I, the Extraterrestrial Demon

I might withdraw it now and look at it later when I have time. The writing is a bit complicated, which I think is the main problem. There are probably two types of people who come to read this book. One type read the title and wanted to read the "Tianmowen"; the other type read the comment area and wanted to read the group portrait article. Obviously this is not a "demon book" (you don't really think it is "demon", right?), So first of all, this title will naturally arouse dissatisfaction among a group of readers who have been reading for half an hour, and it is recommended that it be changed in the future. However, after all, the writing is still very good. There should be many readers who were "cheated" into it. After reading the first volume, they found it good and decided to stay. Then, Volume 2 appears. It's not that the second volume is not well written. Judging from the current situation (after reading four chapters), the second volume is probably also well written. But the problem is that the style of the second volume is completely different from the first volume. The first volume is half suspense, half group portrait, half behind-the-scenes story, and the second volume suddenly turns into half upgrade, half conspiracy novel... What do you think of the large number of readers who, after reading the first volume, found that they clicked, and decided to read on with joy? It's not that the writing is bad, these two volumes are most likely well written. The problem is that the overlap in the audience groups of the writing style of the two volumes is very low [face covering], so another group of potential readers has slipped away (I am hesitating whether to leave)... The author writes so freely... It can be seen that the author's skills are very good. His skills are so good that he can play with completely different writing styles. He is really strong. But my suggestion is: you write two books. The problem with this book is that it lacks an anchor to tie the stories in different styles together. The one who serves as this anchor is undoubtedly the protagonist. However, the first volume is very short and the protagonist's role is very sparse. You didn't let the readers have a "sense of belonging" to the protagonist, and you didn't let the readers' perspective focus on the protagonist. At least, after I finished the first volume, I focused on the world of suspense, magic, and restraint, not the protagonist. In this case, the sudden change of writing style makes it difficult for people to read it naturally [face covering] My sincere suggestion to the author: Otherwise, stop the subsequent story advancement and write "Volume 0", intuitively describing the protagonist, so that readers can first have a "sense of belonging" with the protagonist, and then expand into the multi-dimensional world. The effect will be much better (I think the multi-dimensional world should be written like this). I think that when writing about a diverse world, you must first carve the "anchor" into people's hearts. Otherwise, it would be better to divide it into several books [face covering] Just purple. (It's a pity that it's the first world. I searched the full text for Xi Lun and found that there was basically no drama in the later part. Then I scrolled through the comment area and found out that the author wanted to write but didn't write [facepalm] three hundred chapters [facepalm]. I really felt it was a pity. Even if you write a separate book about that world, many people will like to read it, at least I will. Otherwise, you can write half of it alone, please🙏🏻)

It's really good-looking. It's a group portrait. The protagonist has very few scenes, but the character creation is really good, and the writing style is quite comfortable. However, there are a lot of names, and there is no background introduction for each world. It is sometimes confusing to watch. The scene jumps are a bit confusing because there are no paragraph breaks. I can type twice. A paragraph break would be fine, but without background introduction, it does have a strong sense of immersion. The rhythm of the story is relatively compact and not draggy. It is refreshing enough. The climax of the story is also quite interesting. The ending is not bad. It is a bit like an infinite stream. You can slowly watch the unfolding of the world view. The experience is not bad. Overall, it is really good to watch.

Shennong. . . The protagonist is a purebred fun-loving man, semi-invincible. Some of the details show the author's good literary skills, and the characters all stand up. To be honest, this is considered a high-quality product next door. When I put it on Tomato, no one looked at it. It is probably due to the author's unstable economic status update.

I think the best thing about this book is that the author's changes in the characters' psychology are mostly displayed through dialogue and changes in the characters' behaviors, rather than in many other novels that use a large number of descriptions of psychological activities or characters talking to themselves. Therefore, the characters are much more full and vivid. There are no big loopholes in the logic of the book. It is a masterpiece.

Wc, it turns out to be a magical book that coexists in western fantasy and fantasy in the new era. I recognized the plot of fast travel between different worlds.

This is a group portrait novel with one character as the main point of view traveling through a small time. These small worlds are okay. Although the first two are a little too stretched, the latter ones are not bad. The only pity is that the author's update time and frequency are not stable. I just hope that the author will not be too obsessed with traveling through completely different worlds, and can write plots of the same type with different story backgrounds. For example, if they are both martial arts, there will be vendettas, official uniforms and martial arts fight each other, feuds between sects, and rookies' adventures. Too much pursuit of different world views will lead to nothing to write in the future. The most important thing for a unit drama is whether the storyline is exciting.

There is nothing to say about the writing style, which is a rare gold in Rotten Tomatoes. However, each change is a world of different styles, which brings a strong sense of fragmentation to the readers. It is equivalent to the author passively screening readers again and again without knowing it. After all, there are always people who don't like certain types of writing. The storytelling of the first two worlds is eye-catching, but the third cyber world has a clear sense of fragmentation compared to the previous ones. It's not that it's not good. Readers who can accept relatively fast wear and like to experience different styles will like it. Of course, it's hard to agree with everyone, but I personally can't wait to watch the third cyber world.

It's very beautiful. Is it unlimited streaming? The angle is very unique and the imagination is really good. The author has a wide range of topics and can write something very unique in basically every article. Readers who are not comfortable reading it for the first time can try it and read more later.

This unlimited stream is really good. It is the second one that I should collect and read again. Although I don't know what will happen next, the witch detective and the overseas general in the second world at the beginning are really good. The plot of the protagonist who is invincible but not completely invincible really attracted me.

Jazz's good book is not so much a record of the monsters hunting for food in the outer world, but a moment when human stars shine. The first two volumes are relatively dull, mainly for novelty. Apart from being too long, the third volume is completely getting better. The shining points of Chu Yiming's humanity are completely portrayed by the author. I hope the results will get better and better.

Ah, there will be no plot about Celine later. I am disappointed and left.

It's a pity that I discovered this great book too early. I like this kind of astronomy that travels alone without subordinates. Is there no heroine? Ah, I personally like to have no heroine and no subordinates. If there is a heroine, please let me know.

It's very good. Each volume is very unique and the characters are well developed. Each volume has characters that I particularly like.

The first fifteen chapters establish the great and upright characters of many people. The author has something. However, the second story does seem a bit longer in comparison. Maybe it's because the first one is too concise?

A very recommended novel Look at the author's introduction and there is a heroine at the end In fact, one male protagonist is enough [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

Great God, your level is not that of a noob at all.

It's not funny, it's weird, it's so strange [Laughing and crying] The plot is very fresh, each character has their own position, the protagonist is not a nanny wearing the skin of a demon, although he is said to be a "savior" in disguise, the character whose account should be terminated will still be terminated, the force value is very good, I hope I won't do a loss-making business in the future [laughing]

Personally I think this is a great book, a bit like "Trafford Buyers Club". This Lord Demon is more like a tool to show some kind of humanity.

Overall, I feel pretty good in 🍅

Tomato has few books that suit my taste, but as for the author, he won't be in the palace, right?

It doesn't make sense. Such a good book has so few points. Does the Tomato score depend entirely on buying it? [What]

Many people may not be used to it. This book is a quasi-infinite flow group portrait novel. It is basically an original or quasi-original world. The main line of each world will not revolve around the protagonist. Instead, each world has a protagonist group in each world. Basically, after a story describes the world view through the protagonist group, the protagonist will come out to wrap up the story, and it will cycle like this.

Full marks, the best product in Shishan, very suitable for taste

The characters are good, the protagonist has a good personality, the world view is quite novel, and the plot is large, but the updates are too slow, so I can only deduct one star.

I like to read this kind of books that are clearly divided into volumes. The writing is very good for my taste. I hope the author can support himself by writing books as soon as possible.

The writing is very good. I like the biography of a person with a gentle heart.

It's rare for Tomato to have top-notch writing and storylines. Also, did the author set the tag of your book like this on purpose? I feel like your book could be placed in the fantasy tag, so the traffic might be higher.

Very good, five-star praise

Beautiful and heartwarming.

Good books are still not popular