My Overpowered Sisters Spoil Me Rotten

Still 5 stars for encouragement. When I read Chapter 6, I felt very childish, like a fantasy I had in middle school and high school. It's understandable that I would have had the same fantasy at that time, but the writing style was a bit too awkward. The first is that the appearance of the male protagonist and the four female protagonists is not explained; the second is that the writing style makes people not get involved, it is understandable that he is an Asasi male protagonist, but the impression is not very good; the third is that the identities of the four female protagonists are revealed too quickly, although they can all guess what is going on, but you directly explain it at the beginning of the chapter, and then there is nothing to see at the end, and it is just a drama; fourth, you do not describe the time when you first meet the four female protagonists and interact with them, I think this That's what everyone wants to see; fifth, there is no yandere character (maybe you want to write about slowly turning into a yandere). If it is a yandere, the insect queen will probably control the insect to eat the person who breaks the door, and then control the insect to break the door so that the male protagonist and the insect fight together. Then the little girl comes out to protect the male protagonist and is deliberately injured to make the male protagonist feel sorry for him. With the male protagonist holding her, she breathes heavily and smiles condescendingly at the other three. I think this is quite acceptable.

The male protagonist suffers throughout the whole process, and then several female protagonists silently support him from behind. Is this also called pampering? 🤭🤭

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In summary, although the chapters are not finished, they are forced to be sensational and all kinds of clichés are used. I know you want to express the feelings of a little girl and a boss, but there is no need to describe it in every chapter. It is very uncomfortable to read, and it has a childish taste. From the beginning to the end, I basically don't know what kind of doting is it? All I saw was a poor boy who was kept in the dark and forced to work 🙂

Very nice 👍

Too watery, a lot of useless descriptions

I summarized the following six points about this book...

It is true and objective, and the description structure is clear.

Not bad, everyone loves me sickly

Created by AI? Feeling so peaceful