Done! the Rival Roommate Is Actually a Rich Young Lady

One thing to say, I have to say that the male protagonist is useless and a loser, but to be honest, the psychological portrayal is actually somewhat realistic. To put it more carefully, the male protagonist magnifies many of the shortcomings of men. In many cases, it is the behavior that you may think about but will not do, but the male protagonist will do, so the character image is more three-dimensional. Relatively speaking, the male protagonist in "Girlfriend" also has this characteristic, but in bottle terms, he has grown from a s. B to a big s. B. That is to say, I want to say that if the male protagonist of this kind of subject wants to write well, he should have obvious growth. It can be a stage type or a breakthrough type, but it must be obvious. Otherwise, I will just think it is s. B from beginning to end. If it is well shaped after growing up, then this work will be good. This is a suggestion to the author. For example, the disguised hunter incident like this one is actually somewhat outrageous, but if the male protagonist faces this incident head-on and learns a lesson, he will definitely be able to grow, so the author can also spend some effort on this. Of course, if there is no growth in the end, I will definitely change the review.

1. **About character creation** "The characters seem to have come alive from the pages of the book. Their joys, sorrows, and joys make you feel the same way. It's as if you can hear them whispering in your ears." 2. **About plot rhythm** "The story is like a gentle flowing stream, taking people forward slowly and slowly, but there are always small whirlpools hidden in inadvertent places, which makes people want to find out." 3. **About text style** "The words are like the sunshine in early spring, warm and bright. As you read, pictures appear in front of your eyes, and even the air is filled with the flavor of the story." 4. **About emotional resonance** "When I read certain passages, my heart felt like it was lightly poked. The delicate emotions are like the feelings in life that I want to say but cannot express." 5. **About scene description** "Obviously they are words, but they are as real as smelling the fragrance of grass after the rain, touching the texture of an old wooden table, and even the wind blowing through your hair." 6. **About the overall experience** "It's like sitting by the fire in winter and listening to someone tell a story. The eloquent tone of the story makes people reluctant to interrupt. When you close the book, you still feel the residual warmth lingering on your fingertips."

It feels like the male protagonist has a kind of magical power: every time he gets along with the female protagonist, he can unbiasedly hit the nodes that push things to a bad development. After reading more than 30 chapters, I feel that the heroine has been teased all the time, while the hero reflects on his heart and maintains his original judgment. Don't understand but respect. I hope the male protagonist can change.

I don't know where to start. The rhythm of the novel is great. The portrayal of the male protagonist in the early stage made me have strong empathy as a reader. The occasional narration can also explain some of the stress of the male protagonist. I just saw the male and female protagonists taking wedding photos. In fact, the time in the novel is not too long. It seems to be close to three months. It can make a person change so much. Judging from the plot, it is really hurtful. I wonder if there are any specific events related to Lin Xue's relationship later [exploration] I hope to click on it later, if there is one, I hope to click on it later. It was a little depressing in the early stage, and the conflict between men and women gave me a bit of a heart attack [laughing and crying] [face covering] grave sweeping [what]

I've read so many books and this is the first time I've seen one written in the first person. Overall, it's pretty good, and the characters are quite individual. The only bad points are the hotel and a series of events that follow. I quite like it, but now it's entering the freezing point, which makes me feel a little uncomfortable. Also, the title is almost 100 chapters and it doesn't show it, so I can't see the feeling of satisfaction.

It's very interesting and real. It's quite funny that some people say that the male protagonist is wrong and stupid. The environment at home, the humiliation of the boss at the company, and the ridicule of colleagues. The male protagonist's heart is very normal. Not everyone who has experienced these things still has a normal heart. There are almost no such people. The same is true for the male protagonist, but he met Su Ning. Unfortunately, there is no Su Ning in reality.

Being blocked by the industry, the male protagonist wants to change cities, say goodbye to his ex-girlfriend, and leave the roommate without saying goodbye. The male protagonist goes home for a blind date, and the love line of the blind date is increased. In this way, the story will have many surprises. Haha, it is fun to not guess the ending.

This kind of realistic romance novel is really a breath of fresh air👍👍👍

The writing is okay. The author likes to write this kind of novel so much. I hope that the author's future love can be like the one in the novel, like a dream come true [making faces] [making faces] [making faces] [making faces] [smirking]

It's not enough to watch. The male protagonist's ability is indeed not outstanding, but he really has a sense of reality. Unlike the cool novel, the plot is bland but interesting to watch. The female protagonist is quite good to know and has her own personality. I recommend watching it.

It's like reading another's own voice

Yes, support this author It would be nice if the extra story had a female protagonist's first-person perspective.

It is difficult to write a first-person book, but the author did a good job [Thoughts]

The characters are well drawn. It's easy to understand the protagonist's emotions when you see them. The writing is very good.

A very good subject

Very good. Except for some details, other problems are not big. How should I put it? I wrote part of the situation of being depressed in the workplace. It's a pity that reality is not a book. There is no Su Ning in reality.

So will Lin Xue slap Zhou Yang in the face later? I can't stand these two [smile] I hope it's less toxic, and I should be fine just writing a sweet article and having fun.

Some people say that the male protagonist is very tacky, but I don't think so. This novel actually reflects the psychology of ordinary workers very realistically. It may be that it is too undramatic, so it was given a low score.

The plot arrangement is reasonable, and there are no surprises in the whole book. It is one of the few books that I can read on Tomato.

It really feels very good-looking and not mindless.

Very good book. The emotional lines are very delicately written. The protagonist's state is also very real.

It's good-looking, tenant style, the heroine is pretty good, and the writing is pretty good

Not bad, not bad, very good. The sweet and cruel plot makes it more attractive to watch.

The author is probably a single female protagonist. It's pretty good, I really like the heroine design. Male protagonist, please think about it quickly.

Not bad. Overall it looks okay. It's pretty and interesting.

Come on, come on, come on

Good, good, good

I think it's pretty good, come on!

It's a bit poisonous at the front, but it's okay

I see you are still chasing after me now