I Became an Orphan at the Beginning of the Beast Control and I Will Turn Everything Around

Not bad, worthy of 5 stars, the next popular work. However, the lack of smooth writing is what affects my perception the most. Gorgeous vocabulary is not as good as concise language, and the author's use of related words has a big problem. You can read several literary works, excluding poetry and individual chapters, and you can correct it without much reading. Another issue is the positioning of the author. This is rarely mentioned, but this novel may have such a problem. The work "Two Men" eliminates many readers of male videos, leaving readers who are very sticky and don't like the exciting plots, and rarely abandon the book because it is not exciting enough. But I am very fond of character creation, and I may have some requirements for emotional scenes. More importantly, I try not to make mistakes. Avoid big thunder and small thunder, and use tactful language. Don't think that thunder and small thunder are not a problem. High stickiness corresponds to high requirements, and stepping on thunder is the key. I only read a few and will add the rest later.

Give yourself a five-star review and thank you for your support.

I feel that the talent [Natural Affinity] does not live up to its name. It is called natural but it does not mean natural. It consumes the resources between heaven, earth and nature without any blessing or feedback to nature. Will this constant extraction eventually lead to the depletion of the world's spiritual power, or will it trigger a natural reaction on the planet and cause a large-scale natural disaster? It is better for this talent to assist natural evolution to a certain extent. Connect the spiritual power into a line to resonate with the mountains, rivers and trees, and let each tree and grass form a matrix to perform fully automatic auxiliary training for the protagonist. Every time nature is damaged, the invisible will of the planet will forcibly increase the luck of the owner of this talent. I was stabbed in the back by others, so I came back to read this book that I have had for who knows how long.

I came across a good book and thought it would be fun to read. But I clicked on the table of contents and saw that you only had 27 pictures. Author, do you know how I felt when I read Chapter 27? I wanted to lock you in a small dark room right away and type. If you don't type, you won't be given food.

Why are so few people reading such a beautiful book?

The two male protagonists who control beasts (who I consider to be very good) are not brainless sweet text and invincible flow, and they grow and grow with each other step by step. So, can you post 50 more pictures to see how strong it is? The author is great

I really like it. It's been a long time since I've seen a story about two male protagonists fighting beasts. The ones I've seen before were all written by people around me. This is the first time I saw it on Tomato. I hope the author can write it to the end and not stop updating. [Cover your face] [Cover your face] [Cover your face] [Cover your face] [Eat melon] [Eat melon] [Eat melon] [Eat melon] Come on! ! ! [Love][Love][Love][Love]

There are more than 4,000 words a day, and occasionally 6,000. Do you dare to update 10,000 words a day? Scared me to death [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart]

How can I put it, the first few pictures were really not very good. It may make people want to abandon the article, but in fact, it can make people want to read it after reading it. And the writing style can also be [laughing] [sending heart] [love] (please don't scold me if you think it's wrong)

It's a bit like a book I read before. It also chose the poison type. The contract beast is also a purple scorpion. It is also a dual genius and dual male protagonists who fell in love in the previous life.

It's quite good-looking, but the expressiveness is a bit lacking. There are too many qualifying sentences, and it makes you easily tired after watching it for a long time. The performance of the character is not very outstanding, and I can't see the strong charm of the character, but I still like Ah Feng very much👏 I feel like Ah Feng stretched himself too tight in the early stage, and his usual image is calm and deep, which made me forget that he also has a lively side. I hope the author can write about interesting daily life, I still want to see Ah Feng's lively and bad side🥺 Watch the progress Chapter 65

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To be honest, what the author wrote is really beautiful. The character of the protagonist is very charming, the plot is actually very smooth in Tomato, and the battle scenes are also described with passion. The relationship line is indeed a bit sparse and not enough to watch, but the two of them get along very well. My favorite content is when Lu Feng upgrades his family and watches his daily life, which is really healing. Moreover, there are really very few animal-taming stories in Tomato, and very few good-looking ones, so this novel written by the author has a rare online plot, and it is also good in other aspects. Unfortunately, updates have been discontinued and my previous account is no longer available. It took me a long time to find this novel. Although the reading time is not as long as before, it is still good to see. It's a pity that the author stopped updating for a long time, a very long time. It's been there since she stopped updating, and now I can't wait any longer. Alas, the author promised not to stop updating, and I believed her. I always thought something was wrong, so I didn't update, but now I really can't wait any longer. I can remember parts of the plot, but there are also a lot that I can't remember. If someone sees this novel, they can accept the author's discontinuation. If they just want to have a brief look at it, they can give it a try. If they cannot accept it, they can leave it out. Dear author, see you soon.

My intuition tells me that I have read this book. The previous one seems to be still on my bookshelf. Is the cover of the one that was taken off the shelf last time the same as the current one? The last one seems to have a system? To be honest, I feel that DaDa's writing is better now, which really attracts me. Other books on beast control are almost boring, so this is the only one that made me fall in love with it so much! I really like the characters of Gong Shou written by the author. Come on, Da Da, and you must stick to it!

It's very interesting. Reading this novel feels like reading early male videos and hot-blooded comics. I really like the career line of the protagonist. I like this kind of novel about working hard for oneself and fighting for the future. I like Liu Xiaodong and Mo Sha in the article. This group portrait is very beautiful. Come on author! [Send heart][Love] I like this book and wish the author this book will become popular as soon as possible! [Like][Love]

This one is more plot-heavy and feels more suitable for male videos. Generally speaking, the relationship between female channel hosts is different. But it's not bad, please give the author a boost.

It's good to read, but author, your previous article has some settings that conflict with the later article. For example, the entry into the room. The previous article has no proficiency in this at all. And sometimes the transitions feel a bit stiff. Others are quite good. By the way, author, is the protagonist only capable of poisonous beasts? Doesn't he accept other types of animals? Release it quickly [I'm about to cry]

It's a very good book and worth recommending, but it's too little and it's really not enough to read [crying]

I just read it now, and I think it's to my liking. It's a story with two male protagonists, but it's not written in a feminine way. This type of novel with two male protagonists is really rare [crying] [crying] [crying] I must support the author.

It's good-looking, the growth plot is mainstream, and Goldfinger is also very reasonable. There are too few updates at the moment. Why do you want me to encounter this book at this time? It really meets my point. Thank you for the author.

Author, author, you are finally resurrected. It is very beautiful and much improved compared to the last time. I hope this one will not be included again. I also have a small suggestion. When you write, don't repeat things many years in the future. It's okay to write once, but it will be very annoying if you write too much, as if you are conquering the little leaves behind. I feel like it would be better if it was repaired

Although the other male protagonist does not appear much (there is little plot, for now), it is still very interesting and worth investing in (the growth story of the protagonist)!

Why! Why! ! Why didn't we meet at the end? ! ! ! ! !

Well written in big letters [adoration]

Meow, meow, meow, madam, I won't allow anyone to disobey [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] Teacher, teacher, even if you go to school, I will still use the backup machine to support you. Where can I find a wife with a 10,000-word chapter?

There are a lot of words that can be "chewed" for a long time

So far, I personally think it's pretty good. Good luck, author✊

Great author, I started reading it in February. I had to take the high school entrance exam, so I didn't use my phone for four months. But I really like this book you wrote. After I came back from the high school entrance exam, there were only a few dozen chapters. Please continue to update. I really like it. Please don't give up.

It's pretty good, but the number of words is too few, but it doesn't matter. If it becomes popular, I will be the gold-rich old fan [shy]

It's very interesting. There are very few two-male protagonists who control beasts.