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Let me give you a score first. The idea is very good and the plot arrangement is also good. There is only one beginning without cuckold betrayal. I can declare that it surpasses 90% of similar articles written by Tomato [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]

After reading it, overall it's not bad, but the idea is okay. But there is one problem. Your words and wording and sentences can be checked more to make sure there are no minor mistakes.

Come on, online games are so rare~

I usually give five stars to books that no one reads, so don't die [face covering]

The one with the brain is really,

It smells like before, I miss it

It's quite interesting, come on

Just to kill time

The writing is fluent and good, verified

Rigorous data structure design Food and grass, worth seeing

It's okay, the blanket is gone, come on

Very well written, I love reading it

Check inventory shortages

Good. I don't know what will happen later. It's ok for now

It's well written but too short.

Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this [smile]

The writing is very good, but it's not watery either. Come on.

It will be quite interesting to read later. Good luck, author.

It's okay. I read it in one go. It's quite interesting. I hope the author will update it soon and not stop updating it. By the way, will Little Tiger be the heroine?

It's well written and can be read, but there are some minor flaws, which I will slowly make up for later.

The plot of Soul 15 is okay. I have to say that the shortcoming is that the writing style is not enough, and it cannot express the burning feeling. That paragraph will be interesting if it is written in a very hot and embarrassing way.