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I don't remember which HP fan said that the seats of Hogwarts' transportation are all in units of four, including boats, train compartments and carriages. This is to allow the four houses to remember the way they came. Only by making progress together can the four houses realize greater dreams. This novel gave me a sense of hope in breaking down the prejudices of the academy. There is also the mystery of the heroine's life experience, the bloodline of the two demon kings, black and white, and the overall rhythm is soaring~ Gellert's fantasy just now probably said that the heroine will also participate in the Triwizard Tournament, replacing Cedric? Looking forward to it~

The story is actually quite interesting. At least it successfully aroused my interest. I finally found a Dumbledore that doesn't look so hateful among thousands of fan books, although I still don't have a good impression of Gryffindor... After all, the old wizard who has lived for a century has his shadow behind everything. His method of controlling people's hearts is really hard to like. Slytherin is more popular. After all, not everyone has the interest to selflessly contribute to world peace. A group of trolls whose brains are filled with splendens, the hateful Gryffindor.

The writing is very beautiful, but I prefer female protagonists without CP, which is not to say that the capitalization is not good. Out of interest in this book, I decided to ignore the interaction between Si Jiao and Lucy and successfully follow the book! (No harm, don't curse)

Yay, great HP fanfic. The character of the protagonist is very interesting to me. From the beginning he was determined not to participate, to the change in the middle, and now he is working hard to change the "certain death ending". I think I will be very moved by the end of reading this book. "I stand at the beginning of the story, looking towards their inevitable end." "This time, I don't have to stand at the beginning of the story and look at the ending where you will die." Lucy is a great Slytherin witch, you are doing a great job and please be happy. The author's writing style is very good, the characters are not OOC, the plot is novel and interesting, not muddled and confusing, in short, I really like it, I like it, come on, come on! If you don't return the shares, I wish this book a great success

I have read a lot of HP fics, and I have also read a lot of fics about this book. Personally, I think it would be better for this book to be someone other than the heroine's crush. In this book, the Lisian religion has a more serious self-destructive tendency. He loves Lily more deeply, and is more reluctant to let go of the past. The heroine's inability to love is not very good, and she has a sense of humiliation. It is clear that the heroine has a gentle yet tough personality, is highly tolerant, has a very good sense of right and wrong, and her handling methods are also very appropriate and comfortable. Isn't it good to have a male protagonist who only cares about the female protagonist? Or if you have no CP, you have to compete with Bai Yueguang, who has been in your heart for more than 20 years. What will happen even if they get together in the end? From now on, whenever the topic of Lily comes up, I will be stabbed by this heel. I still like Sijiao very much. Personally, I prefer the CP of Sijiao from the original generation. There will not be such a lily that will never wither in my heart. Everything is just right.

Before Chapter 18, the heroine's character was too indecisive, and her approach to doing things was relatively immature. She always gave people the feeling of a 13-year-old child when she should be thinking about things with a 28-year-old mind, but she used a 28-year-old way of thinking when she should have been a child. She was also not very Slytherin-like. The author said that she was hard-spoken and soft-hearted, but before Chapter 18, I only felt the heroine's hesitation and contradiction, which was not very likable. But after Chapter 18, the heroine finally strengthened her heart at the end of Porter's first year. Although it took a long time, but fortunately, her character was no longer indecisive. She had firm goals and a clear way of thinking, and was no longer too naive or overthinking. The direction of the plot finally became clear. The author's writing style is quite online, overall it's pretty good. I must say that the story becomes very exciting from the second volume onwards, the author's writing is so good! Whether it is the cp relationship line with Snape or the family relationship line with Gedeng, they are all very well written!

When I read Chapter 17, I felt that I really liked the way the heroine said she was staying out of the situation, and she maintained this state for three years. Very well written But what I can't understand is that the heroine's state disappeared as soon as Harry Potter entered the school. Although the author wrote that the heroine met Potter by accident, in fact she had a chance to stay away. Secondly, the second thing that makes people feel uncomfortable is that the heroine and the trio quarreled, and the heroine was very angry, but within a chapter, the trio came over to apologize. It was a light apology. The heroine immediately forgave and acted with them (it was clear that she had secretly maintained her relationship with Harry before) (Slytherin, after this incident, it seems that she started to interact with Gryffindor in an aboveboard way), the author uses "a friendship with differences is more precious" to describe the incident, and finally has a reason to act with the trio in an aboveboard manner. It is indeed quite humble to think that a third-grade student always comes to play with first-grade students. Anyway, before I read Chapter 17, I felt that the heroine's attitude changed too quickly and her temper was too good. In addition, even if the heroine finally changes her attitude and wants to change her destiny, she does not necessarily have to join the trio. Since she already knows the destined ending, she must also know where the root of the problem is. Why not go straight to Huanglong? (Because the author describes that the heroine is actually a big boss, but she just hides her strength. Then why can't she use Grindelwald's power and her own abilities to secretly plan and destroy Voldemort's Horcruxes? This is no better than following three little brats who have not grown up.) I still want to say that the heroine established by the author is really good: Letlin is wise in protecting herself, powerful, proficient in black magic, and a tall character. And the logic is self-consistent: he was raised by Grindelwald, learned black magic from an early age, and grew up in a prison. Such a cold-hearted Slytherin, a wise and protective Slytherin, and a powerful Slytherin are simply too logical. (Especially because she has never thought about changing her fate, and this fate also includes Grindelwald's fate, which also reflects her coldness and wiseness to protect herself) It's a pity that I broke down [crying] when I met Potter for some reason (of course, maybe it has something to do with the fact that I only read Chapter 17?) I saw the back, it's very beautiful [Adoration]

It's okay, although the narrative is a bit messy, and the plot points of time and place are not very detailed. It makes you feel like you've been breathing for a long time and can't come back, and it's not breathable, but the whole thing is quite interesting, and the venomous part is very interesting (you are really a bit talented, author) Regarding the psychological description of the heroine, although I can understand what the author wants to express, and I also know what the heroine's state is at this time, the author can use more plain language to describe it (otherwise it is a bit too hazy and foggy, for example, in the part where Stinky Egg attacks Quirrell, the plot is written too fast, making it look like an outline. The psychological description of the heroine can be written in more detail) (compared to the narrative that I pay more attention to in full-length novels, the author's language may be too sophisticated) In terms of characters, the level of OOC is very low (as far as the part I watched), the venomous tongue of the Sect and the care for Harry, the innocence of the three little ones, and Dumbledore's guidance behind the scenes like the old vixen, are all very well written. In general, language is better than plot, but I still give it a five-star encouragement and hope that the author will continue to work hard [sending heartfelt thanks]

The setting is good, but the plot is sometimes quite subtle. Watch with caution if you are an extreme female protagonist, and watch with caution if you don't accept the aggrieved plot (it's just a little aggrieved, similar to the misunderstanding of love, readers with PTSD who are controlled by their original family to love, watch with caution!! (Highlight) In addition, the heroine is really happy when she scolds Voldemort) I found that no matter which HP fan I read, I will fall in love with the protagonist without hesitation, maybe because she came with the mission of saving. The original characters are sometimes slightly OOC, but they say that every reader has a different view of the character, so there's nothing to say about it (but I'm still saying it here, so I'm sorry), but it is very consistent with everyone's stereotypes of the character in the fandom, and to a certain extent, it is also restored () Although there is such a thing as preference in the text, I can still tell from the text that the author really loves Professor Snape.

The fried chicken looks great! ! But I want to ask, is this without cp? This kind of family relationship is very good. If there is a cp, it will be weird. I beg the author to make sure it is family love! This trend is super awesome!

The writing style is quite good, not great at the beginning, but it gets better and better as you read on. The author has his own writing rhythm for the plot and content. There are many wonderful descriptions in the article, especially the "Venom" part that imitates the professor. I almost want to clap my hands after reading it. There are so many different, but very euphemistic, mean and sarcastic long sentences. It is the richest and most close to the professor among the many fanfics I have read. It feels like it is easy to pick up. It is very enjoyable to read. The character of the heroine is also not thin, she has a charming personality, and I look forward to the development in the following chapters.

Sister Dou E is very powerful, but there are too few, and her writing style is also very good. She has achieved the effect of Li Bai's reincarnation. Come on, sister Dou E, I love you. Gold will always shine. There are many people who will support you. You will not be unknown all your life. There will always be someone to hold up this piece of gold and raise it to the public. We will all support you. As long as you maintain this writing style, sister, you don't have to be as humble as Sifu. Be brave and be yourself. I love you.

It's great to see everyone at Hogwarts enjoying themselves, especially the divisions and prejudices in the house that have been changed a lot. I have always agreed that people from any house are Hogwarts students, and everyone should get along well with each other. The characters of Professor Snape and other characters are also well portrayed. Miss Hope is a strong and unique girl who brings hope to everyone. What a great Slytherin! I recommend you go watch it and look forward to the plot behind it.

The author will update quickly. The main plot is very clear, and the original characters are well maintained. If the principal and Grindelwald met, it would be like this. Harry and Ron are also well portrayed. I have seen a lot of fan fiction in which Ron is always mindlessly targeting the Slytherin protagonist. I am really tired. He is a reckless Gryffindor, but it does not mean that he will always face the kindness of others with prejudice. In addition, Miss Hermione's sense of presence is very low. She is often invisible in the trio [crying]. The protagonist is also a very good girl. She is kind to everyone while carrying the timeline of the past and future, and she also has the calmness of a Slytherin in doing things [send heart]

Looks good. My sister is a naughty girl. I thought she had a pitiful temper at first. Unexpectedly, after she decided to get involved, the servant turned out to be very naughty and bold. She and Teacher Si were quarreling with each other. She always lost her temper when it was time to lose her temper. She was not used to it at all. The child of the Black and White Demon King loved it the most. One of my favorite plots is when my sister changes the plot and realizes that her destiny can be changed, she connects with the wand. The giant snake, lion, and eagle that she conjured at the end of the semester is super cool. There is also the Chamber of Secrets, Voldemort's self-introduction, and the battle between the heir and the heir. It's so cool. Grindelwald and Dumbledore experienced the joy of being approached by their head teacher (Snape) [laughing][laughing][laughing] I like it so much, I hope the author can keep writing the story of the servant.

Wow, it's very interesting. The protagonist is the child of Dumbledore and Grindelwald. [Thinking] It's a very warm and gentle story. It feels like sitting by a warm fireplace in winter. I really like it [Sending my heart] Looking forward to the author's big updates [Love]

The quality of the book itself is good, but I don't like the heroine's character. On the one hand, she is too indecisive. Although this is human nature, I prefer to either directly decide to do nothing, especially after being hurt, or directly make up her mind to do what she wants. On the other hand, Ron is indeed a brave person, compared to Hogwart Most of his students are brave, but I don't like his character, and I can't easily forgive him after he has been stupid many times. After all, the result I tested is either Ravenclaw or Hufflepuff. At that time in the book, Gryffindor's bravery and determination were more often stupid, and the exclusion and discrimination were no less than that of Slytherin. Although the heroine's character will definitely change as the plot progresses, and she will finally strengthen her determination, she is too mother-in-law. The first volume is not very comfortable to read. If it were me, I would be saved except for the variables caused by myself if I was not hurt. Who cares about the rest, why don't I directly explain to Lao Deng that his planning ability is not much better than mine? If you continue to cut off, you will be subject to chaos

It's funny, it's real, it tells a story from a different perspective. Well, the protagonist is really very real. Is he going to choose this path? Very confused and confused

It's a very good book. I found this book before. After reading half of it, I couldn't bear to stock it up for a month. Now I find that the author doesn't write about Snape anymore, but the protagonist is well portrayed and has a full character. It's normal to have hesitant psychological activities before participating in the main plot. The interaction with Snape is also very real and not far-fetched (if the author changes the script without cp, can he write an extra chapter? I really like the interaction between Snape and the protagonist)

I like it very much. The family relationship in this book is very well written and warm. The proportion of Sri Lanka's teachings captured my heart. I like the heroine's character and behavior very much. The heroine's mouth is really amazing. Although I don't know whether there is CP or not, I feel that this book is very good regardless of CP! ! ! Come back soon~

It's good to have no cp, and the family ties are broader. In addition, there is finally a Hogwarts that starts to pay attention to ordinary students other than the protagonist, starts to deal with differences in the house, and stops campus bullying. The settlement of the historical issues between Sif and the Marauders was also very satisfying~

The penitent redeems himself, the guardian protects himself

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HOPE will eventually bring great light and celebrate the vigorous victory in the future! [Laughing] Not bad, not bad, very good. The author's writing style is my favorite type, not to mention that there is an active author [get it], I can read the comment section for a long time. [Note] Describe psychological characters. The detailed three-dimensional description of the characters, combined with the explanations in the comment area, made me give it a five-star rating.

The characters are very consistent, there is no OOC at all, the logic and rhythm of the plot are very good, and the writing style is also stable! I just feel that the plot in the first few chapters is a little confusing, some parts are not explained clearly, and the heroine's character is a bit off-kilter. But it became smoother and smoother from then on, and the writing is super good! Especially the heroine's poisonous tongue was written very naturally, and it was mostly my mouth! !

It's so beautiful, really go for it and keep writing. Author, you write really well! ! ! ! ! ! ! I love it so much. I feel like giving you a review just like the stars I give you. It's really a great book.

It's beautiful, come on It's a daily sigh, it's really very interesting. It starts from the heroine's third grade. The time traveler does not forget about his past because of time travel. He misses his original home and has his own personality. There is no inexplicable licking. And there is GGAD, who was picked up by Gellert and adopted because he thought she was Albus's daughter. In Hogwarts, Albus thought she was Gellert's daughter so he questioned her. It's really inexplicable, and it's so sweet. There is no inexplicable black Dumbledore (after all, some books have to be too exaggerated to make black Dumbledore unreadable). Dumbledore is more described as a loving elder and a flesh-and-blood person, rather than an unscrupulous politician. There are no inexplicable insults to Harry, or the grouping with the protagonist, and there will be quarrels with them, and there will also be times of peace and friendship. From the current point of view, most of the behaviors are also normal and logical (it just feels that the injured part of Harry is a bit abrupt) (This large paragraph was written when I recommended the book. I pasted it directly. I am too lazy to change it. There may be some places that do not fit the context. Please forgive me) Finally, be sure not to abandon the article! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's very good-looking, and it's among the top 5 I've seen. The author's writing is very good, it feels very mature, and the plot is quite smooth and logical. This rating is on the low side, much better than some HP fanfics that are rated 9 or above but are very childish.

The heroine doesn't look like a little snake, but she actually has the characteristics of a Slytherin. She is defensive and arrogant. She is a good snake! The venom spray also tastes great! Well written [laughing][laughing]

By the way, will there be CP? Will it be Sijiao?