Witch Containment Begins with My Dim-Witted Childhood Friend

Well, I don't like tattoos. If the Red Pine Witch is one of the heroines, I hope it's a tattoo sticker . . . Don't knot your wings, women's green is also green

There is imagination and expansion. However, urban superpowers are quite sensitive and may be blocked someday. Containing witches is the core selling point of your book, and the book's introduction also revolves around containing witches. Then your plot protagonist pushes and shoves the witch, without any strong subjective desire to take in the witch. You have completely abandoned the core selling point. How can you give readers a sense of security? Still no big climax. The gains are there, but there is no feedback. If no one praises the protagonist, then the story will only be depressing without the feeling of release, or the release will never be enough. It's a feeling of giving up the pleasure of pretending to be slapped in the face. Moreover, the protagonist's combat power is vague, and readers cannot tell whether it is a level-up challenge or not. Your vague combat power is equivalent to completely giving up the thrill of leapfrogging challenges. There is no upgrade path and no features at each level. It's equivalent to giving up the thrill of upgrading. Sabcdef, you have written the level, but this level has no positioning. For example, if you write about a C-level monster, you never write down the degree of damage when you guide it. Readers know that it is a C-level monster and cannot imagine the strength of a C-level monster. It is a C-level monster anyway. You don't write about other people fighting monsters. Anyway, the seven C-level contractors can contain C-level monsters, so everyone doesn't know the strength of the C-level contractors. As you write, even if you say that ordinary people defeat C-class, it will not make people feel happy, because no one knows the strength of C-class.

The setting is very good, the plot is also good, and basically there is no poisonous point. Please give me more support, author 👍 The pace is too slow. The core element is to contain the witch. There is only one witch in this book for over 100 chapters. It has not yet contained the deer. She has been with you for as long as you have been dragging her out. I am really convinced. The pace is too slow, I feel impatient to read it, and it keeps digging holes. The author may have wanted to write a long story, but at present, it seems that if the pace does not speed up, people will finish it. It will be difficult for the author to stick to this book until the later stages of writing.

After looking around, I feel like Cardcaptor Sakura. It's just that Sakura was replaced by a man, and Cardcaptor was replaced by a witch. Even the original card in Sakura that contained the Clow card was a magic book, and the sealed beast card is also equivalent to the elf in the book.

Why is the book so beautiful and rated so low? This is the only book that I look forward to every day. Some people may think that the male protagonist is a eunuch, but I think that as the female protagonist said, there is a sense of "the beauty of good things that will come to pass". A bit of a sour and sweet feeling of love. It feels like the male protagonist can interact with every witch. I hope the author will work hard.

Don't throw away the core selling point of the witch, and don't be too pretentious when accepting girls. The back is so-so

In one sentence, the three views are upright, no swordsmanship, quite sweet, the harem, the language is civilized (praise, emphasis on praise), very worth watching

I saw the latest chapter, please give it a good review. There are already many girls gathered around the protagonist. I haven't confused the girls yet. This is mainly because I watched it in one sitting, but it also shows that the author's writing is very good.

It feels like it's a reference to "The World of Monsters without Color", and the setting looks quite familiar. But the character design is quite good, but I feel that the status of the shelter is quite low. He has extraordinary abilities, but is not very impressive.

I've read five chapters, come on, author So far, I still like it very much. The world view setting is relatively novel. Of course, what attracts me most is the relationship between the protagonist and the heroine. I hope it can maintain pure love. I feel like it can attract a lot of lonely people like me