Containment of Witches Starts with Mentally Retarded Childhood Sweetheart

Well, I don't like tattoos. If the Red Pine Witch is one of the heroines, I hope it's a tattoo sticker . . . Don't knot your wings, women's green is also green

There is imagination and expansion. However, urban superpowers are quite sensitive and may be blocked someday. Containing witches is the core selling point of your book, and the book's introduction also revolves around containing witches. Then your plot protagonist pushes and shoves the witch, without any strong subjective desire to take in the witch. You have completely abandoned the core selling point. How can you give readers a sense of security? Still no big climax. The gains are there, but there is no feedback. If no one praises the protagonist, then the story will only be depressing without the feeling of release, or the release will never be enough. It's a feeling of giving up the pleasure of pretending to be slapped in the face. Moreover, the protagonist's combat power is vague, and readers cannot tell whether it is a level-up challenge or not. Your vague combat power is equivalent to completely giving up the thrill of leapfrogging challenges. There is no upgrade path and no features at each level. It's equivalent to giving up the thrill of upgrading. Sabcdef, you have written the level, but this level has no positioning. For example, if you write about a C-level monster, you never write down the degree of damage when you guide it. Readers know that it is a C-level monster and cannot imagine the strength of a C-level monster. It is a C-level monster anyway. You don't write about other people fighting monsters. Anyway, the seven C-level contractors can contain C-level monsters, so everyone doesn't know the strength of the C-level contractors. As you write, even if you say that ordinary people defeat C-class, it will not make people feel happy, because no one knows the strength of C-class.

The setting is very good, the plot is also good, and basically there is no poisonous point. Please give me more support, author [like] The pace is too slow. The core element is to contain the witch. There is only one witch in this book for over 100 chapters. It has not yet contained the deer. She has been with you for as long as you have been dragging her out. I am really convinced. The pace is too slow, I feel impatient to read it, and it keeps digging holes. The author may have wanted to write a long story, but at present, it seems that if the pace does not speed up, people will finish it. It will be difficult for the author to stick to this book until the later stages of writing.

After looking around, I feel like Cardcaptor Sakura. It's just that Sakura was replaced by a man, and Cardcaptor was replaced by a witch. Even the original card in Sakura that contained the Clow card was a magic book, and the sealed beast card is also equivalent to the elf in the book.

Don't throw away the core selling point of the witch, and don't be too pretentious when accepting girls. The back is so-so

In one sentence, the three views are upright, no swordsmanship, quite sweet, the harem, the language is civilized (praise, emphasis on praise), very worth watching

Why is the book so beautiful and rated so low? This is the only book that I look forward to every day. Some people may think that the male protagonist is a eunuch, but I think that as the female protagonist said, there is a sense of "the beauty of good things that will come to pass". A bit of a sour and sweet feeling of love. It feels like the male protagonist can interact with every witch. I hope the author will work hard.

I saw the latest chapter, please give it a good review. There are already many girls gathered around the protagonist. I haven't confused the girls yet. This is mainly because I watched it in one sitting, but it also shows that the author's writing is very good.

It feels like it's a reference to "The World of Monsters without Color", and the setting looks quite familiar. But the character design is quite good, but I feel that the status of the shelter is quite low. He has extraordinary abilities, but is not very impressive.

I've read five chapters, come on, author So far, I still like it very much. The world view setting is relatively novel. Of course, what attracts me most is the relationship between the protagonist and the heroine. I hope it can maintain pure love. I feel like it can attract a lot of lonely people like me

How to put it this way, the plot structure and settings are very interesting, but it may be a problem with the author's writing skills, and many plots seem dull.

I've read Chapter 15. You can read it when you don't have any books, but I don't think I can read it or eat it. 😁😁😁

Generally speaking, it is relatively clear, at least it is not a traditional business article. I support it with five stars. I hope it will not disappoint me. [Praise]

A work with considerable potential, the entire script looks like a hot-blooded comic, and it feels well-organized. The sense of camera and rhythm are very good, and the writing level is also online. It is not top-notch, but it is better than about 60% to 70% of authors.

Good looking, good luck to the author

It looks good, but the rating is a bit low. Then again, the rating was given too early. The male protagonist knew that he was having a holiday with an evil organization and didn't take all the "equipment" with him when he went out, causing him to almost die. Deduct one star for poison points Read again and comment again. Zhao laughed, and the mental wall blocked the attack but could not stop the bottle.

Lawful good, holy mother, too reckless, so many high-end games can be a little arrogant. If you are too kind to others, you can be cruel F is just the protagonist's level, S is the protagonist's combat power. We don't say killing to stop killing, but it is not an exaggeration to give a bigger lesson to the person or thing who wants to kill the protagonist, such as social death, losing power or deposing the opponent.

For me, as of Chapter 102, there is nothing toxic about it. The protagonist's outlook on life is relatively normal, and he doesn't have a character that is bitter, hateful, or hostile to the world. A relaxing and novel online novel. I don't know why everyone has to say "haha" when talking.

The protagonist is too kind but has a bad reputation [eat melon], so I deducted one star, but otherwise it's okay.

To be honest, why does a book with this very interesting subject have such a low rating?

Not bad, I like it very much

Pretty good.

Miao Miao Miao Miao Miao Miao Miao Miao Miao Miao Miao Miao Miao Miao Miao Miao Miao Miao [Sneaky laugh]

The emotional line is sweet and the plot is very imaginative. It is quite comfortable to watch in one sitting. If you can accept this world view setting, it is worth watching. I haven't watched it recently, and I can't stand it. I feel that there are too many horizontal expansions, and the concepts and worldviews introduced are a bit too complicated.

Seeing it now, my impression is still very good. It deserves a five-star rating. In my opinion, there are no particularly big poisonous points. Small flaws are acceptable. I hope I won't be a eunuch, hahaha.

Play the long game and catch the big book. Jpg Beautiful, five stars for you

Chapters 4 and 5 tell me, to be exaggerated, with platinum resources, let's see how to control the strength later.

It's okay, why don't you rate it?

The writing is good and the setting is imaginative.

The future is promising, the masterpiece is scheduled