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My personal suggestion is that your book is very similar to the original drama in terms of the description of the characters in the apartment. The protagonist's abilities are also very attractive, but from the moment you meet Bai Lu, it suddenly feels a bit abrupt. With this protagonist's ability, I feel that after the internship and financial freedom, it is completely possible to write a large-scale group portrait time-travel novel that allows the protagonist to lead people to travel through various worlds to adventure and grow. The protagonist's ability has been completed in this book. It is equivalent to a semi-invincible novel. As long as you write about various interesting adventures after time travel or superpower training, cultivating immortals, saving the apocalypse, or various growth adventures in known or unknown worlds such as Pokémon, and finally everyone returns to the warm life of the apartment, it can be a pinnacle of apartment fan fiction with a guaranteed 9.7. Of course, I will definitely not be able to write it. I just give the author some suggestions.

The subject matter is quite interesting, keep writing and don't stop.

Come on, come on, it's very well written. Is the heroine Bai Lu? Can we also add spicy heroes and happy force in the extra chapters later? Thank you

It's very good-looking. I actually read this book a few days ago, but I didn't read it because of the title. The title is not attractive. The author could just change the title. It would be better if people want to read it when they see the title.

The protagonist's temperament is the biggest proof of the bottom line, and its almost perfect expandability. If this book can survive, it will definitely be a good book that is close to a nine-point score. Among them, there are some poisonous spots that were detoxified in time. They were all handled well, but I don't know if it will be intolerable for picky book lovers.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Six, author, you are really good at sewing.

At present, the plot feels relatively coordinated, and I hope it will be better in the future.

The general framework is still there, but it is away from the sameness of fan fiction. In short, it is a good article and should be appreciated.

Few novels I like

Looks great, come on

Come on, come on, come on

This book shouldn't be rated so low.

The settings are pretty good, let's check out the follow-up

Well written, I like the author's settings,

Apart from anything else, this book is updated with two chapters a day, and each chapter is close to 5,000 words. The settings are okay.