Mortal Cultivation of Immortality: Starting from Hunting in the Mountains

It's good, but the speed is a bit slow. Also, it is recommended to write from a different angle and turn the reader into the protagonist; don't act like a person is telling a story; the overall story is very exciting.

The plot is engaging and the early stages are well written! Looking forward to the next one being just as exciting.

It's good to read, the plot is rich, and the emotions are ups and downs. Thank you to the author for such a good novel.

It's good to watch, and the plot is so tight that you can't stop watching it.

The idea is good, but the writing needs to be polished a little, and the number of words cannot be crammed just for the sake of word count. Pay attention to the connection between sentences. For example, "***just**" is used too frequently. Come on!

The structure is clear, the plot is moving, the reasoning is rigorous, and the writing is smooth.

A very good traditional book on immortality cultivation, I haven't read it in a long time.

I've read Chapter 384. The storyline is very good, each link is linked to another. It's just that the protagonist's cultivation level is too low. He is unlucky wherever he goes, and is hunted down wherever he goes. I feel frightened and panicked when I see it. I like to read books that are decisive and invincible.

It's good to watch and the plot is engaging. The development of the story is well documented, pretty good

The score of 6.9 Is very low, but the book is okay. It should be 8.8--9 Points

The content is very exciting, worth reading

The writing is very good and the content is rich and colorful. I really like reading it. I read it for about 4 hours every day.

Easy to read, it's like discovering a thread. It turns out to be so long. If you look up along the thread, you'll see many delicate flowers. It's a good story worth recommending!

Not bad, interesting and very logical reasoning! Thumbs up for the author!

Mortals cultivating immortality is well-founded and the characters are introduced in detail without being exaggerated, making people unable to put it down.

The author makes the writing beautiful, keep up the good work!

The content is rich and colorful and worth watching.

The plot is fascinating and the technique is delicate and textured.

The storyline has strong continuity and reasonable structure. Interested in reading further.

The book is good-looking, the plot is touching and rhythmic. It shows that a person is willing to endure hardships, take risks, think more and take more actions, and you will gain something. It is worth recommending

Good! Very nice! Please continue with the exciting next chapter!

I recommend this book to everyone. I like the content of this book. It is very colorful.

You can take a look at the growth history of the little person!

The content of the novel is exciting, the plot is tense, and there is a lot of suspense. The author's ideas are wild and unconstrained. It is a very good book.

Well written Like a horse flying in the sky, like clouds and flowing water

This book is well written and worth recommending [like][like][like][like]

This fantasy novel is very real and touching. It's not too outrageous. It's very realistic. I like it very much.

This is the only one who writes about foundation building in such a detailed and thrilling way, so wonderful.

The writing is interesting, I'll read it again. Give me a good review first!

Although the description is a bit long-winded, the framework structure is very good and it is worth watching!