Harry Potter: Professor Snape Is Watching You

I don't remember which HP fan said that the seats of Hogwarts' transportation are all in units of four, including boats, train compartments and carriages. This is to allow the four houses to remember the way they came. Only by making progress together can the four houses realize greater dreams. This novel gave me a sense of hope in breaking down the prejudices of the academy. There is also the mystery of the heroine's life experience, the bloodline of the two demon kings, black and white, and the overall rhythm is soaring~ Gellert's fantasy just now probably said that the heroine will also participate in the Triwizard Tournament, replacing Cedric? Looking forward to it~

The story is actually quite interesting. At least it successfully aroused my interest. I finally found a Dumbledore that doesn't look so hateful among thousands of fan books, although I still don't have a good impression of Gryffindor... After all, the old wizard who has lived for a century has his shadow behind everything. His method of controlling people's hearts is really hard to like. Slytherin is more popular. After all, not everyone has the interest to selflessly contribute to world peace. A group of trolls whose brains are filled with splendens, the hateful Gryffindor.

The writing is very beautiful, but I prefer female protagonists without CP, which is not to say that the capitalization is not good. Out of interest in this book, I decided to ignore the interaction between Si Jiao and Lucy and successfully follow the book! (No harm, don't curse)

Yay, great HP fanfic. The character of the protagonist is very interesting to me. From the beginning he was determined not to participate, to the change in the middle, and now he is working hard to change the "certain death ending". I think I will be very moved by the end of reading this book. "I stand at the beginning of the story, looking towards their inevitable end." "This time, I don't have to stand at the beginning of the story and look at the ending where you will die." Lucy is a great Slytherin witch, you are doing a great job and please be happy. The author's writing style is very good, the characters are not OOC, the plot is novel and interesting, not muddled and confusing, in short, I really like it, I like it, come on, come on! If you don't return the shares, I wish this book a great success

I have read a lot of HP fics, and I have also read a lot of fics about this book. Personally, I think it would be better for this book to be someone other than the heroine's crush. In this book, the Lisian religion has a more serious self-destructive tendency. He loves Lily more deeply, and is more reluctant to let go of the past. The heroine's inability to love is not very good, and she has a sense of humiliation. It is clear that the heroine has a gentle yet tough personality, is highly tolerant, has a very good sense of right and wrong, and her handling methods are also very appropriate and comfortable. Isn't it good to have a male protagonist who only cares about the female protagonist? Or if you have no CP, you have to compete with Bai Yueguang, who has been in your heart for more than 20 years. What will happen even if they get together in the end? From now on, whenever the topic of Lily comes up, I will be stabbed by this heel. I still like Sijiao very much. Personally, I prefer the CP of Sijiao from the original generation. There will not be such a lily that will never wither in my heart. Everything is just right.

Before Chapter 18, the heroine's character was too indecisive, and her approach to doing things was relatively immature. She always gave people the feeling of a 13-year-old child when she should be thinking about things with a 28-year-old mind, but she used a 28-year-old way of thinking when she should have been a child. She was also not very Slytherin-like. The author said that she was hard-spoken and soft-hearted, but before Chapter 18, I only felt the heroine's hesitation and contradiction, which was not very likable. But after Chapter 18, the heroine finally strengthened her heart at the end of Porter's first year. Although it took a long time, but fortunately, her character was no longer indecisive. She had firm goals and a clear way of thinking, and was no longer too naive or overthinking. The direction of the plot finally became clear. The author's writing style is quite online, overall it's pretty good. I must say that the story becomes very exciting from the second volume onwards, the author's writing is so good! Whether it is the cp relationship line with Snape or the family relationship line with Gedeng, they are all very well written!

It's okay, although the narrative is a bit messy, and the plot points of time and place are not very detailed. It makes you feel like you've been breathing for a long time and can't come back, and it's not breathable, but the whole thing is quite interesting, and the venomous part is very interesting (you are really a bit talented, author) Regarding the psychological description of the heroine, although I can understand what the author wants to express, and I also know what the heroine's state is at this time, the author can use more plain language to describe it (otherwise it is a bit too hazy and foggy, for example, in the part where Stinky Egg attacks Quirrell, the plot is written too fast, making it look like an outline. The psychological description of the heroine can be written in more detail) (compared to the narrative that I pay more attention to in full-length novels, the author's language may be too sophisticated) In terms of characters, the level of OOC is very low (as far as the part I watched), the venomous tongue of the Sect and the care for Harry, the innocence of the three little ones, and Dumbledore's guidance behind the scenes like the old vixen, are all very well written. In general, language is better than plot, but I still give it a five-star encouragement and hope that the author will continue to work hard [sending heartfelt thanks]

When I read Chapter 17, I felt that I really liked the way the heroine said she was staying out of the situation, and she maintained this state for three years. Very well written But what I can't understand is that the heroine's state disappeared as soon as Harry Potter entered the school. Although the author wrote that the heroine met Potter by accident, in fact she had a chance to stay away. Secondly, the second thing that makes people feel uncomfortable is that the heroine and the trio quarreled, and the heroine was very angry, but within a chapter, the trio came over to apologize. It was a light apology. The heroine immediately forgave and acted with them (it was clear that she had secretly maintained her relationship with Harry before) (Slytherin, after this incident, it seems that she started to interact with Gryffindor in an aboveboard way), the author uses "a friendship with differences is more precious" to describe the incident, and finally has a reason to act with the trio in an aboveboard manner. It is indeed quite humble to think that a third-grade student always comes to play with first-grade students. Anyway, before I read Chapter 17, I felt that the heroine's attitude changed too quickly and her temper was too good. In addition, even if the heroine finally changes her attitude and wants to change her destiny, she does not necessarily have to join the trio. Since she already knows the destined ending, she must also know where the root of the problem is. Why not go straight to Huanglong? (Because the author describes that the heroine is actually a big boss, but she just hides her strength. Then why can't she use Grindelwald's power and her own abilities to secretly plan and destroy Voldemort's Horcruxes? This is no better than following three little brats who have not grown up.) I still want to say that the heroine established by the author is really good: Letlin is wise in protecting herself, powerful, proficient in black magic, and a tall character. And the logic is self-consistent: he was raised by Grindelwald, learned black magic from an early age, and grew up in a prison. Such a cold-hearted Slytherin, a wise and protective Slytherin, and a powerful Slytherin are simply too logical. (Especially because she has never thought about changing her fate, and this fate also includes Grindelwald's fate, which also reflects her coldness and wiseness to protect herself) It's a pity that I broke down [crying] when I met Potter for some reason (of course, maybe it has something to do with the fact that I only read Chapter 17?) I saw the back, it's very beautiful [Adoration]

The setting is good, but the plot is sometimes quite subtle. Watch with caution if you are an extreme female protagonist, and watch with caution if you don't accept the aggrieved plot (it's just a little aggrieved, similar to the misunderstanding of love, readers with PTSD who are controlled by their original family to love, watch with caution!! (Highlight) In addition, the heroine is really happy when she scolds Voldemort) I found that no matter which HP fan I read, I will fall in love with the protagonist without hesitation, maybe because she came with the mission of saving. The original characters are sometimes slightly OOC, but they say that every reader has a different view of the character, so there's nothing to say about it (but I'm still saying it here, so I'm sorry), but it is very consistent with everyone's stereotypes of the character in the fandom, and to a certain extent, it is also restored () Although there is such a thing as preference in the text, I can still tell from the text that the author really loves Professor Snape.

The writing style is quite good, not great at the beginning, but it gets better and better as you read on. The author has his own writing rhythm for the plot and content. There are many wonderful descriptions in the article, especially the "Venom" part that imitates the professor. I almost want to clap my hands after reading it. There are so many different, but very euphemistic, mean and sarcastic long sentences. It is the richest and most close to the professor among the many fanfics I have read. It feels like it is easy to pick up. It is very enjoyable to read. The character of the heroine is also not thin, she has a charming personality, and I look forward to the development in the following chapters.