he is the flower of the high mountains and the light of righteousness. In fact, he is the biggest evil in this article. In his eyes, there is no righteous way and no magic way. He can only fall in whichever direction his wife tells him to go. Wuqingdao is suspected to be a trick of his god-level love brain😝 The young couple is sweet, so just clear up any misunderstandings. Overall, it is a masterpiece that mixes sweetness and abuse, making people laugh and cry╮(¯▽¯)╭
No joke, I stayed up all night to read this excellent article. The author's writing style is very delicate. There are twists and turns in the plot but it's not too sad. She is a stupid beauty. [Blowing Kiss] Although it is in the first person, the things are explained very clearly and there is nothing embarrassing. Why not 🔥? ? ! In addition, it is best not to open the comment area later, where a group of brats who are only a few years old are making comments. The quality is definitely top-notch. You can tell by looking at my bookshelf that I have the qualifications.
Damn it's so pretty! I stayed up late to read it, and I couldn't stand it anymore. I really didn't like reading first-person novels before, but this book made me "break the habit". Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... Pressing the head allows the two of them to have something to talk about and things to discuss, but it's really good-looking. Some parts are specially written to be plain but very touching, just like something ordinary in ordinary food. Highly recommended!
It must be five stars, the relationship is delicate, both are good babies, both have sacrificed a lot for each other, and they love each other unswervingly even if they encounter differences, the young couple must be 99, the author's writing is also great [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss] I really love it so much
I originally thought I couldn't get into any of the books in my book-hating period, but I randomly found it in a book store and didn't expect it to be so good. I read it in one sitting in two days and still didn't feel bored at all. This is a book where Gong has a bit of a venomous tongue, but it's really good-looking. Don't hate Gong. Shou is also very cute and tsundere, and the sub-CPs of Ling Youxin and Han Zhou are also very nice. Summary: Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, just watch it [shy] Oh, by the way, I have finished reading this book. I read it for at least ten hours, but because most of it was read offline, I didn't record the time. Damn it [smile]
It's very beautiful, the author's writing is very good, and the plot is very logical. Because it is a first-person narrative, readers will inevitably be deceived. The protagonist is actually a very kind person, and the inferiority complex he involuntarily deceives himself. The way the two protagonists get along is very unusual. It is recommended that you try not to read the comments when watching it. Many of them indiscriminately belittle the protagonist and the author. In fact, the plot development is very reasonable, because the two people stand at different angles, and there is an inherent information gap. All in all, it is a very nice book that will humor you even when you feel sad. [Love][love][love]
It's very good. I've been reading novels for too long. I don't want to read many novels now after I'm halfway through them, but! I've finished reading this book. Needless to say, it's valuable. It didn't hit my mark. I recommend it. Sure enough, you can't limit yourself to ratings. Otherwise, you'll miss it. It's good. Read it.