Elden Ring: The Fall of a King

Generally speaking, for one, it is illogical for Torina to appear too early. Many fans like to have the protagonist meet Torina at the beginning (like a human being, but at least he saw her in a dream). However, according to the original timeline, it is still unclear whether Mikaela has gone to the Shadow Land at this time, and Torina, as a saint, must be protected by guards. It makes no sense for the protagonist to meet her casually. Secondly, the automatic repair of buildings goes against the logic of the original work. In the game, monsters are refreshed because they cannot die, but buildings will not be restored after being destroyed - otherwise there would not be so many ruins. The author writes that "the building next to it is slowly returning to its original state", which is obviously a self-inflicted mistake. Thirdly, the attribution of the transmission points of the third and fourth bell towers is wrong. There is no other way to reach the King's Chapel except the teleport point at the Four Bell Towers. The Four Bell Tower is located in Lienia, and there are Cuckoo Knight and Kallia Troll Knight (Phantom) next to it, indicating that this area does not fall within the sphere of influence of Gryk. It is simply unrealistic to take the people there back to have their limbs repaired. Fourth, the term "evil omen demon" is wrong. The game text clearly states that the "bad omen demons" repel the king's coalition forces, and Baoji also said that the blessing king has never shown his face. The author directly made Menggert call himself "the current king of Rodel", which not only conflicts with the setting of "never shown", but also does not make it clear who the name "Evil Omen Demon" belongs to. Fifth, the naming history of the Kaliya royal family is confusing. Kallia was named after Queen Full Moon unified the academy. Before that, it should have been called "Moon Royal Family". For details, please see the Ruins of the Moon People and the Ruins of the Moon Nobles (it is not completely guaranteed, the game does not clearly explain what the previous Kallia was called)